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Scooo ♥
Short and sweet
This account is for my stories,
I have another account.
Bio?
I'm Amy, young :), my eyes turn purple O.o normally blue, brown hair, shortish. Yeah, liverpool ♥ and...
Yuhh, will edit this..
but for noww
BUBYEE! ♥
 









































Rawrthewriter
  1. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
    posted a quote
    December 5, 2011 3:10pm UTC
    The Enemy.
    chapter 9
    The next day, in school, Jenny looked a bit better.
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    I think she looks lovely.
    She looked at me, eyeing my outfit up and down.
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    She gave me a nod of approval, and I smiled at her.
    "Hey, babe," says Cody to her, "Why don't you look so nice today?" He held her arms with his hands and gave a smug smile.
    "I don't want to dress the way you like," she said, pulling away a bit.
    I walked down the hall and by the toilets..
    I hid round the corner, but I let my head pop round the corner to watch.
    "I want to dress how I like." she said,
    "But I like it when you dress for me," he said pushing her against the wall.
    He kissed her, hard.
    He pushed his lips onto hers, forcing the kiss.
    Jenny pushed him back.
    She ran to the toilets, leaving Cody with a smile on his face.
    Jenny's friends smacked him in the face, but he laughed.
    I walked up to him.
    "Who the f*ck do you think you are?" I shouted at him.
    "Why would you care? She's your enemy,"
    "Well, I care because for the last few days, we've talked and became friends. I made her look the way she wanted 2 days ago, but you can't treat a girl right, because you forced Jenny to dress the way you liked for your entertainment. So you're a b*stard! Go f*ck yourself!" I said, and I slapped him. Hard.
    I walked back into the toilets to find Jenny locked inside a cubicle.
    I heard the familiar sound of crying, and a sniff, then silence.
    "Jenny, it's okay, you're friends and I slapped him." I said,
    "No, it's not okay," she replied, "you don't know how far he could try and go with me, I hate him and he knows, but he said that if I break up with him he'll do all sorts to hurt me."
    I stood there, shocked at her reply.
    Silence.
    Silence.
    Silence.
    I bit my thumbnail, tapping my foot.
    I didn't know what else to say.
    I yanked the toilet door hard, and walked away.
    If she doesn't want my help, I won't force her, but when she's upset, and she comes crying, I'm not going to be as helpful.

  2. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
    posted a quote
    December 4, 2011 7:01am UTC
    The Enemy
    chapter 8
    I saw Jenny's Facebook status.
    "Back to my old ways. Silly me♥"
    I knew she didn't enjoy dressing like that.
    She looked horrible.
    I was at home at this time, and in my Pajamas.
    My super comfy, warm ones.
    I also had my really comfy adorable slippers on.
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    Jenny kept crossing my mind.
    How she looked when she dressed as her normal self.
    The difference between her old self and her not lasting new self.
    "Jenny, I helped you!" I screamed at the laptop, which made my Mum concerned.
    "Shiloh, are you alright?" She shouted from the bottom of the stairs, "I heard you, you're talking about Jenny."
    "Yeah, I'm fine." I say, hearing my Mum walking up the stairs.
    She slowly opened my bedroom door.
    "What's happened now?" she asks.
    "Jenny isn't normally the way she looks, she's more like me," I start.
    "What, you mean sitting in her Mickey Mouse Pajamas at 8 o'clock stalking the opposite persons Facebook page on the laptop?" she jokes.
    "No, Mum," I laugh, "She dresses like me, not like that. And before you mention my Pajamas, I mean the way I dress to school."
    "Well, it's up to her, is there any reason for her to dress like that?"
    "You mean like Cody wants her to dress like that?"
    My Mum looks shocked.
    "Well, never find a boy like him, find one that loves you for who you are." she says, as she stands up and walks out of the room.
    Yeah, Mum's right, that's what Jenny needs.
    ****
    Feedback? first chapter in AGES! :) new format too :)

  3. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
    posted a quote
    November 18, 2011 2:11pm UTC
    The Enemy
    Chapter 7
    When I arrived at school, I saw Jenny and her gang of friends.
    Wait. Jenny.
    She was back to her old clothes!
    She looked at me and gave me a disappointed half smile.
    Cody.
    That ignorant b*stard!
    Jenny... Her outfit...
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    She snapped her skinny fingers at her waist, telling me to do what she says.
    "I'm going to go to the toilet," she said, "be right back."
    "Can't I come?" said Callie,
    "No!"
    I went into the toilets.
    She walked in.
    "What happened?" I asked,
    "I'm back to my old ways!"
    "Because of Cody?"
    "Yes, I don't wanna do this but... he forced me to."
    "Yeah so don't do it."
    "Look, Shiloh, I appreciate all of your help, but maybe, it wasn't supposed to happen, you know?"
    "Yeah, but you said I'm what you are!"
    "You are, but Cody gets what he wants, and I can't say no to him."
    "Yes, you can!"
    "Look, thanks, but, I can't."
    And with that, she walked out, her pink high heels clipping. Clip, clop. Clip, clop. Clip, clop.
    I looked at myself in the mirror.
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    I walked to class, trying to make what happened sink in.
    She changes for a stupid b*stard.
    That's not right.
    He must of hurt her really bad, that she'd do anything for him.
    What should I do? I asked myself.
    I'll do nothing.
    I'll leave her to find out that she made the wrong decision.
    ********
    Not really long. Will make a chapter 7 part 2.

  4. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
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    November 18, 2011 11:40am UTC
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  5. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
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    November 15, 2011 1:29pm UTC
    The Enemy
    Chapter 5
    Jenny walked past me after class. She opened her pink locker and peered inside, taking out a pack of tissues.
    Why was she taking out a pack of tissues?
    She looked around, quickly, sneakily. Then, she ran into the toilets.
    "What's up with her?" asked Liam, followed by the slam of a cubicle door.
    "I don't know," I said, covering my popped ears."I'll go in, stay there."
    I walked at normal pace to the door to the toilets. As soon as I reached the door, I opened it quitely, trying not to make it squeak. I entered the toilets, and quietly closed the door.
    I heard a soft sobbing sound, then a sniffle, and no noise at all.
    "Jenny?" I said,
    "No, it's Alisha Maygrow." She said, imitating Alisha. Alisha is the quitest girl in class, but she doesn't ever cry.
    "Jenny, I know it's you."
    "Shiloh?!" she asked, noticing it was my voice.
    "Yeah, Jenny, I know we're like... Sworn enemies, but come on, tell me what's wrong."
    "No." she spat, rejecting my offer.
    "Come on, Jenny."
    She sighed. I heard the door unlock and saw the change from red, to green on the notifier. She slowly opened the door.
    "Cody..." She began.
    "Come on," I said, putting my arm around the enemy.
    Enemy! Woah..
    "Cody cheated on me! I was in his house, I went up to his bedroom and the bed was moving and a blonde girl poked her head up from the covers, covering her chest!" she cried.
    "Right, he's not good enough for you, okay? Now, you're coming with me, we're going to get some ice cream and I'mma shove it down your throat and you're gonna cry, let everything out, ENEMIES OR NOT!"
    I said.
    "Thank you?"
    ****
    Not too long, sorry. the first one I've done in a while but oh well. :)

  6. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
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    November 8, 2011 2:56am UTC
    The Enemy
    Chapter 4
    I strode into school wearing my new favourite outfit
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    I looked down the corridoor. There was Liam. He waved to me, to make it obvious he was in my view. I started walking towards him, but on the way, Jenny eyed me. I stared at her and sarcastically smiled.
    She walked in my way and slammed me onto the lockers.
    "If you tell anyone about yesterday," she started, "I will break your bones." She said, letting me go.
    I noticed her silver eyeshadow which was spread all around her eyes, her bright pink lipstick which moved when she spoke and her big eyelashes. Her outfit and makeup was vile.
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    "No you won't." I said pushing her away.
    "What are you gonna do about it?" she asked.
    "My Dad's a cop." I smiled.
    And I made my way to Liam, leaving a horrible look on Jenny's make-up filled face.
    "What was that all about?" asked Liam, as I got closer to him.
    "Oh, nothing." I said, "If I tell you, she'll 'break my bones.'"
    "Does she know your Dad's a cop?" he asked
    "She does now."
    Jenny kissed Cody in class again. They didn't need to cool off though, haha, difference.
    Me and Liam looked at eachother, disgusted.
    Jenny's lipstick had yet again, been printed onto Cody's face, which now had pink lipstick all over it. All around it.
    Busy much?
    Me and Liam laughed.
    "What are you laughing at?" Jenny spat.
    "Nothing that involves you." I replied, as she sat back in her seat.
    ***
    This is as long as I could make it, need to get ready for school, don't worry, more chapters later :D

  7. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
    posted a quote
    November 7, 2011 1:46pm UTC
    The Enemy
    chapter 3
    20 minutes after the attack of Jenny Albone, she'd posted 38 new photo's from the party onto her facebook page.
    I don't even know why I added her on Facebook in the first place.
    I turned on my stereo and put in my favourite CD.
    I blasted my favourite song, turned on my light and started reading Jenny's diary.
    "Dear diary,
    Today was great. Apart from the fact Shiloh was there. I don't know why I liked Cody. I don't know who would. I should start ignoring him. But I don't know if I like him. He seems to cross my mind a lot.
    His hair, is terrible. His face, isn't the best, but I only like his eyes. Like one bit.
    "The mess." Is my new nickname for Shiloh. She gets on my nerves a lot. If I ever needed help and Shiloh was the last person on the planet, I wouldn't go to her. Ugh. Well I have to go, me and Callie are going to Playerz tonight. I hear it's a boy filled club.
    I was actually reading her diary..
    I could of before, but I'd never gotten round to it. And I don't care what she's wrote about me either, I couldn't care less.
    I started singing the lyrics, then it just turned into a bunch of weird, disfigured words spilling from my mouth which has no use.
    I looked out my window, as the confused neighbour was picking up the pieces of smashed brick. He had phoned the police, and they were already there.
    Haha.
    It's quite funny.
    ***
    FEEDBACK!

  8. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
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    November 7, 2011 12:09pm UTC
    The Enemy.
    chapter 2
    it snowed that night, i watched it fall to the ground as i sat on my bed.
    i saw jenny and her group of "friends" out my balcony window.
    they were going through the alleyway across the road. i saw them, they saw me. she started party waving with her mouth open and her knees bent and her eyes practically popping out of her head.
    i couldn't believe how chavvy they looked, especially jenny.
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    wow..
    "it's snowing, if you can't tell, b*tch, put some clothes on!" i shouted.
    "you!" she shouted.
    "i'm wearing jeans, a t-shirt, a jacket and sneakers while you're wearing your bra, knickers, and stillettos! save it for in your room with cody!" i shouted.
    "f*ck off!"
    "i live in this house, b*tch. now, with your b*stard boyfriend and slutty friends, please leave!"
    she walked off in a huff, as i walked into my room again, regaining the warmth.
    something hit my window. a stone.
    it was jenny.
    i walked out onto my balcony and they threw some more.
    i threw my broken phone. it hit jenny in the face.
    "take that, idiot!" i yelled.
    i threw a hanger but they moved out of the aim way before it could hit them.
    jenny picked up a brick and went to throw it, but on the way back it went into the neighbours garden.
    we heard a smash.
    i laughed as they ran away, then i realised, the neighbour was coming out of their house, so i ran into my bedroom.
    i made sure jenny had left so she coudn't blame the damage on me. she was gone. at last.
    i grabbed my diary.
    this wasn't a diary-diary.
    this was a jenny diary.
    in the back of a certain girls diary, there are a few pages left to write on.
    certain girl? jenny.
    this is jennys diay, from last year.
    i write messages in it.
    "stupid b*tch, go f*ck your boyfriend and yourself."
    i wrote.
    the best part?
    i can put it on her desk in class. she won't know who wrote in it, as i printed, i didn't write cursive...
    ***
    feedback? please?!

  9. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
    posted a quote
    November 7, 2011 2:57am UTC
    Please read my story The Enemy. There are 2 chapters so far and I'm trying to get readers!
    Thanks ♥

  10. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
    posted a quote
    November 7, 2011 2:45am UTC
    The enemy.
    Chapter 2
    It snowed that night, I watched it fall to the ground as I sat on my bed.
    I saw Jenny and her group of "friends" Out my balcony window.
    They were going through the alleyway across the road. I saw them, they saw me. She started party waving with her mouth open and her knees bent and her eyes practically popping out of her head.
    I couldn't believe how chavvy they looked, especially Jenny.
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    Wow..
    "It's snowing, if you can't tell, b*tch, put some clothes on!" I shouted.
    "You!" she shouted.
    "I'm wearing jeans, a t-shirt, a jacket and sneakers while you're wearing your bra, knickers, and stillettos! Save it for in your room with Cody!" I shouted.
    "F*ck off!"
    "I live in this house, b*tch. Now, with your b*stard boyfriend and slutty friends, please leave!"
    She walked off in a huff, as I walked into my room again, regaining the warmth.
    Something hit my window. A stone.
    It was Jenny.
    I walked out onto my balcony and they threw some more.
    I threw my broken phone. It hit Jenny in the face.
    "Take that, idiot!" I yelled.
    I threw a hanger but they moved out of the aim way before it could hit them.
    Jenny picked up a brick and went to throw it, but on the way back it went into the neighbours garden.
    We heard a smash.
    I laughed as they ran away, then I realised, the neighbour was coming out of their house, so I ran into my bedroom.
    I made sure Jenny had left so she coudn't blame the damage on me. She was gone. At last.
    I grabbed my diary.
    This wasn't a diary-diary.
    This was a Jenny diary.
    In the back of a certain girls diary, there are a few pages left to write on.
    Certain girl? Jenny.
    This is Jennys diay, from last year.
    I write messages in it.
    "Stupid b*tch, go f*ck your boyfriend and yourself."
    I wrote.
    The best part?
    I can put it on her desk in class. She won't know who wrote in it, as I printed, I didn't write cursive...
    ***
    feedback? PLEASE?!

  11. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
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    November 7, 2011 2:07am UTC
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  12. rawrthewriter rawrthewriter
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    October 19, 2011 12:24pm UTC
    Young Love
    prologue.
    I sat alone at the wooden bench in the shopping mall. A teenage boy sat by me. He had amazing features.
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    Well, to me anyway. He laughed at a text he got. His laugh was really cute. His bursting blue eyes looked at me happily, and he smiled.
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    "Hi," he said. "Am I in someones space?"
    "No!" I said, scared that he'd leave. "No, no you're not."
    "I'm Danny, you?"
    "Shiloh."
    "Umm, who are you waiting for?"
    "Oh, no one, I'm not popular."
    That blurted out of my mouth! Ugh, not good.
    "Oh, well, what school do you go to?"
    "Robinson high."
    "I go to Hillway high, that's across the road!"
    "Really? That's awesome!"
    "Do you want toa meet up?"
    Oh. My. God. YES!!
    "Sure!"
    "Tomorrow, 'yeah?"
    "Sure!"
    And he winked at me while he walked away.

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