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Westwater Downs
Chapter One

The screeching sound of an alarm clock peirced the air, and Rhyya groaned, rolling over, only to crash into the wall beside her bed.
"Owww!" She cried, her green eyes flashing open, rubbing her elbow gingerly.
"Stupid wall. Who the hell put you there?" She cursed, rolling back over and swinging her legs over the side of her bed.
Fully awake now, Rhyya, more commonly know as Mitt, flicked her alarm onto 'Radio' grabbed her dressing gown and phone, before promtly walking downstairs.
"Morning, Mitt," her mum said softly, whilst trying to spoon food into baby Darcy's mouth.
"Hiya mum, whats happening, little monster?" Greeted Mitt, ruffling the baby's short hair.
A short while later, a breakfasted, showered, elegantly dressed Rhyya stood once again in the kitchen, phone in hand, checking her many new messages.
'Nothing new,' she thought, sighing inwardly.
Shoving her phone in her pocket, Mitt scribbled a note to her mum;
Gone to the Garden of Fawn. Mitt.
She frowned at the paper.
The words 'Garden of Fawn' were blotchy and smudged.
Mitt shrugged, turned on her heel, and walked out the door.

My first story! Feedback is appreciated!
I know it isn't great. It's sort of the introductory chapter,
things will get more interesting!


Nmf. 


 

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Westwater Downs Chapter One The screeching sound of an alarm

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donteventhinkaboutit · 1 decade ago
i like your story a lot so far:)

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Marigail · 1 decade ago
Cute story! Keep going (:
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