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E p i l o g u e .
Carson's Point of View.

"Carson!" I heard my name being called from the living room.
"What's up." I asked as I found Avery.
"Could you watch him?" She asked, motioning to our son Christian.
"Sure." I smiled picking him up and sitting down on the couch.
Avery was attending to our twin girls who were 6 months old.
We named them Olivia and Emma, but Olivia was Liv for short.
Christian was 3, almost 4.
He had dark brown hair and Avery's bright bluish-green eyes.
Liv and Emma both had dirty blonde hair, but my green eyes.
We had decided to get married when Avery turned 20, which her parents found to be too young, but we knew that nothing could tear us apart.

We'd already faced and overcome too many problems.
Sure we had our fights, but none of them matter in the end.
I watched Avery tending to the girls as Christian began to fall asleep next to me.
"What?" She asked, noticing my stare.
"Nothing. Just I don't know, us." I sighed.
"What do you mean?" She asked.
"Just it's crazy. Everything we've been through in all these years."
She laughed a little. "You're telling me."
"But I guess it's a good thing in some ways." I mumbled.
"Oh like how." Avery asked sarcastically.
"Well I mean me being forgetten,

it just brought us closer, and showed that we can make it through anything life throws at us."


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Suckish Epilogue whoops
sorry but I just couldn't drag this story on anymore I actually really didn't like it that much
asilhdwkjdsfhifghrei but anyways
Thank you all so much for supporting me.
Leave me feedback on how you liked it(:
And should I keep writing?
If so, WHAT ABOUT! PLEASE I NEED INSPIRATION
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110 faves · 5 comments · Jan 31, 2013 7:30pm

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BeautifulLove09 · 1 decade ago
hmmm.....I think you should do one that's sort of....scary? I guess. Idk. I don't know what to tell you considering you've made amazing stories on your own. But i think it should be something that has to do with like suicide awarness. You know.... Have it be about a girl that harms herself, whether it be an eating disorder, or like cutting, and at the end make it have a lesson on not harming yourself. But if thats too strong, I recomend making it about a new girl starting a new life in the beginning, then add a "twist" to it :)
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keep_on_smiling · 1 decade ago
This story could have been longer buy the climax came too quickly, you should learn to make stories longer by making more events happen first but I liked this a lot :)
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*Eternally lost...** · 1 decade ago
I really liked this, mainly because my name is Olivia and I go by Liv!!!!!
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its_just_kaitlin · 1 decade ago
I really liked this! U should definatelyyy keep writing... Your good at love stories! (; idk mayb somthig bout a cheater? Idkkk
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wizard4238 · 1 decade ago
SO AWESOME, and sad to see it end :'(
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