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hey witty this is my story i have been writeing i just thought i would share it with you please tell me what you think of it
  1. youdontknowher youdontknowher
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    February 17, 2013 6:54pm UTC
    You say you know her name but do you know her story? part 2 Beginning
    One night the little girl was sitting in her room playing when she heard a crash she went down stairs to see what it was, “daddy, what was that noise”
    She sees her mother with the gun she ducks down and goes around to the other stair case she sees him on the ground so she runs behind the couch crying she hears her mother screaming
    “You can’t take her she’s my daughter”
    “Well she can’t stay here you’re a drunk and I won’t let you poison her mind, more then you already have.”
    “I’m sorry but if you going to take her I’m going to take your life”
    “Please mommy, stop it please” there were streams of tears coming from her eyes as she ran to her dad
    “Daddy!”
    “Don’t worry honey everything will be fine, go back to bed.
    She ran behind the couch again
    Hid her face in her teddy bear and she heard the shot then anther and one more it was over he was gone as she looked over the couch she saw her mother put her hand to her lips and said “shhh.”
    after that her mother told her “come with me” as she griped her arm with all her strength and dragged her up stairs and hit her into her room that night she was crying more then she has ever cried before, hugging her only friend, her teddy bear she finally and silently cries herself to sleep but she comes back to reality in the morning when her mom comes in saying get up you have a lot of work to do” in a very rude tone
    Making her clean the whole houses as she tries to hold back the tears but it’s hard. After she’s done she sits in that corner behind the couch with her music blasted so no one hears her crying hugging her friend dreaming of a place far from here where you can’t even see one cloud where the sun never sets and where everyone is loved.
    This is the story about Abby a little girl that was never really understood

  2. youdontknowher youdontknowher
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    February 17, 2013 6:48pm UTC
    You say you know her name but do you know her story?
    She was the kind of girl to keep to herself they made fun of her calling her a loner, but they didn’t see the truth, she didn’t have the best life her dad dying when she was so young and her mother being an abusive drunk going out to parties every night and the worst part is she’s only 6. having seen a lot more than a little girl should, she is scarred and those scars can’t be seen but just like real scars they will never go away. No one understands why she has to hide so much pain that she can’t explain. Seeing all the mommies and daddies walking their children to school as she walks alone, she cries wishing she could have that, but she gets through the day the teacher stares at her bruise and she wonder why doesn’t she say anything, why does she sit back while things are happening but she doesn’t want to talk about it anyway so she doesn’t make a sound.
    “I pray every night for one good thing why does god have to keep knocking me down Every time I get up” she cries staring out her window the thing that’s keeping her alive is the memory of her dad she will never forget that night and she will never forgive her mother for what she did.

  3. youdontknowher youdontknowher
    posted a quote
    February 17, 2013 6:31pm UTC
    hey witty im not new to this site but i decided to write a story if you want you can read it and tell me what you think but i dont know how often i will be useing this one because i have my main witty but if you like it i will try to post on this one as much as i can

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