strange attractor
chapter
one
There's really no other way to say
it, so I'll just tell you. I was dead drunk. My
vision was blurry. My stomach was churning. My eyes
darted around the room, searching for the nearest
trashcan to empty myself in and that's when I saw
him.
Tall, brunette, about my age, with big blue eyes that
felt like they were pulling me in.
My feet seemed to move on their own accord, and then
suddenly we were toe-to-toe and his arm was snaking
around my waist, his liquid touch sending tingles down my
spine. Another look at him told me that he was much older
than I'd originally thought. Late twenties, early
thirties maybe. Too old for me.
But still, he had this hungry look in his eyes. Dean
never looked at me like that. And that smirk,
like he knew exactly what he was doing to my body when he
touched my hand, like he'd summoned all those
butterflies to parade my stomach.
And when he asked me to dance, I couldn't say no.
His voice was rough and mature. Something I'd
heard before in the voices of uncles or teachers, and yet
somehow on him it was much more attractive.
Addicting, even. I wanted him to talk more. To talk
forever.
We danced, and it was rough and messy and more than a
little too much, but I liked it. Why did I like
it? Was it the alcohol? Was it the thought of an
older man wanting anything to do with me, a girl
barely sixteen years old? I wasn't sure, but then the
song ended and he told me to "wait here," and a
few seconds -- or was it minutes? I couldn't tell --
later, he was back with a drink in each hand. I
didn't even bother to ask what it was. I was just so
thirsty, and then suddenly I'd downed the
whole thing.
A little ways into the next dance was when I started to
lose it. My vision blurred, I could barely stand, and I
was having tunnel vision. My eyes darted up to him, look
at me like he wanted to feast on my face and then it
clicked. My drink.
"What did you d -"
My body collapsed into his, and then I was out.
When I woke up, all I saw were bright lights. Too
bright.
My head hurts.
I groaned, grabbed my pillow and covered my head. I
inhaled deeply, expecting to be soothed by the scent of
my lavender laundry detergent and then --
what?
My pillow smelled like the woods, and maybe a little
lemon. It reminded me of that guy I'd been dancing
with last --
Oh my God.
I shot up in the king-sized bed, eyes darting around the
room. It took me a few seconds to realize the scream
I'd heard came from my own mouth.
"Quiet down," someone murmured beside me, and I
froze.
Slowly craning my head, I turned to see if that voice
belonged to who I thought it did. Sure enough, there he
was. The guy I'd been dancing with last night. God, I
didn't even know his name, and here I was in
his bed!
I looked down at myself and let out a sigh of relief when
I found my body fully clothed. I jumped out of bed then,
stumbling slightly but catching myself. My head still
hurt, but I peeled back the yellow curtains beside me
anyways, flinching at the new bright light that
surrounded me. My eyes adjusted, scanned across a skyline
I didn't recognize, and I wanted to cry.
This man - whoever he was - had kidnapped me. And I'd
let him.
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Hi guys! Not sure if any of you remember me, but I'm
eknovels. I used to write stories on Witty about a year
ago, and I really missed it so I thought I'd try
again. Hope you all liked!
Feedback is greatly appreciated.
14 faves · 7 comments · Jul 21, 2012 4:13pm
xotaay14
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1 decade ago
i'm so glad you're back! :) <3 <3
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heaven_is_here
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1 decade ago
Keep going girl! Nice to finally see some originality on this site. Can you please notify me when chapter 2 arrives. Take all the time you need, I'm a writer and it's really annoying when people rush you, do it nice and slowly so your work is as best as it can be!
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Imperfectedmuffin
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1 decade ago
this is amazing, keep going!
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SMstories
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1 decade ago
omg ♥
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alisonx87
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1 decade ago
i used to read your stories too :) and i seriously want to know whats going to happen next haha
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Dylan_Redfern
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1 decade ago
yay ur back :DDDD i read every single one of your stories lol..ur awsum
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starlightx · 1 decade ago
fhasjdklfhjdsaklhfuilwaehfjk YAYAYAYAYAYY!:D i read your stories on my old account and now when i saw this i was like YEA BRO!:D
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