Witty Profiles
Diary of a dead girl.
Prologue
No one knows how I died, but now I'm back to tell the story.
When I was 13, I had gotten asked out by the only guy I had ever liked.
He was drop dead gorgeous, and his blue ocean eyes reeled everyone in.
He was the perfect boyfriend, but he kept many secrets.
He told me everything I wanted to hear, and wanted to see.
Everyone was so jealous I had him. Everyone.
Everyone was a little too jealous.
One night at a party, we finally decided to go all the way.
But we didn't get to finish, because that night… I was murdered.
Feedback is appreciated.(: I know this introduction wasn't that good, but the story will be better, promise. Also, I need names for the people in my story. If you would like to be in the story, then comment.
XOXOXOXOXOX,
Jaedyn.
114 faves · 32 comments · Jun 3, 2012 10:58pm
Mdstaples
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1 decade ago
MY NAME IS MAGGIE I LOVE IT SO FAR VERY SHORT BUT TO THE POINT!! IM FOLLOWING U
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XxneoncookiexX
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1 decade ago
notify me please:)♥
Thank you:)!♥
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gangan
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1 decade ago
this story is gonna be awsome
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lillys236
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1 decade ago
notify(:♥ thanks you!
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scoobyboo
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1 decade ago
what about the name Avery. thats my name.
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Apage
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1 decade ago
Please write more (: its seems like its gonna be a really good story !
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Th3Br0k3nBl0nde
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1 decade ago
Lauren , Jillian, Ellie :) and I like it :) reminder for chapter 1?
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pandabear33
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1 decade ago
Catherine!!! and this is really good i can't wait to read it!
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AverageBlonde37
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1 decade ago
my names molly💗
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3pointballer
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1 decade ago
WILEY
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SetFireToTheRain
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1 decade ago
My name's Selena :)
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yugiy145
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1 decade ago
can i be da bf :)
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fashionblast
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1 decade ago
I love the prologue and think you seem like an amazing writing. Seems like a great plot! My name is Amanda if you can use my name is the story ... (:
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heidy787
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1 decade ago
omg you tottaly pulled me in with this prologue.. my name is Heidy..it's not pretty tho..LOL
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dbee372
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1 decade ago
Dana(:
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Thewittygirl
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1 decade ago
Thank you so much guys! ~ I have gotten almost all the names I need! But I need more! God bless ~
xoxoxoxox, Jaedyn.
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craziirose
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1 decade ago
Sounds ah-mazing! Please notify me!
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Miss_Princess37
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1 decade ago
my name is alittle ugly but i'll give it a chance...its Celine (Selin) :) and if im not in it can you tell me when it starts btw i fallow you :)
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The_Drama_Girl
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1 decade ago
I'd love to be in it. My names Alyssa :). If I'm not in it, could I still get a reminder for when the next chapter is up? I like this :)
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randomcrayon12 · 1 decade ago
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First of all, Me && My cousin think this story is VERY good so far!! :) So keep up with the great writing!! :) The second thing, I would love to be in your story! I know that people might sound better when they asked you but at least i gave it a shot!! :D Haha, Well i would love to be in your story and if i'm not in it then that's cool(: Will you please tell me when you have the first chapter up?? It's THAT GOOD!! thanks!!
~ ♥ Ashlynn :)