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Our Summer

Chapter 55
 After we talked for a little bit, Brayden left me alone so I could finish packing. Once I was done, all of us headed out to a restaurant downtown for an early supper as a sort of going-away party – another family tradition.
The supper took up the rest of the evening. It was sunset by the time we got back to the house.
“Do you want to go for a walk?” Lucas asked me, sounding uncertain.
“Sure,” I smiled, and we headed out the back door. To my surprise, he didn’t take my hand as we began to walk down the beach. He didn’t say anything for awhile, either.
“I don’t want you to leave,” he finally said, breaking the silence between us.
“I don’t either,” I sighed.
There was another silence, and I didn’t know what to say to break it.
“Did you have a good time?” Lucas asked and finally took my hand.
“It was amazing,” I squeezed his hand. He smiled, just a little. “I’m never going to forget it,” I whispered, tears filling my eyes. Lucas stopped and turned to face me.
“I’m never going to forget you,” he said. I blushed and looked down, but he caught my face and turned it back up towards him.
“Lucas,” I began, but his finger on my lips silenced me.
“No matter what happens after this, don’t forget me, okay? Forget all the bad stuff that has happened the past couple of weeks, and remember this – remember us. No matter what, okay? This will always be our summer.”
Lucas’ voice had a certain urgency to it – almost desperation. Tears filled my eyes as he spoke.
“I won’t,” I promised. As I did, he took my face between both of his hands. The fireworks that lit up my world when our lips met were more vibrant and magical than any I’d even seen. Even the one’s we’d watched together at the fair last week were no match.
We left early the next morning, after another round of hugs from everyone. This time, the drive was silent, as both Jamie and I had other things on our minds. Over and over I played back the memories I’d made this summer, and I wondered if Lucas and I would ever make anymore.

The end.  

AN: Hey everyone. (: So that's it... I know it's probably not the ending you guys wanted, but I think I am going to write a sequel. It probably won't be the next story I post however, because I already have a different story started that I plan on posting first. Anyways, thanks so much for reading. (: It means a lot. Have a great day, all of you! ♥

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ohsnapitslauren26 · 1 decade ago
that was amazing your a really good writer, i didnt want it to end!! you should really consider writing a sequal
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sparkle123 · 1 decade ago
awww :'( I don't want it to end!!!!
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TaylorTott · 1 decade ago
Loved the story! will you start another?
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AnkitaxP · 1 decade ago
I didn't want it to end D: awh, Lucas is so cute. WRITE MORE PLEASE OMG. you're a really good writer! x
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OnTheOtherSide · 1 decade ago
Aww. This was so good!
please write a sequal.
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liveyourlife28 · 1 decade ago
Ohmygoodness. ): i didn't want it to end. D:
Please make a sequal, this is probably one of my favorite stories on witty. UGH. Keep writing, you're really good.(:
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kayleekrusader · 1 decade ago
you HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUAL ♥ ♥ ♥
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WunderStruckk · 1 decade ago
I seriously smiled through the whole story,it was amazing,Sequel very soon please ♥!
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Brianna_Burke · 1 decade ago
yes sequel!!!
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flossydossy · 1 decade ago
Well done and please write a sequel!
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yourbeutiful__trustme · 1 decade ago
i need to know what happens to them please please please write a sequel. and it was a great ending perfect good job
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