I Love to
Hate You
Chapter
16
"Hey,
I'm not feeling so great. I'm gonna go home." I said
after dancing.
"Let me get my jacket." he said, starting towards the
coat check.
"No, I need some to myself. I have to go call my
brother." I said, a lump rising in my throat. Ever since
Britney made that remark, I felt guilty.
Part of the reason I left was because I couldn't handle
having people feel sorry for me anymore. my mother had been so
upset, and she was finally starting to move on. I was glad for
her, but my brother couldn't seem toget past it.
He and my father were close. They were very close. I didn't
know what he was going to do after my dad died. He moped around
for a while, then tried to get on with his life. But he
couldn't. I told him I needed to start my life, and he told
me he would try and start his. We made a promise to let each
other know if we were doing well in life. And so far, I
hadn't gotten a call from him.
It's been two years. I haven't talked to him in two
years. I feel terrible.
I went home and dialed his number, kind of hoping he wouldn't
pick up.
What would I say to him? He did answer though.
"Chris?" I asked, not believing it was him. He sounded
so different.
"Who's calling?" he asked. He didn't even
recognize my voice. Did he even want to talk to me? He probably
didn't want me in his life.
"It's, uh, it's Carly."
"Carly? Oh my god." he gasped.
"Hey." I said, not sure what was coming next.
"Wow. I didn't expect you to call." he said. Gosh,
I was a terrible sister.
"Chris, how are you?" I asked, afraid of the
answer.
"Honestly? I'm doing okay. I'm, uh, I'm
engaged."
WHAT?! I leave my brother, and he's depressed. I call two
years later, and he's engaged? And didn't even call to
let me know?
"Wow. There's a suprise." I said, still
shocked.
"I was going to tell you. But I didn't think you wanted
to hear from me. Look, I'm sorry if I ruined your life
sis." he said. Oh no.
"You didn't. Actually, I was calling about our
promise."
"So you're doing well in life?" he asked, and I
could practically hear him smiling through the phone. He
remembered.
"I'm doing well. You should come visit." I said,
meaning it.
"Yeah, actually. I was going to tell you this, too.
We're in England for about a month. Lucy's family live
here, and we have news to share with them." he
said.
"Oh my gosh! You should definitely stop by!" I said,
giving him my address. After talking for what seemed like another
hour, I told him to call me later and hung up. I heard someone
knock at the door. Zayn must have forgotten his key.
I didn't expect to see Liam when I opened the door.
"Hi." I said, trying to catch my breath.
"We need to talk." he said, walking into the flat and
sitting on the couch.
"Sure. What's up?" I asked, playing it cool.
"Look, I completely understand if you don't like me. But
you don't have to go after my best friend. It's kind of
hurtful to watch." he said.
"I'm not going after Zayn. He's just a really good
friend." I said, stressing the last word. I can't
believe Liam's doing this, right now.
"While we're talking about things that are hurtful to
watch, why did you bring Britney? I thought you were over us
hating each other." I mumbled.
"I needed some way to get your attention. You've been
avoiding me!" he yelled.
"Yeah, I have been. You can't just tell somebody that
you've hated for the past five years that you have feelings
towards them!" I screamed back.
"I never hated you!" he hollered. What?
"I NEVER hated you Carly. Can't you see? I've always
wanted you. I've always been in love with you. Do you know
how hard it is to watch the person you love hate you?" he
asked, his voice going back to normal volume.
"Stop. Just stop." I said, putting my hands
up.
"No. You can't just tell someone to stop loving you and
expect them to do it." he said. Wait? He loves me? Could
things get any more complicated?
"Liam, I said stop!" I said, raising my voice
again.
"Carly, you don't understand-"
"Liam, shut up." I said, my heart beating
fast.
"Make me." he replied. How old was he, five?
But I accepted his challenge. I grabbed his head and pulled it
close to mine, our lips meeting seconds later. He kissed me back,
hard.
I've been waiting so long to do this.
Maybe I never really hated him. Maybe I loved him.
Or maybe I loved to hate him.
............................
is she with Liam? or Zayn?
playaaaaa.
133 faves · 14 comments · Sep 16, 2012 12:23pm
GottaBeYou06
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1 decade ago
Ooooooo haha it's getting good
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Jersey_Girl
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1 decade ago
omg this is so good. personally i think she should stay with zayn. liam is meanyy. lol. but whatevs im torn between each.
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Ellmo
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1 decade ago
I agree with ChikinNewdleMallerzz. Hahah Add some draaamaa. (:
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onedirection143
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1 decade ago
i really dont know who she should go for!!! this is an amazing fanfic! ur a really good writer!!!
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ChikinNewdleMallerzz
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1 decade ago
Umm...since I can't decide at all who I want he to be with, how about a major plot twist and she ends up with Louis or Niall?
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xSweetGoodbyes
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1 decade ago
Forever team zayn
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Eli22b
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1 decade ago
but i still think she should go with zayn, just sayinn
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macNcheese66
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1 decade ago
Zaynn
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gbarone1234
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1 decade ago
#teamzayn
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chasesta
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1 decade ago
zayn
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LocalRapper
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1 decade ago
i thinkk. zayn ya its kinda kreppy for a guy yo say that but hey i like reading so my opinion.
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Bananana2397
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1 decade ago
Liammm
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ballerx11
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1 decade ago
LOVE your stories! keep going, keep going!
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kenken526 · 1 decade ago
The playaaaaaa thing you put at the end made me laugh a lil too much. Oh I dig the story. You're a great author.
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