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I once knew this girl
who had the brightest eyes
who wore tight pigtails
and would always look forward to the future
and had all the friends she needed.
 
I once knew this girl
who's eyes still shined
who would let her hair fall
and would look forward to most things
and had a good amount of friends.
 
I once knew this girl
who's eyes grew darker 
her hair became straight and fake
and she was very unmotivated
and her friends were making new friends.
 
I once knew this girl
who's eyes were dull
who gave up on doing her hair
because she had no energy
and seemed to only have one or two friends.
 
I once knew this girl
who's eyes we're always tear stained
and her hair was a mess
and she didn't care about her future anymore
because she had no one left.
 
I once knew this girl
but sadly she's gone now.

-My poem
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I once knew this girl who had the brightest eyes who wore tight

95 faves · 25 comments · Apr 11, 2013 9:39pm

reinventlove

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reinventlove


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poem · sad · depression · suicide · poems

🎀Anna🎀* · 1 decade ago
This is a really good poem! =)))
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TellitTotheFrogs* · 1 decade ago
Beautiful :)

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Thats_So_Amy* · 1 decade ago
This is AMAZING! I wish I could right this good! :)
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
Thanks girl :D
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desperado* · 1 decade ago
Omg wow I love this
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
Thank you so much ♥
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janinee1415 · 1 decade ago
Such a good poem ♥
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
Thank youu ♥
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alisonDB21 · 1 decade ago
This is an amazing poem. :]
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
Haha thanks :D
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alisonDB21 · 1 decade ago
You're welcome! :D
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
Is this true? :(
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
No it's not thankfully... I actually kind of based it off my own life.
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
Hopefully not the last two bits... please don't commit suicide.
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
I used to be suicidal, but I'm not anymore. Thats part of the reason I used the words "I used to know this girl" because my suicidal side is gone now. I'm back to being me, depressed, but still me.
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
That's good that you aren't suicidal anymore. I'm proud of you for growing out of it.
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
Thanks so much hun <3
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
I think that's the reason they say *commit* suicide. Because you don't just do it, you commit yourself to it. Completely. If you commit suicide, there's nothing you can do to reclaim yourself; you're already gone. It truly is a commitment.
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
That's actually a really great way of putting it, that's so true. :O
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
Thank you :)
I think I may make a quote about that hm what do you think
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
That'd be a really good quote. You should do it C:
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
Ok I'm getting tired I'm logging off now :)
Goodnight xx
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
did it :)
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reinventlove · 1 decade ago
I saw <3
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ToriRox16 · 1 decade ago
I shall!
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