xjuicygirlx
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1 decade ago
I think the story would be better in first-person.
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Calcipher
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1 decade ago
hey i read your story :)
i like how they are short and leave the reader to imagine lots of the story.
personally, i'm into the fantasy genre and what not, but keep writing :)
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hannahrose226 · 1 decade ago
I like your story a lot! Lol. It's really good (:
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