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I wrote a poem for my english class today. It had to be about a "Life Changing Event" I want to share it with you guys. Please feel free to tell me what you guys think(:
I remember that breezy September day oh so very crystal clearly. That one day that I felt so weak, miserable, and weary.
I now do not deny that my once content world was crashing down and falling apart. I finally decided to sew, mend, and fix my shattered glass heart.
I spoke a couple words, with teary filled eyes. My body was shaking as someone finally heard my pleading cries.
They never judged a single statement that I said, instead they lent a warm hand and told me “I am not your worst enemy; I am your best friend.”
I went back to my life with an enormous grin on my face. I no longer believed that I was alone, mislead, and misplaced.
Now I’m finally hearing the sound of my own laughter. Could this finally be it? Have I at last found my happily ever after?  ~Mia

(please do not steal, I worked really hard on this)
 
 
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I wrote a poem for my english class today. It had to be about

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abkamel* · 1 decade ago
Love it! The line "now I'm finally hearing the sound of my own laughter" is my favorite!
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beebessey · 1 decade ago
You're amazing
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Christina* · 1 decade ago
I loved it, :) some details to why you felt sad at first would be helpful though
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