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If I told you I loved you
Chapter Four

I almost have to pinch myself to believe it. Carter Austin thinks that me: A short girl, not very skinny, barely tanned skin, and awkwardly blue eyes is gorgeous.  No one, let alone a crush has ever said that to me. I shake back into reality, and look at Carter. Even though it's dark, I can see him blush a little. I hop out of the water, and onto the smaller deck, then walk up to the bigger deck, and help pull him up. He grabs a towel out of a small shed, and throws it into my arms. 
I sit back on the edge of the dock, ringing out my hair, with the towel wrapped around my neck. The moon reflects onto the lake with each kiss of the tide. Carter sits down next to me, with his hands folded in his lap. "Here," I say, giving him the partially wet towel. He smiles at me, but says nothing. He puts back on his hat, and stands up. He throws the towel around his neck, and grabs his shirt.
"C'mon," He says to me. I get up, and grab my shoes, along with my shirt, and follow him. He goes slightly into the woods, and then we come to a small opening with lights strung around surrounding trees. I look around, only seeing a small swing, with a good view of the lakes and mountains. "This is where my dad took my mom, on their first date. I guess you could say it's kind of a family tradition." He laughs a little. 
I feel my cheeks burn before I feel Carter's warm hand on my back. He leads me to the swing, and I sit down. He gives me a few pushes, before he stops, and climbs up into the tree holding the swing. He only climbs up about six feet, and his feet almost touch. He grabs a rock from a hallowed spot in the tree, and carves a heart. First, he puts his innitials, then looks at me. "What's your middle name?" 
"...Lillian," I look up to him and laugh. 
"Riley Lillian Austin," He looks down at me. "Has a good ring to it, doesn't it?" He finishes carving my initials, RLK. Then, he moves on to his. CGA. Carter Garret Austin. What a perfect name, for a perfect guy. So many flaws, that I've fallen in love with. Then, it clicks. He put my name with his last name. A smile spreads across my face, and I stand up. "I don't want this night to end," 
"It's not over yet..." He whispers, and takes my hand. He pulls me in close, and puts his hands around my waist. We sway back and forth, dancing to our own music. "We never really finished our dance earlier." 


Author's Note: Oh my good lord, guys. I'm so sorry I haven't written anything in ages! I'm back though, and ready to write. So, I'm totally not asking for faves: against the rules. But, I am asking that if you like the story, follow me because I suck at notifying people. I used to be like, really good I had lists and everything for past stories, it's just that this one isn't as popular. 

 
 
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