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The coach of his game

Chapter 13 Part 2!
*Brad's POV*

“Hey Ar- stuff Ariel, I’m so sorry, I didn- I- Scar let me in she said you were here-Sorry I had no idea!” I jumped off her bed, a little off guard of the fact that the girl I loved was standing in front of me with just a towel. I felt like an idiot, so I sighed finally giving up on talking. I lowered my head, but then I looked again at her she looked beautiful as ever, in her white towel, her hair towel dried, falling right down to her waist and the best part was she wore no makeup. She looked stunning; I just stood there not saying a word just staring at her like an idiot, but I didn’t care. I held eye contact with her, not looking anywhere but straight in her beautiful eyes. She turned a beautiful shade of bright red that I loved; she looked down breaking eye contact with me. I don’t know where I got the nerve to, but I just started walking closer to her, and suddenly I was right in front of her and I could smell her vanilla soap off her skin she smelled amazing, I took a deep breath through my nose, and then I lifted her chin with my two fingers. She was still red enough; I pushed her wet hair behind her ear, still not breaking eye contact with her. I rubbed my thumb over her cheek, gently caressing it, I looked at her lips they looked red and full, and the fact that she was biting them wasn’t stopping me from kissing her right now. She looked so sexy when she bit her lips, if only she knew what she was doing to me right now. My heart rate started speeding up as I inched my face closer to hers and she gently closed her eyes, the weird stomach thing happened again, I would call it butterflies but it was to girly. Before I knew it my lips her on her warm soft lips and I couldn’t help but control myself. Just the feel of her lips drove me insane, I put my arms around her waist pulling her very close to me, she was on her tippy toes, and I was lost in her smell and her. She took a minute to respond but soon she immediately wrapped her hands around my neck pulling me closer, I hungrily pushed her against the wall and tried to get closer to her if it was even possible. Her hands moved from my neck to my hair, and she intertwined her fingers in them. I moaned because when she played with my hair it drove me nuts. I gripped her waist tightly earning a light moan from her. I pulled away from her lips and left a trail of kisses from her jawline and then made my way over to her neck, she threw her head back giving me complete access to her neck I kissed it until I found her soft spot, I nibbled at it and biting it lightly, she let out a gasp followed by a loud moan. I continued this on few more spots on her neck I knew it would leave marks but I didn’t care I wanted everyone to know she was mine. She tugged at my hair and pulled me in for another kiss, this time it was her who was controlling and it drove me insane. After a while we both pulled away she once again realized she was in her towel she turned a light shade of red this time. I smiled at her and rubbed my thumb across her red and full lips. “I’ll see you tomorrow, goodnight beautiful.” I whispered in her ear still breathless, she gave me a quick nod still clearly stunned; I chuckled and kissed her cheek leaving her standing there not moving. I left her room Scar and Kelly raised their eyebrows at the huge grin plastered on my face, “Nice hair, what happened.” Kelly asked, with a knowing smirk. I smirked at her “Ask your friend.” They both gaped at me with their mouths slightly opened I chuckled and winked at them. I left their dorm with that constant smirk, I felt amazing knowing I still had an effect on her, and this time I was going to prove to her how much I loved her.

New format!! :D K so what do you guys think? This chapter is just something to show how Brad feel about Ariel! I took the character quote down, I messed up sorry! I'll put it back up asap! I also wanted to thank you all for the wonderfull birthday wishes means alot! You guys are amazing, love yous! Also I think I might stop giving notifications it takes too much effort and time, and then it becomes harder to upload sooner, so the best way to know when the next chapter is up is to follow me and the chapter will be up on your hompage/quotes by people you follow. Sorry guys but now I promise I'll upload sooner! So comment/fave/follow! lovee y'all! :)

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BeeautifulSoul12 · 1 decade ago
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1dl0ve · 1 decade ago
I like the format either waay &your story is great !
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kitten7121 · 1 decade ago
Love this story but not digging the new format.... :S
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coolio128 · 1 decade ago
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phoebeloveslouis · 1 decade ago
This story is AMAZING! Please keep writing you have an incredible talent!! Another notification would be awesome!!
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xLizzIsAmazing · 1 decade ago
I love love love this story it's amazing. keep writing :)
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foreverlove18 · 1 decade ago
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Apage · 1 decade ago
ahhh !!! i LOVED it :D its awesome (: . hehe.
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randomcrayon12 · 1 decade ago
Ah!!! :D Oh my goodness! Woah, i like have no words haha! THe story is going GREAT Nihah!!(: I'm SO STOKED for the next chapter!! Great writing, girlll!!!(: Keep it up, love!! ♥

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