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Fly Me To The Moon ...

By BrokenWings_

-----CHAPTER 1-----

-----TWELVE YEARS AGO-----

"Holycrapholycrapholycrapholycrap...!" Tracy gripped my arm so hard it hurt. "Eeeehhh!!" She let out a kind of strangled excited squeal over the littlest of things. "I'm about. To. DIE!! Mark said I was funny! Did you see that? Did you see that? Ohhhhh my gosh! I'm about. To die! It's like the first time a guy's actually shown any interest in me!" I looked over to my left to my other friend, Briar, and we exchanged dubious glances.
Tracy has dated so many guys, we'd lost count, and she couldn't even remember her first boyfriend. In so many ways, i was extremely jealous of her. She was beautiful, sweet, fun-loving, vivacious--why wouldn't guys show interest in her? I was the one who no one paid any attention to. I was the shy one. "Ohhhh my gosh! I'm about to die!!"
"Tracy, you've died like fifty times already!" Carla, on Tracy's other side said dryly.
Tracy giggled. "I know, i know! just--oh mygosh! This guy's not a d*****bag, and
he's not mean, or a player or anything...he's different."
Finally! Although...that's always what Tracy thought. until they broke her heart and proved her wrong. I smiled. "I'm glad, Tracy." She beamed at me.
She opened her mouth to speak and--RIINGG! The bell. We were officially late to class. "Ugh..." She muttered. "I'm gonna be soo late to class! See ya at lunch girls!" And our little group dissolved as we ran off into different directions.
Crap. My next period teacher, Mr. Canfield, hated my guts. I don't know why--but he just did. I started walking faster, sliding through the halls like an expert, watching my feet go backwards, forwards, backwards, forwards and-- "Oof!!"
In a flash i fell to the ground and my books tumbled down all around me, and i barely had time to take it all in.
"I-I'm so sorry," I stuttered, gathering up loose paper, not bothering to look at who i had collided with. I run through the halls with my head down. The world doesn't deserve looking at something as ugly as me. So i guess i deserved the mess...
I reached out blindly to my left for more papers when something warm came into contact with my fingers--a hand. I looked up.
My eyes widened. There, on the ground next to me, was a guy. And not just any guy...a hot guy. And i made him fall. i made a hot guy fall. Ohh...and he was probably popular, too. Even if he was one of the nice ones, he'd tell his mean friends, and they'd just use it as an excuse to make me miserable. And they'd never stop bullying me or dummy-locking me or stealing my possessions--even though I was friends with Tracy "Hot Stuff" Myers.
"No, no! I'm sorry!" He said. I was shocked. His voice was so gracious and sincere.
Then I realized he was helping me pick up my papers.
"I should've looked where i was going." He said simply.
"Oh! No, no, it's okay, it's fine!" We rose simultaneously. He handed me my papers. "Thanks," I looked at him properly for the first time.
And gasped.
His eyes...they...they were startling. I've never seen eyes like that before in my whole entire life... A cool, calming chrome green, with fiery amber specks. But there was something else...something i couldn't quite place. He was frowning.
I followed the gaze of his intense eyes. To my wrists. Oh gosh...my bracelets slipped. He was staring at my scars. My cuts. My souvenirs of all my lonely nights when i couldn't tell my friends a thing, so I just bled. And bled. And bled. I gulped. He looked me straight in the eyes, and i almost died.
"What's your name?" He asked.
"I-I really gotta get going...!" I turned, but he grabbed my arm.
"What's your name?"
"A-Amber..."
"Amber..." His grip on my arm, so foreign, lessened and his hand traveled down to my wrist. His thumb traced my scars. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a red sharpie. I watched him wide-eyed, like prey eying its predator, knowing its doom beforehand, knowing all hope was lost.
But i didn't know my doom. Not yet.
He uncapped it, and put the cool tip to my arm. I closed my eyes and flinched. Then looked back down. It was a heart. Just a heart. He drew a heart on my wrist... I looked at him curiously. "If you cut," He said kindly. "You'll cut my heart. You wouldn't want to break my heart, would you?"
The question took me completely by surprise. I hoped on not ever breaking anyone's heart. Slowly, I shook my head no.
"Then promise me you won't cut those wrists of yours again."
"I-I...uh..."
"Amber. Promise." His voice was admirably steadfast. I gave up.
"I-I promise."



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vultersreject · 1 decade ago
I like it!!!!!!!!!!! realy goooood!
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faith_is_passionate_intuition · 1 decade ago
"...a hot guy. And i made him fall. i made a hot guy fall" that made me laugh :) OMG THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD!
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tiffaniecass25 · 1 decade ago
i lovvvveee thisssss.
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annabanana090 · 1 decade ago
Stories like this make me wonder if that'll happen to me, or even if theres a boy out there who would do that.
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LexiLovesAngela · 1 decade ago
I Wanna be a Model
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grownsimba · 1 decade ago
I love this.!
& we don't even too much know his name.
and she's definitely going to get yelled out by the teacher who doesn't like her.
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1live2love9laugh6 · 1 decade ago
Oh. My. God. That is the sweetest thing ever. I wish someone would do something like that for me. (':
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lilyrain · 1 decade ago
Keep writing!! Xxx
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sarafayee21 · 1 decade ago
amazing!
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