randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
vanessa, you are an amazing writer.
really, your catch me if you can story has me missing summer so so much right now.
i like to write too, but i'm not so good with stories.
i don't want to sound pretentious, but i'll offer a few pointers. sometimes, your grammer is a bit messy and your details are slightly inconsistent. sorry, i can never help but to offer some constructive criticism. i did notice after one of your chapters you mentioned that you are underage. a real knack for grammar will come with time.
hope to be reading one of your books one day! reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
so i have definitely told you this before, but i love your quotes. they're so inspiring. reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
so i know i've messaged you before, and i don't know if you ever answered, but i just thought i'd let you know that your quotes never fail to inspire me. thank you<3 so much. if you ever want someone to listen to you for a change, i'll be here. reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
that you look like someone else? reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
i lovvvve your quotes, and you're so so pretty! seriously, you look so much like this one girl i know its scary. reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
well, recently i got drunk at a party and did something i wouldn't.. normally do. like i hooked up with this kid i barely know. we didn't have , but we did mostly everything else. and like, the people who were there knew what happened. and one of the kids told his lunch table. and i go to a small school, so stuff like that spreads like wildfire. i pretty much got over being everyone knows, but it keeps coming up. like a handful of teachers know now. it's not that i regret doing it, cause i definitely don't. i just don't know what i feel. i'm sort of upset about it, but i don't wanna tell my friends cause i'm the one who usually just says like, everything and i get over it. reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
hey , just like to point out the fact that you're really cool. likei hope you feel really awesome about your life. cause it sounds like a real party. and i'm jealous. k that's all, bye now. reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
i know you never comment me back,
but i really need a confidence boost.
the kinda thing creepy dudes on chatroulette can't fix? reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
CHOCOLATE VANILLA BUTTERSCOTCH?
i practically moaned while reading that. but i'm like a sugaraholic sooo yannooo.i don't even know how much my permit was. i thought it was like $20 to take the test then like $300 for driving schooll... which i have to go to next week. WAH! reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
hiii, i like your quotes. and you're really pretty! reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
random is good. and thank you, i like your picture! reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
how do i know you're eleven?
a) you look eleven in your picture.
b) you commented on that girls quote, stating that you were eleven.
that night i read your quotes.
don't ew me biatcha. moses said respect your elders. reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
holy jesus. i live in ohio too. we have so much un common. only not really but im tipsy so whatever something. phrase. me a sophomoric too. wise moron. and i love your quotes ahahahahahah.welllll that's pretty much all i wanted to say i think. reply
randomxxcardss42xo
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1 decade ago
such a beautiful book. chuck palahniuk makes my life worth living. literally. reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
what is with all of these compliments today? you are too though love!
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randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
why thank you!
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randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
vanessa, you are an amazing writer.
really, your catch me if you can story has me missing summer so so much right now.
i like to write too, but i'm not so good with stories.
i don't want to sound pretentious, but i'll offer a few pointers. sometimes, your grammer is a bit messy and your details are slightly inconsistent. sorry, i can never help but to offer some constructive criticism. i did notice after one of your chapters you mentioned that you are underage. a real knack for grammar will come with time.
hope to be reading one of your books one day!
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
hahah well, you're welcome,
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randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
so i have definitely told you this before, but i love your quotes. they're so inspiring.
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
so i know i've messaged you before, and i don't know if you ever answered, but i just thought i'd let you know that your quotes never fail to inspire me. thank you<3 so much. if you ever want someone to listen to you for a change, i'll be here.
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
ahhah peculiar!
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randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
that you look like someone else?
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
i lovvvve your quotes, and you're so so pretty! seriously, you look so much like this one girl i know its scary.
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
well, recently i got drunk at a party and did something i wouldn't.. normally do. like i hooked up with this kid i barely know. we didn't have , but we did mostly everything else. and like, the people who were there knew what happened. and one of the kids told his lunch table. and i go to a small school, so stuff like that spreads like wildfire. i pretty much got over being everyone knows, but it keeps coming up. like a handful of teachers know now. it's not that i regret doing it, cause i definitely don't. i just don't know what i feel. i'm sort of upset about it, but i don't wanna tell my friends cause i'm the one who usually just says like, everything and i get over it.
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
hey , just like to point out the fact that you're really cool. likei hope you feel really awesome about your life. cause it sounds like a real party. and i'm jealous. k that's all, bye now.
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
i know you never comment me back,
but i really need a confidence boost.
the kinda thing creepy dudes on chatroulette can't fix?
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
awwe, shpanks babe.
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
CHOCOLATE VANILLA BUTTERSCOTCH?
i practically moaned while reading that. but i'm like a sugaraholic sooo yannooo.i don't even know how much my permit was. i thought it was like $20 to take the test then like $300 for driving schooll... which i have to go to next week. WAH!
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
hiii, i like your quotes. and you're really pretty!
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
random is good. and thank you, i like your picture!
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
how do i know you're eleven?
a) you look eleven in your picture.
b) you commented on that girls quote, stating that you were eleven.
that night i read your quotes.
don't ew me biatcha. moses said respect your elders.
reply
randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
holy jesus. i live in ohio too. we have so much un common. only not really but im tipsy so whatever something. phrase. me a sophomoric too. wise moron. and i love your quotes ahahahahahah.welllll that's pretty much all i wanted to say i think.
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randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
such a beautiful book. chuck palahniuk makes my life worth living. literally.
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randomxxcardss42xo · 1 decade ago
i never said he was bad.
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