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 Mr. Right Chapter 12

Off we went on our italian adventure.
My tears now wiped away and a smile spread on my face.
He always had a wonderful way to make me smile.
We sat down at our table and Tyler ordered two plates of home-made spaghetti.
I was so nervous.
"Leda?"
"Yes?"
"I know I shouldn't say this, but I really believe.....well I can't help but notice your staring at me..."
I blushed....hard.
I just blushed and looked at my hands until he tilted up my chin and continued to speak. "Its okay because I can tell by your eyes that your in love with me."
WHAT?! Wait....was I?
No I had....wait I HAD a boyfriend. 
HAD.
Not anymore. 
He cheated. It was unforgivable. and I really liked Tyler so....I guess I sorta was in love with him.
"Oh. Really?" I stuttered. Oops. ;)
He just flashed me that winning smile. "I want to ask you something" he breathed "Well....do you think its okay if you went out with me? I mean you don't even have to stay I just love you so much and it would make my whole life if you did."
This was so sudden, but I was to weak.
"Absolutly." I smiled.
He smiled and I saw a gleam of happiness in his eyes.
This was love.


*****3 years later*****

Tyler and I had been going out for two years before he proposed.
Jerry tried to "make up" for what he did but like I said...it was unforgivable. 
And besides I was pregnant with Tyler's baby. 
Tyler said he had a surprise for me today, but he didn't seem to happy to give me it.
All he said was to meet him at the beach.
I put on a white sundress and flip flops and walked to the beach.
It was night so the stars were out and the sky was beautiful of glittery stars.
I finally saw a small fire with Tyler sitting near it.
I walked over and tackled him and giggled.
"Hi stranger." I smiled.
He just looked at me.
What was wrong?
"Wheres my surprise?" I asked curiously but not to eager.
He got down on his knees in front of me and I could tell he was holding back tears.
"Leda....I have to tell you a terrible thing. It seems that I'm sick and I'v only got weeks. Please don't be sad now I really believe that you were the greatest thing that has ever happened to me."
I busted into tears and fell to my knees. 
I was to weak.
Pain.
Devastation.
Hurt. 
Sadness.
Love.
Heartbreaking news.
It was all to much. I covered my face and started to sob quietly until I felt warm hands wrap around me.
"Please don't cry." he said...crying.
Tears. More tears.
He couldn't go. "We can get kemo. Radiation. Something!" I screamed. He just shook his head. How could he be so hopeless? I cried into his shoulder. That night was one of the worst.


****6 weeks later*****

BEEP...BEEP.....BEEP..........silence....
Tyler was gone. Gone forever. I held his icy hand and cried into his chest.
He had no more black hair. Baldness was all that was left. He was still the most beautiful man I'v ever seen.
He had on his hospital gown and the scarf I gave him from our first day.
No more life.
No more hope.
No more Tyler. 


***14 years later*****

"By the time I was your age I'd give anything to fall in love. To find a boyfriend and all that, but then I met your father, the man of my dreams. Now son I'm only telling you this because life can do terrible things...Don't fall in love. There is just way to much to lose. I can't bear to see the same thing happen to you. He was truley my Mr. Right....."


THE END.




SPC- Sorry for the sad ending :( I litterally started crying when I wrote the end D: but anyways next story WILL be longer, happier, better, more epic and all that good stuff. BUUUT first I need more views. Good luck. 

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bella1200 · 1 decade ago
um okay i just like cried at the end an i only read the chapter this was really good im writing my first story so feel free to read it
kkthanksbye:)
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