“Nicole!” Chelsea Heathernall cried “Where the hell did you go?” She screamed. “Guys, come on, help me find her!” She said. Tori Puerskia followed close behind, scared as hell, after came Crista McJore and lastly Brittany Mouh.
            “Where is she?” Brittany asked
            “If I knew, do you think I would be screaming her name and looking for her?” Chelsea retorted.
            “Guys, cool down. We’ve had a long day and we’re all worried. Let’s just go back inside and relax. She’ll definitely come back in. What is she going to stay out her all night?” Brittany suggested. She pushed a long caramel colored piece of hair out of her face and behind her ears.
            Tori butted in, “Yeah guys, I agree with Brittany. These woods are freakin’ scary and we should go back inside. If Nicole is sane, she’ll come back in and soon.”
They had all been playing manhunt not too long ago. Tori and Chelsea vs. Nicole and Brittany. Nicole and Brittany had been hiding. They had found Brittany, but they never found Nicole. They’d been looking for at least an hour and it was getting late and cold.
            They all piled inside, worried and frantic. They sat on Nicole’s suede couch silent. It felt weird being in Nicole’s house with, you know, no Nicole. All of them kept picturing in their minds that in any second, Nicole would burst through the door and say “Haha I got you! I win!” Knowing her, this is exactly what she would do to win. She is so competitive. Everyone was still silent, when Tori finally spoke “What if she never comes back?” She whispered, so quietly everyone else almost couldn’t hear them. Chelsea hugged her. “She will.” She add just as quietly “I promise” 

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