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If I told you I loved you
Chapter One

Before I step any closer, Carter hops off his tailgate. He grabs his solo cup, and comes closer to me. "Hey," His deep voice sends a series of chills down my spine. 
"Hey," I try to keep my cool. I look up to him, the height difference between us is about a foot. He looks down at me, his blue eyes are just dark shadows under his hat. Lennox and her boyfriend grabs my attention when I see her dancing with her boyfriend, they're so close. I look back to Carter who's looking towards Lennox. 
"Would you ever think she's my cousin?" Carter sits down on a short hay bale placed away from the bonfire. "She's like the sister I never had." He laughs. 
"She's my best friend," I sit down next to him. After a moment of silence, he looks at me, like he's going to say something. 
"Do you want, some lemonade or something?" He shakes his head and stands up. I stand up along with him and nod. He smirks, and grabs a cup of lemonade. He comes back, and hands it to me. "This sounds corny, but do you wanna dance?" 
A slow song comes onto the radio, occasionally staticy. I feel my cheeks start to burn again, and I nod. After taking a sip of my lemonade, he takes my hand, and pulls me in close to his chest.  He puts his tough arms around me, I swear, he can feel the beat of my heart. 
"Aw," I can hear Lennox. I laugh to myself, because I can hear her getting her phone out to take a picture. I don't look at her, I keep my eyes focused on Carter. 
"Riley," He whispers quietly. "I think I really like---"
"CARTER," A girl storms out of the woods with a flashlight. I back away from him, and stand next to Lennox. "You think you can just roll around with other girls while I'm away, you thought wrong. You thought so wrong."
I look to Lennox, and she takes me away from her boyfriend, and off to the side. I'm not sure how to react. Do I cry, or get angry? "What's even going on right now?" I hear my voice crack when I speak.
I can't hear what Carter is saying to that girl, but I can hear her blood-curdling screams. "We're so done," She quiets her voice down, and walks away somewhere. I don't walk back yet, I stand quietly with Lennox. The music is turned off now, and everyone is sitting quietly. 


Author's Note: Well, how are you liking it?  If you are, take a look at Riahdeere's story "Take a Back Road," It's really good! Also, I made a polyvore for this story! Riley's Outfit: 
http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=66027988 
 
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If I told you I loved you Chapter One Before I step any closer,

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kendiee2 · 1 decade ago
This is really good dear(:
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