ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Ah, that makes sense (:
And your welcome! (: reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Hello again (:
I really like your story so far, and the first part of the plot is really good (: Just some things I wanna say though:
During the first chapter, the main person in the story is obviously quite famous, but you didn't make it clear who this person is exactly - but that could be part of your plot though to make it all a mystery of who this person is, which is actually really clever (:
Also, in the second chapter when she starts cutting, I think you could have just said a little bit of why she's doing it, like not full out details, but just a little explanation. Again, you might want this as a complete mystery as you go through the story :)
But yeah, it seems like you've thought this out quite well and it's really original from setting it around new years eve :) Good luck on writing! :D reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Thank you! :D
Yeah sure, I'll look now (: reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Thank you for the comment on my story ♥ reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Thanks for the comment, it means a lot (: ♥ reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Hello Steve (:
This probably wont stand out amongst all the other comments, but whenever I sign out of Witty on this account and my other one, the next day, my picture always turns back to my old one. Is there any way I can fix this?
Thanks (: reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
You're welcome! And thank you :D reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Helloo (: Just letting you know that there's a new chapter up (: reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Hey, I think the layout is all screwed up so the follow button isn't working properly :/ I'll get a new layout soon anyway (:
Until I get the new layout, I will leave a comment on your page so you know when a chapter is up (:
Thank you for reading ♥ reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Hey, I've only just seen your comment on one of my story parts as I've only just been able to get on..and wow, you're addicted to it? I never really thought people would like it that much:S But thanks for the comment (: reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Hey, just wanted to say that your stories are amazing (: You're a really talented writer! :') reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
The comment you made on the latest part of my story actually made me smile (: Thank you! And I'll definitely try to keep posting parts whenever I can(: reply
ForeverBelieving
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1 decade ago
Change of plan...I got bored so I put another one up :') reply
ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Ah, that makes sense (:
And your welcome! (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Hello again (:
I really like your story so far, and the first part of the plot is really good (: Just some things I wanna say though:
During the first chapter, the main person in the story is obviously quite famous, but you didn't make it clear who this person is exactly - but that could be part of your plot though to make it all a mystery of who this person is, which is actually really clever (:
Also, in the second chapter when she starts cutting, I think you could have just said a little bit of why she's doing it, like not full out details, but just a little explanation. Again, you might want this as a complete mystery as you go through the story :)
But yeah, it seems like you've thought this out quite well and it's really original from setting it around new years eve :) Good luck on writing! :D
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Thank you! :D
Yeah sure, I'll look now (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Thank you for the comment on my story ♥
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Thanks for the comment, it means a lot (: ♥
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Hello Steve (:
This probably wont stand out amongst all the other comments, but whenever I sign out of Witty on this account and my other one, the next day, my picture always turns back to my old one. Is there any way I can fix this?
Thanks (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
You're welcome! And thank you :D
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Aha, thank you! :')
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Helloo (: Just letting you know that there's a new chapter up (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Hey, I think the layout is all screwed up so the follow button isn't working properly :/ I'll get a new layout soon anyway (:
Until I get the new layout, I will leave a comment on your page so you know when a chapter is up (:
Thank you for reading ♥
reply
ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Hey, I've only just seen your comment on one of my story parts as I've only just been able to get on..and wow, you're addicted to it? I never really thought people would like it that much:S But thanks for the comment (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
The next part is up :D
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Pahaa, once it's up, I'll comment on here and let you know (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
I'm working on the next chapter now (: It might be up soon :D
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Ahaa, thank you (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Thank you :3
I might write another chapter tonight. If not, then tomorrow I will (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
You're welcome (:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Hey, just wanted to say that your stories are amazing (: You're a really talented writer! :')
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
The comment you made on the latest part of my story actually made me smile (: Thank you! And I'll definitely try to keep posting parts whenever I can(:
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ForeverBelieving · 1 decade ago
Change of plan...I got bored so I put another one up :')
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