Witty Profiles
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Chapter 2
"Hey, do you need a ride
home?"
I was midway down the school corridors, nearly reaching the exit
of the building.
I turned around frantically, spotting the same jock who pitied me
earlier today.
Why wouldn't he leave me alone?
I shook my head, spinning back around, walking a tad bit faster
this time.
I heard footsteps catching up to me, as the brunette jock
suddenly appeared over my shoulder.
"Are you sure? It's raining hard outside." he gave
me a gentle smile. "I would hate for you to have to get
soaked in the rain."
I clenched my jaw with uncertainty, as I stared at the jock with
disbelief.
As we reached the double doors of the exit, he turned to me, once
again.
"Well, come on. I won't hurt you." he
assured.
A shiver sent down my spine at his choice of words.
If only this stranger knew how much those words just meant to
me.
After not replying, he took a hold of my hand.
I immediately flinched, pulling my hand away quickly.
He frowned with concern filling his perfect features.
"Just follow me." he whispered, holding the door for
me.
I was a bit hesitant, but I stepped outside.
He led the way towards the school parking lot, which was pretty
much empty by now.
He approached an expensive looking BMW, clicking the unlock
button on his keys.
The car made a beeping noise, as he gestured for me to sit in the
passenger seat.
I gnawed on my lower lip, entering the car.
The car looked so nice on the inside, with fine, black leather
seating.
I almost didn't want to touch it, since I was afraid of
ruining it.
He started to turn on the engine, pulling out of the parking
lot.
The sweet sound of Coldplay quietly blared out of his speakers,
as he bobbed his head to the rhythm.
"I don't think we properly introduced ourselves to each
other yet. I'm Hunter." he spoke.
I stared up at him, as he looked at me through the corner of his
eye.
Was he expecting me to say something back to him?
I shifted uncomfortably in my seat, staring out at the
window.
The rain wasn't getting any better, in fact, it was pouring
down.
"If you don't feel comfortable, I understand." he
said. "I know your name already, Hayden, right?"
I gulped, turning my head to face him.
I nodded at him briefly.
His lips twitched upwards into a sly smile.
"Hayden is an interesting name, you know. It think it suits
you."
I stared down at my feet.
I hated my name.
Hayden.
One of the reasons why my father hated me so much was because he
didn't want a daughter, he wanted another son.
And his second son was suppose to be named Hayden, but he got
stuck with me.
I remember the angry look on his face when I use to cry.
"This is the reason why I wanted another son! Not some
immature girl who cries over everything! You're a
mistake!" he cursed.
I was a mistake.
"Hey, Hayden? Are you okay?" Hunter asked.
I snapped out of my thoughts, staring at him.
The car had stopped, and Hunter was staring at me curiously.
"We're at your house." he said.
I stared out the window, recognizing the egg white house that we
were parked in front of.
I reached for the handle, opening the car door.
Before I closed it, I turned back to Hunter.
I nodded at him as a signal to thank him.
827 faves · 52 comments · Jan 17, 2012 9:44pm
xxalixjaayxx
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1 decade ago
IN. LOVE. ♥
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xbrianna97x
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1 decade ago
MORE. <3 AHHH !
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frisco0317
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1 decade ago
I WANNA KNOW WHAT THEY LOOK LIKE POST THE PICS :D
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jane :-)*
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1 decade ago
Hunter and Hayden. Those names are so cute together. (:
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abster70
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1 decade ago
MORE! this is AH.MA.ZING!
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Awesome_Laura
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1 decade ago
EPIC :D
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lovelesslady94
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1 decade ago
oh my i love it allready ur amazing :) when u become an author i will buy your books
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danberry1997
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1 decade ago
Awwwwwe come on she should have said sommeeething.. but omfg I love this story so much.
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_IHateYuhSwagg
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1 decade ago
AHH! Make Chapter Threee!
:DDD
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yuRbeautifull
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1 decade ago
chapterr3♥
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sk8ter_gurl_17
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1 decade ago
omg amazing! i cant wait for the next chapter :) and for the jock i was picturing some hot guy then when he said his name was hunter i can only picture the hunter i kno, who is not my type lets just say... lol and its weird how he knows where she lives but i love the story :)
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heeyitsJess
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1 decade ago
SOOO GOOD SO FAR((: buut how did hunter know where she lived..loool staaalkeeer(;
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lissa87
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1 decade ago
i lovee itt. and im loling at the coommentt 2 under mee:P
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quotesfromthecore
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1 decade ago
i love the name hayden(: i used that in my new story too! lol weird coincidence.. anyways i think you should've made her say at least ONE word to him.
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sam*
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1 decade ago
Funny, Its Actually The Dads Fault They Didnt Have A Boy Because The Man Holds The Genes For A Baby Boy... ^__^ Anyways LOOOOOVE your stories !!! moooore!! And I Know A Hunter.. He Has 6 Toes On One Foor.. Cool Dude
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lovergirl1111
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1 decade ago
I love you're book it's so interesting keep them up :)
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XoX_XoX
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1 decade ago
I love your books so much!! Can you read mine. I need to know if they are good and what i should do.
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supercalifredge
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1 decade ago
how would he know where she lived? stalker....
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NikholeBooshay
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1 decade ago
It's making me mad about how she won't talk gah!
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XoX_XoX · 1 decade ago
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I need more!! <3
Also can you check out my book. IDK if it is good?