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Lend Me Your Heart
Seventy

He stood there with his mouth open in shock, his expression unreadable with his mask covering his eyes.
He slowly shook his head, not saying a word for what seemed like forever.
“What?” I asked softly, wondering why he was suddenly acting so strange.
I swallowed nervously after another long pause of silence.
“Who are you?” I demanded.
“Cat got your tongue, mystery man?” JJ said from behind me, ripping of the man’s mask.
I gasped in surprise, my brow furrowing in confusion.
In front of me stood the most beautiful boy I’d ever seen in my life; he was so familiar with his bright, blue eyes and soft, black hair.
My breathing picked up significantly just looking at him.
It couldn’t be him.
It was impossible.
He was taller, his bone structure was more defined, and his muscles were bigger than they’d ever been.
My lips moved to say something, anything, but nothing came out.
“What the hell is going on?” JJ asked.
He said something else, but I didn’t catch it because the man engulfed me in a huge hug, kissing me on the top of my head over and over again.
“I never thought I’d see you again,” he said in a voice much deeper than I remember.
“Zach?” I squeaked into his chest, still not believing my eyes.
What if I was going into shock?
What if this was a side effect of depression?
What if I was being delusional?
Nothing seemed real at all.
“Yeah,” he said simply, kissing my head again, breathing in the scent of my hair.
“Oh my god,” I choked, my voice unsteady.
“Come on,” he said, smiling hugely, taking my hand and pulling me out of the party.
“H-Hey!” I heard JJ call. “Where is he taking you, Layne?”
I turned back to my best friend, shooting him a big, genuine smile and mouthed, “It’s him.”
JJ stopped dead in his tracks and smiled back at me, laughing in amazement.
I started laughing, too.
He started chuckling along with me.
We laughed in disbelief, together, down one four flights of stairs, towards the bottom of the apartment building.
When we reached the lobby, he pulled me to the side of the staircase and shoved me up against the wall, looking into my green eyes with his shiny, blue ones, still laughing hysterically.
He put his head close to mine so our foreheads were touching.
I could smell his sweet breath through his smile and just inhaled his scent, wrapping my arms around his neck.
I laughed some more until his lips crashed against mine, causing my heart to stop dead in my chest.
My stomach was tight with feelings I can’t even start to explain; feelings of happiness, pain, longing, and especially love.
We were eager and passionate against each other, but when we started getting looks from the other people in the lobby, we pulled apart, smiling wildly.
He took my hand again as we started towards the streets of Boston.
“Harvard?” he asked, raising an eyebrow.
“You guessed it,” I shrugged, wrapping my hands around his upper arm. “You got a lot bigger.”
He was a very, very attractive man now (emphasis on the man).
“Football,” he laughed in his new, deep voice that I still wasn’t used to yet.
I tugged on his arm in the middle of the sidewalk, stopping him in his tracks just so I could kiss him again.
“You were right,” I whispered, looking up into his eyes. “About being meant for each other.”
He didn’t say anything for a few seconds, looking up at the starry night sky.
Then, he looked back down at me and licked his lips.
“Forever?” he asked.
“Forever,” I nodded.
I clutched the necklace that had been locked around me for the past year and a half and smiled at him again.
This was our forever, and not anything or anyone was going to get in our way.
 
The End.


So, yeah. That's the end and I hoped you loved it <3 Also,  LOL. LOVED THE COMMENTS ON THE LAST ONE, GUYS. 
 
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kelsey15mcnamara · 1 decade ago
omg this story was so perfect!!!
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Cloudsinthesky · 1 decade ago
SEQUEL PLEASE
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kelly* · 1 decade ago
please write a sequel can't get enough of the characters <3
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caseycullinane · 1 decade ago
OMG this story was amazing!!! Honestly I couldn't stop reading it!! Please do a sequel or and epilogue!! This was truly amazing!
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Cailym · 1 decade ago
Awwhh thats sooo cute!! you have to make another story! I am in Love with your writing!!
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Dakota398 · 1 decade ago
I spent the last three days reading this.
AMAZING.
Are you going to make a sequel or an epilogue?
I think you should put it on wattpad too.
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takemetoneverland* · 1 decade ago
Nooo , that is not the end </3 Make a sequel ?? Pwezz omfg im like crying . This story is just <3 my heart aches you cant stop it here we need to know what happens next !
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iwishiwasstrongenoughtoliftnotonebutbothofus · 1 decade ago
Please don't let this be like the end end. I'm going to cry if it is :(
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liveyourlife28 · 1 decade ago
are you going to make a sequel? or an epilogue? or is this just the end? D:
by the way, i'm bawling right now because of how they met up<3 and because this could be the end of the story and i just don't know how i'm going to live without this story. hsuilhdlfhjlhuerihljflehdgutirhjklf <3
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