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I'm just a normal girl living my dream...
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  1. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 24, 2012 10:06am UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 10: Don't Wanna be Seen
    Later that day (or maybe it was that day, for all you knew it could have been a year later), you woke up. This time your eyelids open with ease and you can move every limb of your body. Except your ankle, which hurts like crazy.
    "(Your name)? a man calls.
    You prop yourself up on your elbows as you look up.
    "Good, you can move," he says, smiling and you turn to look at him.
    You're in a hospital. That explains a lot.
    "Wha--what happened?" you ask. Everything seems foggy, and your head is swirling.
    "Now, now, we'll get to that all in good time. Right now you need your rest." The doctor's face is kind.
    "What about Niall?," you ask groggily.
    "He's going to be fine."
    Fine, fine, fine...the word helps you drift back into a dreamless sleep.
    It never occurs to you that Raquel might not be so 'fine'.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    woo short chapter. i havent been able to right a lot but im hoping to do a lot more tomorrow. thanks to the few people who bother reading this :D

  2. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 21, 2012 9:43pm UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 9: Don't Wanna be Without You
    There's an awful pounding in your head and a drowsiness you can't seem to shake off. Where are you? What happened? Woah. Where's Niall? Where's Raquel? You begin to panic. WHAT HAPPENED?
    You struggle to open your eyelids but you can't. They feel like lead. They simply won't open. After a few more futile try you relax again, focusing on the noises around you. There's a low beeping sound to your right. And a low murmur of voices to your left.
    You strain your ear to listen.
    "--don't know what the outcome will be. I have all these machines hooked up to her so that in case anything dire occurs we will be alerted right away. That was a pretty bad accident." It was a male voice. Low and scruffy and soon answered by a more high-pitched female voice. But her voice is hushed and you can't hear a word she says.
    You hear a shifting of sheets and blankets not too far off. "What--where am I?" It's Niall's voice. Your heart soars. Niall is here.
    "Shh," the female voice shushes. "Go back to sleep. You need your rest."
    "What? No! What happened? Why am I here? Where's (your name)?" Niall pleads, fear rising in every syllable.
    "We'll get to that all in good time. I assure you. You just had a . . . small accident, and now you need your rest. (your name) is fine. Now go back to sleep," this time it was the male voice who spoke. Footsteps fade and a door shuts quietly.
    Fine? How could you be just fine? You can't open your eyes, you can't move a limb, you have no idea where you are, and you can't remember anything that happened after the diner this morning. Or was it this morning? How long have you been asleep? And what happened in between?
    "(your name)?" Niall calls. No answer. You can't speak. "Please answer me, (your name)!" there's a note of desperation in his voice, and as much as you want to open you mouth and reply you can't.
    "Please don't ever leave me!" Niall cries.
    All you can do is lay there stupidly and listen in torture as Niall begs you to speak, an action which seems as impossible as licking your forehead.
    Suddenly, a bunch of beeps and whirs start up from your right, and before you even have a chance to think about what that might mean, you black out.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~
    that was short. is it good?

  3. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 21, 2012 7:58pm UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 8: Make You Mine
    Another day gone. Just like that. But today was a new day and everything else was behind you.
    Slowly you tiptoe down the stairs. It's only 7 in the morning, and you don't want to wake any one up. You creep into the kitchen, reaching up to grab a box of cereal, but before your fingers come in contact with the brown box of Cocoa Puffs, a loud "BOO!" startles you. You jump backwards in shock and look around. It's only Niall, as usual.
    "God, Niall, you scared me! Don't you ever stay in your hotel room?" you scold him.
    "Nah, not really. Hotel rooms make me feel kind of homesick," he replies, cocking his head to the side.
    "Oh." Did that even make sense? "You want some cereal?"
    "Nah. I've got a better idea. Why don't I take you out for breakfast?"
    "Out for breakfast?" you look at him funny.
    "Yeah. You know, at a diner . . . " he explains as though this is perfectly normal. Which it kinda is, but you and Niall going out for breakfast is so not normal. But a part of you really wants to go, so you nod your head in agreement. "Sure."
    And before you know it you're sitting in one of those typical old-fashioned diners with red booths for seats and radios disguised as jukeboxes.
    You're not very hungry so you just order some waffles, whereas Niall, no surprise here, orders practically the whole menu. Twice.
    So it's rather surprising when he finishes around the same time you do. You suck the last bit of your milkshake with a straw and switch on the radio.
    "--and the winds may reach up to 80 miles per hour," the news anchor says. "The torrential downpours are certain to cause severe flooding, so it's best to stay home if you are anywhere near the area." The station then switches back to music. Niall leans over and flips the radio off.
    "Well then I guess we'd better get you home, then," he remarks grimly, looking out the window. It's already pouring.
    The waitress comes over and you hand her your money, but Niall quickly slaps your hand away. "I'll pay," he says as he gives the waitress his own money.
    You're too preoccupied with the thought of a potential hurricane out there to think about what Niall paying for your breakfast might mean.
    Outside, it's raining extremely hard, and the two of you are soaked by the time you walk the few feet to the car.
    Inside, the front window is a gray blur of water.
    "Are you sure it's safe to drive?" you ask Niall.
    "I guess," he says but he doesn't sound too sure. "Well, we can't stay at the diner all day so let's get going."
    "Right." He plugs the key into the ignition and begins to drive.
    After a few moments you begin to relax into the passenger seat. This isn't so bad, and there are only a few miles left between you and your home. But as you stare out the window you notice a figure soaked and shivering on the sidewalk, struggling in the wind. Is that who you think it is?
    "It's Raquel!" you shriek. "Pull over Niall!" Without asking questions he does as he is told, and you roll down the window, immediately getting whacked in the face by a huge sheet of water.
    "Raquel, is that you?" you yell. There's no reply but you already know the answer. You would recognize her anywhere. Of course it is.
    For a few seconds she fumbles with the slippery door handle and then clambers into the backseat soaked to the skin.
    "Sorry to get your car wet," she mutters sheepishly in Niall's direction.
    "Are you alright?" Niall and you both ask.
    "Yeah, I'm alright. Just really . . . wet," she admits. You and her laugh as Niall begins to drive again. But the rain is harder now, the winds stronger and you can barely see anything through the window.
    "Niall, I really don't think this . . . NIALL!!" you scream as the car is suddenly jerked to the right. The movement must have caused the car to hit something for at that moment something rams into you, knocking you backwards and the car is flipped over, with you, Niall, and Raquel still inside.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    heh. my ears hurt. guess i used my headphones a little too much listening to one direction :o

  4. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 21, 2012 3:04pm UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 7: Whatever it Takes is Fine
    The next morning is about as drab and boring as the past few mornings. Talk about summer fun. Breakfast wasn't easy to get through what with all the questions.
    "How was it?" Liam had asked.
    "Did you have fun?" There went Zayn.
    "What did you do there?" Louis inquired.
    "Was there food?" Harry wanted to know.
    Niall, strangely, was the only one who had kept his mouth shut.
    So it was sort of a relief to be away from everyone if only for a little while. In the safe vicinity of your room no one bothered you or came in to ask questions, not even Niall who had done a lot of that lately.
    The first thing you do once alone is dial Raquel. Your fingers punch in the number automatically after years of calling daily, and her familiar voicemail almost brings tears to your eyes. Almost. Now it was your turn to attack.
    Just like on the phone the other day you tell her everything. Everything since the night on the beach to today. Not leaving out a single detail. You don't really think she's going to listen, but it's worth a try.
    The next thing you do is log onto your email. Phones aren't the only way of communication, and the best way to make Raquel listen is to bug her to wits end until finally she gives in.
    It's certainly your lucky day today for as soon as you log on you notice the green icon next to her name. Good, she's online.
    You click her name and type, "Did you get my voicemail?"
    A moment passes before she bothers to reply.
    "Yes."
    "Did you listen to it?" you inquire. You're a bit desperate now to say the least.
    "No."
    "Well, can you listen to it?" you holler onto the computer. That is, if it's even possible to holler through IM.
    "No, I don't care what you have to say. I'm through with you. FOR THE LAST TIME GOODBYE," she enters and immediately afterwards logs off.
    How was this possible? The two of you have been bestfriends since kindergarten and now she suddenly turns on you when you most need her. The only person who doesn't look at you as though you are some sort of monster is Janel. And Janel doesn't exactly qualify as best friend material.
    Nothing works. Raquel and Ben are never going to like you again and their distaste rubs off on everyone else.
    The only people you have left in the world are your parents, and of course the guys, Louis, Liam, Zayn, Harry, and . . . Niall.
    You said just two days ago that you didn't want to be anything more than friends with Niall, but so much had changed in two days that maybe . . . just maybe you do want to be more than this?
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    hi. this was a short chapter sorry :(

  5. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 21, 2012 10:35am UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 6: You Save Me
    The moon glows bright and full from the inky blackness above. But you sit there on the porchswing, a muddy, confused, scared, and lonesome mess. Everyone else is back at Ben's party, having fun and laughing and talking and having a good time. Except maybe Janel who's probably still standing by the snack table, dreaming about horses. The usual.
    After about fifteen minutes of torture, sitting there alone, you feel a tap on your shoulder. Startled you wipe your face with the back of your hand, hoping the darkness will cover the red blotches on your face.
    You turn around. It's Niall. Why does he always turn up at the worst possible moments? Ugh. You groan. There's no way you can wave this off as being "fine."
    "Is everything alright?" he asks sitting down next to you on the swing.
    Honestly, if you had a dollar for every time someone has asked you that question in the past forty-eight hours you would be rich by now.
    "Oh everythings fine," you mutter sarcastically, sniffling loudly to unclog your nose from crying.
    "What happened?" he asks softly.
    "Nothing. Nothing at all except everyone completely ignored me -- except for Raquel of course who took it upon herself to humiliate me in front of everyone -- so I was stuck learning to distinguish the various types of ponies."
    "What?" he questions, clearly confused at your reference to the conversation with Janel.
    "Nevermind, the point is everyone hates me," you tell him sullenly.
    He takes your hand. Your heart immediately flutters.
    "I don't hate you," he whispers.
    "Yeah, but you're different, Niall. I mean, besides you and Louis and the others. It's everyone else who hates me," you confirm, your lower lip still trembling.
    "Well if I'm sure that if they knew the truth they wouldn't hate you," he points out, a futile attempt to try and comfort me.
    "But they don't know the truth, and no one's gonna listen to me long enough for me to even have the chance to tell the truth. And even then, no one will believe me."
    "Well try calling, leave a message, send an email. Anything. They can't ignore you forever."
    Huh, that's what he thinks.
    "And if there's nothing left to do," Niall continues in that perfect Irish accent, "then don't worry anymore."
    You nod your head slowly in agreement. You're pretty sure that no matter what you do, Raquel and everyone else are still going to be best friends for never, but you don't say so out loud. This was your fight, your fault, and you had to get yourself out of it without dragging Niall into everything. He doesn't deserve it. He gets enough hate already just for being in the band.
    "Okay," you finally agree.
    "Good," he says, his voice noticeably more cheerful. "Now you might want to go inside and get cleaned up," he suggests, his gaze drifting down to the huge pool of mud gathering around your feet.
    He laughs and you laugh with him.
    No matter what happens with Raquel and Ben, at least you'll always have one person you can count on forever.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ugh. i need to make this more interesting ._.

  6. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 20, 2012 10:52pm UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 5: There's Nothing Funny
    The bathroom fills with an overwhelming coconut scent as you rub conditioner into your hair. The warm shower water scalds your back but the burning sensation helps to keep your mind off of tonight. Neither Raquel or Ben had made any move to forgive you, so for now, you're all alone.
    You rinse off quickly and step out of the shower, the mirror fogged over in the humidity of the small bathroom. Quickly, you dry off and wrap a towel around you, stepping out of the bathroom, and entering your bedroom where Niall sits waiting for you to emerge.
    He smiles as he hands you your dress, and you walk back to the bathroom to change.
    The dress is dark purple with gold rings connecting the straps to the rest of the dress and lots of gold lace around the trim. It's a pretty dress, but it seems way too happy for an awful evening like tonight.
    You blow dry your hair and curl it, pinning it up at the sides. You put makeup on carefully, although it's hard what with your shaking hands.
    "You look amazing," Niall remarks when you step back into the bedroom.
    "Thanks," you say and give him a weak grin.
    All too soon 6:00 rolls around and you step out the door. Another friend of yours, Tara, agreed to pick you up so at least you didn't have to walk in the rain all the way to Ben's house.
    Tara's car smells vaguely of cinnamon, you notice as you slide into the passenger seat.
    "Hey," you greet her.
    "Hi," she answers back, rolling her eyes and staring straight ahead dismissively. Great, so Ben's phony story had crossed paths with Tara too. She drives in silence while you fidget around with your amethyst bracelet, trying to calm your stomach which keeps flipping around as though you were on a rollercoaster.
    You've never really cared for Ben's parties anyways. The music is always too loud and his house always smells like dogdrool from the two nasty German Shepherds that live there. But dogdrool and damaged eardrums seem like the least of your problems as Tara slams the door shut and walks towards the front door, not bothering to wait for you.
    You take a deep breath and trudge up to the front steps behind her. Ben answers the door, giving a warm smile and "hi" to Tara, but as expected, ignoring me.
    Inside things aren't much better. Raquel struts around with her two new bestfriends, Jessica and Alison, two girls that she had once hated.
    They glare at you with pointed fingers and squinted eyes.
    You ignore them. Whatever.
    Ben and his friends weren't very nice either but they at least had the courtesy of completely ignoring me and not embarassing me in public.
    So for the next hour or so you spend your time talking to Janel Watson, a crazy horse-obsessed girl who was only invited because her brother is the DJ for the party. Mainly, she just babbles on about the various breeds of ponies and horses while you try to act interested. At the moment, she's your only friend.
    "And now let's dedicate this next song to my very dear sweet friend, (your name)," Raquel announces into the microphone, her voice dripping with fake-sweetness.
    Suddenly Kesha's song "Take it Off" blares throughout the room, the lyrics cutting into you like knives.
    You race towards the bathroom before the tears come. Ben's bathroom is familiar to you. After all, you'd been in it many times back when you were still dating. You notice a picture of Ben on the sink. He's only about six years old in the picture, his two front teeth missing. Who would've known he would turn into someone so cruel?
    You can't go back to that wretched party so you sneak through the kitchen and out the back door, racing home through the rain thats now pouring down in sheets. You know you're ruining the dress but it doesn't seem very significant right now.
    You keep running until you reach your front porch and collapse on the prochswing, rain and mud squelching around you as once again, the tears roll, ripe and ready, down your cheeks.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    is it boring? tell me what you really think....haha no one's even gonna answer probably -____-

  7. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 20, 2012 7:28pm UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 4: I'm Going Out of my Mind
    The rest of that ruined afternoon and evening go by in a blur. You can barely concentrate on anything at dinner, and when Zayn asks you how your day went you simply say, "fine," not looking up from the untouched spaghetti on your plate.
    Louis, who notices something's wrong asks you if everything's okay, and you look up to smile and reply "Yes, why wouldn't it be?"
    After a few more minutes of torture, you get up, place your dish in the sink and run upstairs, using the summer homework excuse once more.
    But in reality all you do is plop down on your bed, face buried in the purple covers and dial Raquel once more.
    She doesn't answer.
    You dial again, more desperately. If you don't talk this through with someone, you figure you're going to go crazy with worry and fear.
    After the fifth call, Raquel finally picks up.
    "What do you want?" she asks, the annoyance clear as a bell in her familiar voice. You're confused, but you ignore the odd cruelty and plunge headfirst into your story.
    "Raquel, I broke up with Ben today. I don't know why really. I just didn't think I could go on with him, I'm so confused. I didn't want to hurt him but he seems really mad and I'm afraid he might--"
    There's a sharp intake of breath on the other end as Raquel cuts you off. "Don't try to change the truth, (your name). I know exactly what happened today and I can't believe you could be that mean!" she shrieks.
    "What do you mean? I didn't do anything!" you yell back at her. What was going on?
    "Don't push it too far, (your name). Ben told me everything. How you were cheating on him, how you've been cheating on him for weeks now without ever telling him! Talk about being indecent. I'm glad he broke up with you!"
    "He broke up with me because I cheated on him?!?!" you holler into the phone. "That's not true! I never cheated on him ever! And I broke up with him! Nothing is my fault here, Raquel," you hiss, panic creeping into your voice.
    "Yeah, right. I can't believe you. I thought I knew you! But now I guess I don't. Goodbye, (your name), Ben's calling."
    "What so now you're picking Ben over me?!" you can't believe what you're hearing. Is this just a nightmare? Are you not hearing properly? Maybe you listened to your iPod a bit too loudly this afternoon.
    "Just yesterday I would have picked you without a doubt. But now I'm not so sure," she replies coolly, and hangs up.
    You stare at the "Call Ended" screen for a full moment before the cold realization hit. By breaking up with Ben you had not only lost a boyfriend but lost a bestfriend as well.
    This was exactly what you feared would happen. Once on Ben's bad side, he would do everything he could to ruin you.
    The party tomorrow would be pure torture, but you had to go. You had spent a ton of money on the dress and shoes you were going to wear, and your mom would never let you opt out. No, there was only one thing to do: to go and face whatever consequences you had gotten yourself into.
    A knock on the door jerks you out of your thinking.
    "Come in, come in," you snap, a little harshly, and just like in the morning, Niall walked in. And just like in the morning, your heart began to beat a little faster.
    "Um, hi," you say, questioningly.
    "Hi," he answers and remains quiet for a moment. "Is everything okay?"
    Ugh, the question nearly everyone had asked all afternoon. You suppose you aren't too good at hiding your emotions.
    "Yeah, everything's fine. I don't know why everyone thinks it isn't." You choke slightly on the words, but they come out smoothly.
    "Well, you've been acting strange all day. Hiding in your room, barely saying two words at meals, doing nothing but 'summer homework'," he remarks using airquotes.
    You smile sadly. "Well, I had a fight with Ben this morning," you admit.
    "Oh?" he raises his eyebrows questioningly. You look at him. He seems genuinely concerned, and it would be nice to tell somebody everything...
    Bracing yourself you tell Niall everything that happened throughout the day, leaving out the part about why you really broke up with Ben.
    Your throat feels tight, but you will yourself not to cry in front of Niall. That would just make things a thousand times worse.
    He listens to everything, head cocked to the side.
    "Well, then tomorrow we'll simply have to make you look so pretty that Ben will forget all about today and Raquel will want to be your friend again," he smirks, eyes shining.
    You nod your head in agreement and smile. You feel better already.
    You watch him leave the room and lay down on the bed, closing your eyes. 24 hours ago you were at the beach, alone and forgotten. Yet, as you slip into sleep you can't help but feel a small sliver of warmth spread through your body.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    haha probably no one will even bother to read this -.- WHATEVERRRR :P

  8. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 20, 2012 1:45pm UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 3: Throw the Key
    It was still a gray day. Rainy. Dull. Damp. The kind of day that made you want to just curl up under a blanket with a bowl of popcorn and a movie. But for you, no such luck.
    You check your reflection in the mirror one last time. Is your mascara smudged? Is there a stain on your shirt? A pimple on your nose? Hair stuck to your lipgloss?
    No, no, no, and no. Good.
    But what did it matter? It was only Ben coming over. But then again, Ben was....Ben, and that was scary.
    The doorbell rings, and you jump up, startled. You race down the stairs for the second time that day and swing the door open. Of course, it was Ben.
    He stares at you with a smirk, those familiar green eyes warm and his brown hair a rumpled mess.
    "Hey," you say, flashing him a cautious smile.
    "Hi, (your name)," he says.
    We stood there awkwardly. This was how it was for the past few weeks: one-word conversations, nothing to do, rare eye contact, awkward smiles, etc. Everything was different since Louis had come to visit.
    "Um, you wanna come in?" you ask, giving him a small grin.
    "Sure," he replies, and looks around the house. It's empty. Louis, Zayn, Liam, Harry, and Niall have gone out for an autograph signing or some other celebrity-ish thing, and your parents have both gone to work by now so it's just you two. Fun.
    "Whaddaya wanna do?" he asks, cocking his head to the side.
    "Anything, really. Uh, how about a movie?" you suggest. Why couldn't Ben just leave? All you want is to climb in between the covers and sleep, not thinking, not caring, not paying attention to anything else. But he just got here and it wouldn't be very nice to turn him away.
    "Alright," he answers, smiles unnecessarily again and walks into the kitchen to make popcorn. You follow behind him, telling yourself everything will be okay.
    In silence, you place a bag of popcorn in the microwave and as you wait for it to finish popping, Ben breaks the silence.
    "So you're coming tomorrow, to the party right?"
    "I was planning on it," you say but you're not so sure you even want to go anymore. "Good, then I guess I'll come pick you up tomorrow at 6?" he raises his eyebrows.
    "Yeah, yeah sure."
    "Great," he smiles and grabs you around the waist, kissing you full on the lips.
    Hopefully, that lipgloss really wasn't too sticky.
    A month before, you might have kissed him back, but now, you don't feel anything.
    In fact, you have an overwhelming sensation to get away from Ben. But why? He's been your boyfriend for almost a year now. You pull back in confusion. There's only one thing left to do.
    You take a deep breath and bite your lip hard, the cherry-flavored gloss too sweet in your mouth, tainting your teeth pink.
    "Look, Ben. I, uh, I--" you swallow hard. Suddenly those once-warm eyes look like shards of cold green glass. "I don't think I want to do this anymore."
    "Do what?" he snaps, astounded.
    "This," you say, gesturing with your arms. "Be your girlfriend." You wince as the words come rushing out of your mouth. Before he has a chance to say anything, you blurt on. "I like you Ben, I really do, but not in that way. At least not anymore. I think...IthinkImightbeinlovewithsomeoneelse," you squeeze your eyes shut. Was that really true?
    "Fine," he mutters angrily. "Just fine."
    "Can't we still be friends?"
    "No," he hisses, "and don't count on me to pick you up tomorrow."
    He glares at me one more time and storms out the door, leaving you with a bag of burnt popcorn and a swollen lip.
    This was bad. Ben could be the sweetest guy in the world if you got on his goodside. But once you crossed the line between good and bad, things gut ugly, and there was no turning back.
    Slowly you dump the popcorn in the trashcan, trudge up the steps and plop down on your bed. You put your headphones in, turn up the volume, and ignore the world, looking out your window as the tears roll down your face.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    now things get interesting :P

  9. onedirection_fanfics onedirection_fanfics
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    August 20, 2012 10:28am UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 2: You Don't Notice At All
    The pale gray light of dawn streams in through your open window, jerking you awake. Morning, already? You groan and turn over, unwilling to wake up after last night. But sleep doesn't come again, and before long your Hello Kitty alarm clock beeps and wails and sputters until you finally stumble to your feet.
    Ugh.
    Your hair looks like a rat's nest, your eyelids are half closed and your breath probaby smells like rotten eggs. Wonderful way to start the day.
    You glance at the clock. 8 am. Maybe if you hurry you can get ready, eat breakfast, and leave the house without anyone noticing. Without Niall noticing especially. Louis wasn't exactly an early bird and the others all had hotel rooms so why would they come to your house so early in the morning?
    Encouraged, you hurriedly run a brush through your tangled hair, throw on a ruffled T-shirt and shorts, splash cold water on your face, and swallow some mouthwash by accident. Hair flying behind, you race down the stairs and skid into the kitchen, expecting no one but instead finding everyone.
    "Shoot," you mutter under your breath. For there sitting around the kitchen table are Louis, Zayn, Liam, Harry, and of course, Niall. Your mom frys eggs on a skillet over the stove, the sizzling of the pan the only noise heard as everyone turns to look at you.
    "Hi," you say softly and wince.
    "Someone slept in this morning," Harry remarked grinning. Slept in? But it was only 8:30!
    "Want something to eat?" Liam asks waving a piece of toast around in the air.
    "No-" you start to say, but your stomach rumbles anyways. You haven't eaten since 6:00 yesterday evening. Slowly you nod your head in defeat. "Sure." You try to smile as you walk to the table, but you're pretty sure it looks more like a grimace.
    Carefully you take a seat, sitting between Louis and Zayn, as far away from Niall as possible.
    They begin to talk again about trivial things - how much they like America, complimenting my mother's cooking, etc. You make a few comments here and there but mainly focus on scarfing down breakfast as quickly as possible.
    Done!
    You pull back your chair a little too quickly. Everyone stares yet again.
    "I, uh, I have to, um, do summer homework," you mumble and dash back up the stairs, setting a new personal record.
    Once in the safety of your room you whip out your cell phone and call up Raquel. She's been your best friend since kindergarten and you feel safe talking to her about anything.
    "Hello?" she answers.
    "It's me. Um, can I come over now? I don't think I can stand it in this house any longer," you tell her.
    There's a pause before she answers.
    "No, sorry. My mom wants me to babysit my brother -- she has a yoga class -- and she thinks if you come over I'll just be distracted. Everything alright?" she asks, noting the distress in my voice.
    "Yeah, yeah everything's fine."
    "Well, okay. See you tomorrow at the party," she reminds me and hangs up.
    Which was another thing. I'd completely forgotten about Ben's party tomorrow. I guess it had seemed sort of unimportant after last night. I sighed, and tossed my phone onto the bed, taking in my messy room. Well, that was something I could do.
    For the next three hours I organized my closet, cleaned my desk, sweeped the floor and three trash bags later I was just finishing up when there came a knock on the door.
    "Come in," I replied, warily. It was Niall. Oh dear.
    "Hey," he says.
    "Hey," you say back and smile nervously.
    "You've avoided me all day. Is something wrong?" he asks. Talk about being blunt.
    "No. I didn't mean for you to think I was avoiding you. I'm not," you answer, but that's a lie. You guess you kind of were.
    "About last night..." his voice trails off.
    You take a deep breath. "Look, Niall, I like you and all, but you're like a brother to me. I just don't think I like you that way. I mean, I have a boyfriend." You speak what you think is the truth, but why does your stomach flutter when you look at him?
    Niall simply nods. There's a trace of disapointment in his eyes but it's gone as quickly as it came.
    "Okay, I understand" he replies and gives you a small smile. You hug him -- just a friendly hug, nothing more -- and he leaves.
    You stare at the overflowing trash bags and scowl. Who cares whether your room is messy or clean anyways?
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    so, yeah uh, is it still good? should I continue?

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    August 19, 2012 9:53pm UTC
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    A Niall Horan Fancfiction
    Chapter 1: Tonight's Sky
    It took forever to get ready. Perfect outfit, perfect dress, perfect hair, perfect makeup...Ben would have freaked if he's seen you. But then again, Ben wouldn't be here tonight. It was your night out with the guys, with Louis (your cousin), Zayn, Harry, Liam, and Niall.
    Louis had pulled up at 8:00 on the dot, hollering your name through the slightly open front door, honking the horn and waiting impatiently for you to float out in a pale blue casual dress, flip-flops, and sunglasses, even though the sun was by then slipping into the horizon, its orangy glow illuminating Louis' dark red convertible.
    "Hey," you greeted him and Eleanor (his girlfriend) as you slid in the backseat.
    "You look nice," he had remarked, Eleanor murmuring in agreement.
    "Thanks," you said and all was quiet on the way to beach. It was the 4th of July and since the boys were on tour in America they all decided to see the fireworks for a change, you invited along. It was nice. You barely got to see Louis; as it is he would only be staying around for a few weeks.
    After a few minutes, the silence had become unbearable and El had switched the radio on.
    Immediately the familiar strains of "Baby you light up my world like nobody else, the way that you flip your hair makes me overwhelmed but when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell, you don't know, oh oh, you don't know your--" had come on, but before the song could finish Louis quickly changed the station.
    "Not that song, again," he laughed playfully.
    Before long, you had reached the beach.
    It had seemed so enjoyable in the car but not so much right now. The loud popping noises and flashing colors of the fireworks were a bit annoying at the moment. Louis, Zayn, and Liam had brought their girlfriends, and Harry had met up with an old friend here so you and Niall were alone. But almost as soon as you set foot onto the sand girls on the beach recognized my companion, ignored me, and began squealing and shrieking at the prospect of seeing Niall Horan. And so they had come, each more beautiful than the next, asking for hugs and autographs, etc. So alone you sit, wiggling your toes in the sand as you watch Niall flirt and have fun with the flawless girls in flawless bikinis, who were simply perfect all around.
    So much for fun.
    You almost wish Ben, your overprotective boyfriend, were here. Almost, but not quite. Things had been weird the past month or so with Ben, ever since Louis had come to visit you in America, along with the other guys from One Direction in between concerts on tour. You aren't really sure whether you even really have feelings for Ben anymore. Sure, he's cute, but a bit too forceful and demanding at times.
    You sigh, and try to concentrate on the flashing sparks lighting up tonight's sky, but you just aren't into it. You look sideways at Niall, still mingling among the fans. Oddly enough, you even feel a small twinge of....what is that? Jealousy? But that is ridiculous! Niall is like a brother to you. Nevertheless, you stagger to your feet and turn to leave, to walk back for Louis' car and listen to the radio maybe. Anything to get away from the wild shrieks of the girls prancing around Niall, who looked extremely handsome. Strange, you didn't think you should be noticing that.
    But before you even take but two steps forward, a hand catches your elbow. It's Niall.
    "Where are you going, (insert your name here)?" he asks. You avoid his eyes, looking past him at the waves crashing to the beach.
    "Somewhere else," you reply, still not meeting his eyes.
    Just at that moment the announcer blares on a megaphone loud enough to be heard miles around, "Ladies and gentlemen, and now for the grand finale!"
    The silence is suddenly sliced in a million pieces by the tremendous popping noises from above.
    "But I want to watch fireworks with you," he whispers, tugging slightly on your arm. You can't help but feel a little bit dizzy. He's standing so close and he smells like seawater and sunshine...
    The fireworks pop up above loudly, but they don't seem to be very relevant at this moment.
    Nervously, you take a step back, your foot sinking into the sand, but Niall just steps forward again, closing whatever space that is left between you.
    "I...I want to watch them with you too," you murmur, so softly that you aren't even sure if he heard.
    In answer, he presses his lips against yours. Surprised, you pull back slightly, but then decide otherwise. His lips are slightly rough, but gentle too. You are faintly aware of the fireworks above, of the waves crashing against the rocks, of all those other girls staring, but nothing seems to bother you.
    For a split second you think of Ben, but then quickly let your attention move back to Niall. Who cares about Ben anyways? Nothing can ruin this perfect moment.
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    tell me what you guys think...is it good? should I keep writing or just screw it and start another? o.0

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