110 faves · 5 comments · Jan 31, 2013 7:30pm
keep_on_smiling
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1 decade ago
This story could have been longer buy the climax came too quickly, you should learn to make stories longer by making more events happen first but I liked this a lot :)
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*Eternally lost...**
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1 decade ago
I really liked this, mainly because my name is Olivia and I go by Liv!!!!!
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its_just_kaitlin
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1 decade ago
I really liked this! U should definatelyyy keep writing... Your good at love stories! (; idk mayb somthig bout a cheater? Idkkk
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wizard4238
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1 decade ago
SO AWESOME, and sad to see it end :'(
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BeautifulLove09 · 1 decade ago
hmmm.....I think you should do one that's sort of....scary? I guess. Idk. I don't know what to tell you considering you've made amazing stories on your own. But i think it should be something that has to do with like suicide awarness. You know.... Have it be about a girl that harms herself, whether it be an eating disorder, or like cutting, and at the end make it have a lesson on not harming yourself. But if thats too strong, I recomend making it about a new girl starting a new life in the beginning, then add a "twist" to it :)
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