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June 26, 2012 10:57pm UTC

Priceless
Chapter 2
Lennon walked through her closet running her fingers over the endless pairs of designer jeans, blouses, skirts, and dresses as she combed through her things looking for something to wear to the party tonight. There wasn't much information given regarding the formality of the party so Lennon was trying her best to find a suitable outfit. She had no idea what to wear, but she knew it had to be perfect. Lennon reached for her black pencil skirt and her favorite floral top. She slid on her white wedges and decided that her outfit would suffice. As she ran her flat iron over her blonde curls and touched up her makeup she heard a soft tapping on her door. Dakota was standing in her doorway decked out in 5 inch stilettos and a formfitting black metallic dress. She looked like she was about to go to the club, not a party. Even though Dakota was only a sophomore, she was just as well liked in the junior class as Lennon, granting her entry to any party she desired.
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When the girls pulled up to the party Dakota seemed to jump out of the car before it even reached a full stop. As they entered the party it was apparent that there was a lot of drinking going on. The bitter smell of vodka and beer was almost palpable in the air and judging by the amount of people at the party, it was no surprise.
Lennon, unlike most of her friends, didn't drink. Dakota, on the other hand, loved to drink, party, and be the wild brunette that she really was. She was known for getting out of control but she was lucky enough to have Lennon there to cover for her and protect her already tarnished reputation.
Lennon spotted Blake from across the room, his hair was tousled and he looked like he just rolled out of bed. Drunk, Lennon though to herself with a disgusted look on her face. He grabbed Lennon around the waist tightly and when he whispered hello in her ear she could smell the vodka on his breath. Disgusting, she thought as she tried to free herself. Lennon hated Blake's attitude when he was drunk. He became an the arrogant and cocky jock that even Blake himself hated. When Lennon finally unhinged herself from his grasp he seemed unsteady and almost fell over as Lennon maneuvered through the crowd towards her friend Taitlyn. Taitlyn's beautiful curly brown hair was pin straight down her back and her heavy makeup made her green eyes pop, she was undeniably stunning. Taitlyn seemed carefree and happy while Lennon was uneasy and anxious. Her boyfriend was acting like a drunk jerk and her sister was off with vodka in one hand and a boy in another.
It was going to be a long night.
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Priceless
Chapter 1
Lennon walked into school along side her sister as the crowded halls seemed to part for them like the Red Sea. It didn't take long for Dakota to spot her friends. They were all standing in a corner smiling into their mirrors and taking pictures with their cell phones. Their skin tight skirts and blouses were drawing much attention from the freshman boys who seemed to drool over the beautiful sophomores. Dakota was wild. Although Lennon was older, a junior, her younger sister had always been more mischievous then her and her far from perfect reputation never seized to grow.
Lennon spotted her friends standing near the entrance to the school. Her friends were not as stunning as Lennon, but they were pretty close. Taitlyn was Lennon's best friend, she had curly brown hair, striking hazel eyes and a body that a model would kill for. Annabelle, Lianna, and Cassie were their partners in crime. The five girls did everything together, and always looked beautiful when they did. Everyone knew who they were and everyone wanted to be their best friend.
Before Lennon could even speak a word to her friends, Blake grabbed her around the waist and pulled her in for a kiss. Blake was Lennon's boyfriend, the boy that everyone wanted. He was captain of the football team, gorgeous beyond belief, and sweet as can be, but he was not exactly the smartest of the bunch and everyone knew it.
After their embrace Lennon hugged her friends as they all giggled and squealed about how gorgeous they all looked on the first day of school, and about the party that they would all attend later that night. It all seemed like fun and games, but these girls had no idea that their fairytale lives were about to be interrupted.
Sorry this chapter was pretty boring, I'm still trying to get through everyones introductions for now.
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June 18, 2012 1:00pm UTC

Priceless
Introduction
Lennon woke up to the sound of soft beeps escaping her iPhone. The sun was slowly rising as she stepped into her brand new pair of Seven jeans. Her mother was calling to her from down stairs as she got dressed. Her soft pink mac lip stick looked flawless on her porcelain face and bouncy blonde curls framed her perfect oval shaped head. As she walked down the marble hallways of her beautiful home, her sister Dakota emerged from her room. She was almost as breathtaking as Lennon. Her long black hair flowed straight down her back, almost reaching her waist, and her brand new dress flowed softly as she walked down the stairs. Dakota was a sophomore, and Lennon loved her dearly, but the two were very competitive when it came to looks. Both girls looked like they had just stepped out of vogue magazine, both were stunning, and both of them knew it.
"School starts in half an hour, you don't want to be late to your first day of school!", their mother called from the breakfast table. Lennon and Dakota clearly took after their mother, her honey blonde hair and pale blue eyes made her stand out among other women her age. Married men starred as she walked by, only to get a dirty look from their less appealing wives. Their father was also very handsome. His chiseled features and seemingly perfect bone structure made you look twice at him. His hair was thick and brown on the top of his head, unlike other men his age whom already had thinning hair.
Lennon was a lucky girl, she lived in a beautiful mansion with her lovely family. She didn't realize how blessed she was until it all came crashing down.
She lived a life of luxury that other people could only dream of. Her life was priceless.
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I want to start a story.
would anyone read it?
comment.

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