Witty Profiles
Girls Like me .
♥.Chapter 20.♥
“Do you have
everything?!” I yelled into the phone at Jaycie,
waiting for Jake to show up at the beach.
“Yeah, I’ve got
everything, and all the girls are where they need to
be!” She said happily.
“Alright, thanks
Jaycie.” I said relieved. “Here comes
Jake, got to go, bye!”
I smiled at Jake, who was
completely oblivious to the situation he was about to be
in.
“Ready?” I said calmly,
grabbing his hand.
“I’m not sure what for,
but I guess.” He laughed, following behind
me.
I drug him over to a table for two
placed in a vacant area on the beach. I motioned him
to sit down, and he just kind of gave me a weird
look.
“Oh just do it.” I
giggled, slowly inching the ropes out from behind my
back. “Now, close your
eyes.”
“Okay.” He said
unsurely, closing his eyes.
“No peeking, it’s a
surprise.” I said sternly, wrapping ropes around him
in various directions.
“Now you can open.” I
said in a b//tchy tone, while folding my
arms.
“What are
yo-“
“Girls!” I shouted,
cutting Jake off.
One after one, all of Jake’s
ex-girlfriend’s began standing next to me. All
of the girls that Jake had screwed over in previous
relationships, ready to seek revenge.
“Remember her Jake?” I
said, pointing to one of the girls. “This is
Caitlyn. In the 5thgrade, you asked
her out and then dumped her over text
message.”
Jake wriggled his arms, trying to
break free, but Jaycie and Zoe only pulled the ropes
tighter.
“And remember her
Jakey?” I said, pointing to Taylor. “You
told her you loved her, and then you broke up with her in
front of the entire 6thgrade
class.”
Jake avoided eye contact, while
guilt filled in his eyes. I didn’t feel bad
though, he put all of us through hell, and now, it was his
turn.
I continued running through the
girl’s names, explaining to Jake how he had screwed
them over.
After I had finished, I got close
to Jake, staring him right in the eyes.
“Remember me, Jake?” I
whispered, my minty breath pushing against his lips.
“When I was 13, you asked me out. You were the
only guy I had ever liked, and then 5 months later, you
broke up with me, like it was
nothing.”
The regret in his eyes was
impossible to not see.
“You and your friends, you
humiliated me.” I said softly, staring him
down. “And now, it’s your turn.
Your turn to suffer, your turn to feel rejected, and
worthless. I hope you’ve learned your
lesson.”
I began walking away, knowing that
Jake had gotten what he deserved.
“This is why you don’t
mess with girls like her.” I said to Jake, turning
around one last time. “This is why you
don’t mess with girls like her, or girls like us, and
this is especially why you don’t mess
with
Girls
Like Me."
The
End♥ I can't believe
this is the end :( You guys have been so supportive, and
amazing, and I really can't thank any of you
enough♥ You guys are the reason i'm
still here, and I could not possibly ask for better
readers.♥I know this isn't
the way a lot of you wanted it to end, but I think
you'll be suprised by the epilogue
(: The epilogue will be up tomorrow,
hopefully. I love you all♥
xoxo Stay Beautiful♥
687 faves · 109 comments · Jul 13, 2012 9:00pm
forever_and_beyond
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1 decade ago
sooo ahhmazing <33ed it so much. great ending :)
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Thing039
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1 decade ago
Amazing!!!! You used the name Caitlyn too. That's EXACTLY hoe you spell my name! Lol, I just hope that one I turn your age or the characters age, I never have that happen to me. ;) I'm only 11, but people say they "date" already at my age. That's a bunch of crap. :\
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iLuvCupcakesBro
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1 decade ago
Oh my God. Where do I start? I absolutely LOVED the whole story!! I was one of the first people to start reading it and have been with it since chapter one right through to the end. It is AMAZING and I LOVE it and I couldn't think of a better way to write any of it! Revenge. I love revenge, so much, that I have been playing out revenge on the guy who dumped me. The guy who said he loved me for 4 months straight. The guy who was my everything, then one night when he was with ALL his friends decided to dump me. In a group chat. Like I was nothing. Half of those people don't even talk to me anymore.. and I was what you could say "popular". Then he dumped me, and it's all gone. I've been playing out revenge with a few of my besties helping me out. After reading this story I had a good think about it for probably an hour. I realised that I still love him.. da faq am I doing? I think I loved this story sooo much because I can relate to it. It has taught me a valuable lesson. I am going to stop being such a to him, and stop the revenge. The stupid plans. I am going to reply to all his messages.. and last of all, if I play my cards right, I might, just might, get back with him.. and finally tell him I still love him, and never stopped loving him from the moment we met. (He was my ex bestfriends boyfriend.. we are still friends and the reason we aren't besties anymore is not because I went out with her boyfriend.) Thankyou so much for the story I can't explain how much I loved it, and most of all, thankyou for the wake up call..♥
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BreeeFayy*
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1 decade ago
.... oh my God.... please teach me how to write like this. I think your the best writer i have ever seen. Waaayyy better than any of the published writers ive read. Im a writer but im not very good. Actually i suck. But its my passion and it would make my life you could give me some advice. I won a writing contest once for short fiction.... but thats it. Please please please help me?
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forgetmenot924
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1 decade ago
epilouge!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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RyansWitty
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1 decade ago
For some reason,I can't comment on your comments.Lol hey there.I know, you're so gorgeous i have to spam your comments :))
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kayleekrusader
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1 decade ago
well, first off, i think your stories are amazing and i'm always looking forward to reading them :) i was wondering if you gave shout-outs for other peoples stories, even if you don't, can you go to my profile and at least read the one i started? it's called Little Miss. Perfect :) that would mean so much to me! ♥
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lifesgoodxo
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1 decade ago
best . witty . story . ever ♥
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elysey
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1 decade ago
2 words: F/CKING FANTASTIC!!
can't wait until the epilogue, I'm sure it will be amazing as always :)
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foreverlove18
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1 decade ago
awesome
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bethanysheaa
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1 decade ago
awh, i can't believe it's over! i really did love the story!(:
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1 decade ago
awwwww! I cant believe its over!!! it was an amazing story, probably one of the best i have ever read here on witty! you shall keep writing!!!!! :)
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youdontknowme88
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1 decade ago
This was awesome!
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icarly26
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1 decade ago
That was an amazing story!
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ApplePieFlutterDashRariSparkle
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1 decade ago
I love it. It's sad to see it come to an end. You better keep writing, or I'll find you and eat all your tacos. Then you'll buy more tacos. And I'll eat those too. You have no choice other than to keep writing. Do it. Do it noooooow.
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KatTheCutie
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1 decade ago
OMG IT'S ALREADY OVER! IT WAS SO AMAZING I RUSHED HOME TO READ IT TODAY OMG IT WAS SOOOOOO GOOD!
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teresiee15
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1 decade ago
oomggg i lovee this storyy!!!!!:) good endingg
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x0mostd0pe
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1 decade ago
ahhhh this story was freaking amazing girlll ! :) never stop writing !!!
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Believe_In_You
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1 decade ago
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I JUST REREAD THIS STORY FOR THE ELEVENTEENTH TIME AND I STILL FANGIRL OVER IT. I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. SO. FLIPPING. MUCH.