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Our Summer

Chapter 50

    I stared at him in shock. It didn’t make any sense.
“Natalie,” Brayden said my name again. Then he sighed. “Look, I know you like Lucas.” He stood and walked over to me. “I could tell from the very beginning. And obviously he was going to fall for you – you’re gorgeous, and funny, and nice,” Brayden spoke with more emotion and animation than I think I’ve seen him exhibit since we met. “And those eyes,” he sighed.
“Brayden,” I interrupted. “Thank you, but – it’s just,” I fumbled for words. “I like him,” I finally whispered.
“I know,” he sighed. “Give me a chance? Just think about it,” he pushed.
I shook my head. I couldn’t agree. “There’s nothing to think about,” I told him. “You ditched me at that party, and Lucas came to get me. You ditched us for Addy all the time. On my birthday, you didn’t talk to me until Addy left, while Lucas went out of his way to make it special.”
“I know that Lucas has been really nice to you – but face it. He’s not mature enough for a real relationship.”
“What do you mean?” I asked, although I wasn’t sure if I wanted to know.
“This is just a summer fling. Once you leave, he’ll forget about you.”
“Oh, thanks! I’m that forgettable?” Tears sprung unwanted to my eyes.
“No, that’s not what I meant!” 
“Well what did you mean?”
“I meant… long distance relationships are hard, and I don’t think Lucas could handle it.”
“And I supposed you think you could?” I said, hoping I wouldn’t start to cry.
“I’d like to try,” he told me. I studied him – his brown hair was a little fuzzy and tousled. His bright blue eyes shined with intensity. There was a shower of freckles across his cheekbones and nose. He was handsome, that was for sure.
But he wasn’t Lucas.
“I’m sorry,” I turned and fled down the stairs.

 AN: So, Natalie chose Lucas (not that anyone could've expected much different), but Brayden sure did try pretty hard to put some doubts in her mind. Do you guys think she's going to listen to him and let what he said get to her, or is she going to let it go? ;) You'll have to find out. Thanks so much for reading. Have an amazing day. ♥

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