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Torn In Between

Chapter 1:
 
Being the new kid was pretty hard. I walked through the glass door of the brick cafeteria and took the first available seat. Which meant, I was sitting alone. Everyone stopped munching hungrily on their hamburgers, and stared at me. I was not going to eat. If I did, everyone’s first impression of me would be that I was a fatty.
I sat nervously, and just looked around at the blondes beside me, talking nonstop about cheerleading practice, and some guy. Someone tapped my shoulder and I turned to see a beautiful set of blue eyes staring down at me. His tempting eyes were framed with dark, thick eyelashes. He was semi-tan, while I was as pale as snow.
“Uhh...Hey. You’re Cassidy, right?” he asked. I nodded. “Oh! Hey! Mrs. Tracy said for me to show you around to all your classes and your dorm and stuff...” he said, clearly nervous. “Sounds...Uh...Good?” I said, halfway smiling. “Amazingly good for me...” he said flirtatiously.
Been here for about five minutes and I was already being hit on. Good start so far. “Come sit with me and my friends.” He said, jerking his head towards the gray circular table. Jocks, clearly, were all seated at the table. They buff, tan faces looked at me and grinned.
I waved. They blushed all the same time. One person at the other table behind us caught my attention. He had jet black hair, and bright, almost neon green eyes. I looked at him, completely mesmerized until the guy I was sitting by caught my attention. I didn’t want him to know I was staring at some other guy.
“I’m Blake by the way...” he said, smiling, and staring deep into my hazel eyes. He was gorgeous, so it was only natural that I grinned back.  “I’m John.” said the pale guy in front of me. He looked like a vampire compared to everyone else at the table, except for me that is.
I shook his rough, white hand, and returned a smile to him. I felt Blake tense up. I had two brothers and a sister, so it was natural that I knew when someone was ticked off or happy. Blake wasn’t happy. He was clearly the jealous type, which was sometimes kind of cute on guys. David had been the jealous type. HAD been, until his death.
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Torn In Between Chapter 1: Being the new kid was pretty hard.

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moolie_poolie* · 1 decade ago
yea i agree

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MrsKoolaid · 1 decade ago
haha this was the old one. I edited it and made it WAY different. More descriptive. haha:)
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Awesomecat99 · 1 decade ago
You shall continue with the awesomeness
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