Will someone please give me feedback on a paper I wrote for creative writing? I feel like it's the best one I've done this year, but I wan't know how you feel while reading it. Like if it's too confusing or anything. Please let me know if you'd like to take a look at it, I'd really appreciate the feedback. Thanks. xoxo
Black Rose Empty pedal piece cry of horrible swirls a life faded or gone shades of lies and sins captured the beauty and turned it black all it wanted was some magic and love to turn it back to its beautiful self.
Him♥ What color is his hair? Brown. What style is it? Short. (he needs to grow it out again. c; ) What color are his eyes? Brown. Cute smile? Yeah. (: Braces? No. Glasses? No. Abs? Yeah. Height? Uh, 6 feet. What grade is he in? 12th How did you meet him? At Central Park. How long have you known him? Since 8th grade. Does he play any sports? Yes. Can he play the guitar? No. What about any other music instrument? No. Do you guys ever text? Everyday.(: Describe something he would wear on a typical day: Jeans and a T-shirt. What's your favorite thing you've seen him wear? Nothing. Tattoos? Yes. XD one. lmao. Least favorite thing about him: He's a brat. Do your friends know that you like him? Duh, he's my boyfriend. Do you think your parents would like him if you were dating him? They already like him, and I am dating him. (: Have you met his parents: Yeah. What would you do if he saw your Witty? Nothing.
These are the days, of wonder and miracle Half stoned half drunk, I really can't feel it though Started confused and ended up spiritual Now everything's different, my world has gone upside down All of this distance, don't know what I'm talking about My friend's think I lost it And so between me and you, I'm telling the truth I think the government is lying, to me and to you And that's a d@mn shame (d@mn shame) Cause I'm on mushrooms Mushrooms I guess I don't feel it All the mushrooms And now I'm floating in the ocean, with no sign of land Lost out at sea, finding out who I am (I am myself) [x6] ~Mod Sun