Second
Chance //
Chapter 31
"Oh my god." I
whispered.
"Maybe they're adopting a child for someone
else?" Brett guessed. I highly doubt that.
"Thanks for trying to make me feel better, Brett. But why
would dad want to hide something like this from me and
Rose?"
"Hey, we can't just start assuming things. Why
don't you just take a picture of it in case and let's
get out of this car." Brett suggested.
"Ugh, I left my phone in my room!"
"We could use my phone. Cr/p, my phone is about to die.
Let's hurry up." Brett directed.
I took a picture of the document with Brett's phone.
I went over to the front seat and place my hand on the door
handle, trying to open the door. But the door wouldn't
open.
I went through my pocket, trying to find the car keys. They
weren't in my pocket. "Brett, where are the car
keys?" I asked.
"You have them." Brett told me.
"I can't find the car keys!" I panicked. Brett
and I searched the whole car for the car keys.
Then realization finally hit me. "I must have dropped the
car keys when I was outside!"
"So we're locked in?" Brett asked. We both looked
at each other, our eyes growing wide. All we could hear was the
sound of thunder and rain hitting against the floor.
"Brett, try to unlock the car door from the
inside!"
"I can't. You need the keys for that." Brett
said.
"We. Are. So. Done. For." I said.
"Hey, it's not that bad." Brett commented.
"Brett, we are two teenagers that broke into a car. When
Suzan or dad sees us here, imagine how much trouble we are
gonna get in."
"At least we found out what your dad and Suzan have been
hiding." Brett reminded.
I sighed. "Yeah."
"We might as well get comfortable."
We both placed our heads against a side of the car, trying to
sleep.
"Brett, I'm sorry for dragging you into my problems.
And now you're trapped in a car, thanks to me."
"Don't sweat it, I don't mind. At least I have
some alone time with you." Brett yawned, closing his
eyes.
My face flushed bright red, but at least Brett couldn't see
it because his eyes was closed. I smiled, and took a peek at
Brett's face. He was smirking!
I lightly kicked him.
"What was that for?" Brett asked, laughing.
"You know what that was for!" I said, laughing as
well.
The rain kinda drifted me off to sleep, and the fact that Brett
was next to me.
"I can't believe I got you into this." I
whispered.
"Shh, go to sleep." Brett whispered back.
* * * * * *
I felt a pat on the
shoulder. "Melissa, wake up!"
My eyes slowly opened. "Huh?"
"Your dad and Suzan are trying to find the car
keys!"
My eyes shot open. We both climbed over to the trunk.
"What time is it?" I whispered.
"I think its around 9 right now." Brett answered
quietly.
"We're gonna be late for school!"
"Not our biggest problem right now." Crouch
down, they're coming this way." Brett told me.
"Derek, I found the car keys!" Suzan screamed in
joy.
Suzan opened the door, and sat in the driver's seat.
"Thanks for letting me stay Derek."
"I always accept a beautiful lady into my home." my
dad said. My goodness, he's flirting with her!
Suzan blushed. "You are quite a gentlemen. I have to go to
work now. Bye Derek!" Suzan said. Brett and I were barely
breathing as Suzan drove off to who knows where.
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