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Second Chance //

Chapter 29



""Melissa.... and boy that's seems to always be with her." my dad said. 
"And this is my time to leave." Brett said, putting me back down and walking back to his house.
"Dad, I can't believe you're here! Rose is going to be so-"
"Daddy!" Rose screamed as she ran to dad and gave him a big hug.
I smiled and looked behind dad, seeing grandma and grandpa and that... that woman.
"I was just about to leave. I'll be back later for you to sign the... real estate papers." Suzan said, lifting the papers.
"Aren't you suppose to sign the papers before moving?" I asked.
"Well, I decided to sign the papers after moving." my dad replied.
"But I'm pretty sure you have to sign the contract first before moving in." I commented.
"Sweetie, I'm a real estate agent. I think I know what I'm doing." Suzan said.
"But something doesn't seem-"
"Melissa, it doesn't matter. As long as I'm here, right?" my dad said.
"Yeah, I guess." I said before finally giving my dad a hug.

"I better go now." Suzan slipped the papers in her bag. She got in he car and drove away.
"Let's go to my house." my dad said.
Rose and I have been talking to dad in his new house for almost an hour.
"I left my cell phone at my office. Can you get it Melissa?" my dad asked.
"Sure." I walked to his office room and found his cell phone on his table. The phone was suddenly ringing. The call was from Suzan. I don't know why, but I answered the phone.
"Hello Suzan." I said in a deep voice, trying to do my best dad/man voice.
"Dereck, great news! They found her!" Suzan said, sounding happy. What the h/ll is she talking about?
"Oh really?" I said.
"Yes, the detective said that she's okay, and we'll get her back tomorrow. Isn't that great?"
"Oh yeah, that's great!" I said, improvising.
"I know! After years of searching for her, we finally found her!" Why are they finding someone... more like- who did they find?
I looked down at the scattered papers on my dad's desk. On the scattered papers, I noticed the contract for the house. I thought Suzan had the contract?
I looked at the contact, seeing that my dad had already signed it! And why is it signed Carrie Newman under the real estate agent? Isn't Suzan's name suppose to be there?
My dad lied to me.
"Hello Paul? You there?"
"Uh yeah! Why don't you come over for dinner and bring the paper I'm supposed to sign." I said in a deep voice.
"I don't know, Melissa doesn't seem to like me very much." 
"Of course she likes you! She loves you!" I lied.
"Uh, okay then. See you there." Suzan said before hanging up.
I can't believe my dad lied to me! What is going on? And who did they find? Ugh, I have way too many questions in my head. I have to find out what those papers really are!
I grabbed my dad's cell phone and gave it back to him.
"What took you so long?" my dad asked.
"Suzan called. I invited her over for dinner." I said.
My dad's eyes grew wide but soon got smaller. "Okay, I'll order some pizza then." my dad said.
"Yay!" Rose screamed.
I put on a fake smile and nodded. It hurts that my dad is lying to me.
An hour later, my grandparents and Suzan came over. I just have to find the right time to go through Suzan's purse and find out what they have been hiding from me and Rose.
"Suzan, it's so good to see you. I want you to feel at home. Let me take that bag and I'll put it in the living room for you."
"Thank you sweetie. I'll be in the kitchen." Suzan said.
Okay, it's time time to find the files while everyone is at the kitchen. I feel so dirty for doing this... but I have to know what those papers are!
I searched and searched for the file in her purse, but the papers weren't in there. Hold on, this wasn't the purse she had this morning. It must mean that the purse with the papers is in her car! I took her car keys out of her purse.



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