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“So how does Ruby’s suicide have to with the topic of the assginment, Ms. Orpha?..Ms. Orpah?..MS. ORPHA!?” I look up to see my teacher. She is looking over my assignment. A three paged short story originally assigned to be about society’s fixation on perfection. I sigh, “Well, in the beginning her mother asks her what she wants to be when she’s older. Ruby answers dead. So therefore her mother’s oblivious ignorant attitude towards the topic resulted in Ruby’s death.” My teacher, Mrs. Burrows stands still for a moment but then furrows her eyebrows, “And so I ask what does suicide have to do with perfection.” I shake my head, “Suicide has everything to do with perfection. Ruby felt suffocated in a world where perfect was defined as the tall skinny blonde girls in magazines. Where perfect wasn’t the average girl she was. Where boys only like perfect girls. Not girls like her. In a world where she was far from perfect. In our society her cries for help were ignored because of her mother’s fixation on having the ‘perfect’ daughter, on having the perfect life. Ruby was a victim of society’s fixation on perfection.” Mrs. Burrows looks at me genuinely concerned, “Tommie, are you alright? Is there something going on?” I hide my wrists, fake a smile, and shake my head. She looks at me a little reluctantly then goes on to say, “Well, okay, but unfortunately that wasn’t what I had in mind about the assignment so I’m going to have to ask you to redo it.” I nod and then get up to collect my things. I am about to step out when Mrs. Burrows says, “If you ever want to talk, you know where to find me.” I mutter an okay and then head out the door, down the hallway making sure to hit all the locks, and out the main entrance. My name is Tommie Orpha, I am 15 years old and my mind is a dark twisted place.

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