She
hides herself in her room everyday
She has convinced herself that no one cares
But people have been with her all the way
She keeps choking, drowning in her tears.
She feels torn apart and feels insecure
Smiling that fake smile so no one can see
She keeps feeling like her own prisoner
Feeling not worth it, crying to be free.
She's constantly feeling nothing but numb
But when the music starts, she falls in love
Music saved her from what she could become
The painful memories she lets go of.
No longer smiling that fake smile she used
Music gets her through but she's still
bemused.
♥
That was my poem for english, I
need a title and feedback to please feel free to
comment
23 faves · 6 comments · Dec 16, 2012 2:43pm
BittersweetMemory
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1 decade ago
I'm sorry your life is like this, mine too, I wrote it about me but I'm not telling anyone apart from my best friend! Great title btw I'm probably gonna use that! I dunno I'm sh/t at these things soo yeahh
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kay5999
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1 decade ago
I love it!
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BittersweetMemory
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1 decade ago
thanksss!! umm any ideas for a title??Xxx
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kay5999
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1 decade ago
ummummmm idk im not really good at coming up with things like that/: sorry
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BittersweetMemory
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1 decade ago
okayy, thats okay me neither! hahaha!xxx
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poodlelomein35 · 1 decade ago
Can you like frame this and sign it for me? This is pretty much my life summed up. Hmmm...maybe for the title something along the lines of Saving lyrics or something?? I know it's kinda lame, just a suggestion :)
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