skilletbiscuit · 1 decade ago
Yup. That sounds really goo!
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skilletbiscuit · 1 decade ago
Good*
Goo sounds weird there.
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ReonnaLeigh · 1 decade ago
thanks :) and goo does sound weird.
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planetxar_the_1st · 1 decade ago
Would read and will read! Tell me More!!!
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ReonnaLeigh · 1 decade ago
what do you want to know?
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beebessey · 1 decade ago
I would definitely read that. It sounds amazing as long as there is a well defined reason how he gets to come back and why he has the chance to die for her in the first place. (sorry if you didn't want the extra input it's hard being a writer and not putting in opinions)
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ReonnaLeigh · 1 decade ago
i welcome any input! and there is going to be a reason for his second chance and a good reason he died. i want to have the book bulid up to it though. like foreshadow the reasons. also if you have any more input you should tell me ;)
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