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1. madkinzstories
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   May 26, 2012 9:59am UTC
   Last Night
   Chapter 3
   Amy's POV
   "Thanks for coming, officer." I said nervously.
   This guy was weird and im glad he's leaving.
   "No problem." He opened the door and walked himself out. I
   felt chills going down my spine.
   I went to the kitchen and checked the time, it was nine'o'clock. I
   started making tea, i
   thought Micheal would like some, so i called his name from the top of the basement stairs. No responce.
   The TV was blasting his game really loud, so he probably didn't hear me.
   I walked down the stairs carefully and turned to the place my husband was sitting.
   I gasped, blood was all over the floor and there was my husband,
   with blood gushing out of his neck.
   What? Who would do this?! How could he be dead!?
   "Micheal!" I yelled, like he could hear me.
   I grabbed his waist and i glance at his neck. there was two big gashes,
   both side to side, and very deep.
   My head shoots up. Was it the cop?! It was! who else!?
   "No." I whispered.
   "Suprise!"
   A familiar voice said, and i turned around.
   Lyndsey's POV
   After running in the kitchen, i gasped for air. Is this guy who i think he is?
   He couldn't possibly be a ....vampire?
   I run up to my room and turn on my laptop, i googled vampires, and went on wikipedia, and read. Vampires could only come in unless they were invited.
   Okay so he was in my house. Was he going to kill us? Well thats stupid i know he is.
   All of a sudden, i heard my mom scream.
   No! I thought.
   I tip toed into my brother and sisters room.
   they were only three, they really didnt need to be seeing this.
   "Wake up!" I whispered. they obediently got out of bed.
   "What goin' on?" My sister Mari asked.
   "Nothing, you'll be fine" I cry. I
   take them both in their closet and prepare for the worst.
   Like it? give me some feedback please! (: thanks
   for reading xoxox- Madeline
   
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2. madkinzstories
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   May 25, 2012 2:41pm UTC
   Last Night
   Chapter 2
   Amy's POV
   What the heck was a cop doing at my door? With Lyndsey?
   What was going on?
   It was basically a perfect, relaxing night.
   I was reading a Nicholas Sparks book, The Choice.
   The twins, Thomas and Mari were asleep,
   my husband, Micheal was downstairs playing a video game, im really not sure which one.
   I walk upstairs to check on Thomas and Mari.
   I went into their small room. it was so quiet. I smiled at the sound of their breathing.
   i looked over at them, they were so young, and innocent.
   I left the room and heard a knock at the door.
   i walked over and looked through the peephole.
   There was a cop, and Lyndsey was behind him.
   Her eyes got wide and she shook her head. I opened the door.
   "What is going on?!" I practically cry.
   Lyndsey either has a look of shame, or fear on her face, it better be shame,
   whatever happened.
   "I'll explain everything, may i come in?" He askes.
   I nod my head and watch as he walks over and sits on the couch.
   I look at Lyndsey and she looks at me.
   I sit on the chair and Lyndsey literally runs into the kitchen.
   "What happened?" My eyes were wide, i could just tell.
   "Well, your daughter has been doing a variety of illegal drugs."
   He sighs. i gasp, that wasn't like Lyndsey, but what did i know?
   "Is she...going to jail?" I gulp. He shakes his head.
   "Im going to let her off the hook this time, since it was a first,
   but i am giving you all a very big fine."
   That's really unusual, but im so shocked I don't say anything.
   "Excuse me, but may I get a drink of water?" He asks.
   "Sure." I mutter, and stand up.
   "No, please."
   He gestures for me to sit back down. "You're in shock, i think i can get it myself."
   And he walks into the kitchen.
   I just sit there, my mouth open wide, what the heck is going on?
   Lyndsey would never do that, or i thought she would never do that.
   I felt like i was sitting there for a long time, i was just so stunned.
   Finally, he came back.
   "Sorry i took so long, i couldn't find a plastic cup." He laughed.
   I tried to muster up a smile.
   "Thank you for your time." he says, and walks to the door.
   All of a sudden, he turns around, right in front of the door, and smiles.
   His smile is really nice, then i notice his canine teeth are unusually long...and sharp.
   Wait, what?!
   Happy reading lovelies (: hope you enjoy! xox Madeline
   
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3. madkinzstories
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   May 22, 2012 8:22pm UTC
   Last Night
   chapter 1
   i didnt remember anything. all i know if i am in the back of a cops car with a horrible headace. Why was I in a cop car?
   What did I do wrong?
   "Officer?" I questioned meekly. "What am I doing here?" I look around, this was a nightmare. "Quiet, you should know." He snaps.
   The rest of the ride to my house was indeed very silent.
   How did he even know where i lived? My head was killing me, i touched it and there was a huge bump.
   Then, i remembered. I was at the movies with my two best friends, Carly and Jesslyn. I
   told them I had to go to the bathroom, and when I came out, someone hit me with their knuckles. im guessing that someone was this man.
   The question was, how did he knock me out with his knuckles?
   Okay so wait, this man was abducting me!
   why was he taking me home, wait, he wasn't taking me home! why would he do that?
   I screamed and the man told me to shut up.
   Wait, but we were going down our street, and into my driveway.
   What was this guy's angle? And why was he in a cop's outfit?
   "get out, now." He ordered. I obediently obeyed,
   normally i wouldn't have obeyed a guy who basically abducted me,
   but since we were at my house...
   The man walked out of the car and over to my door.
   Was he going to kill my family or something? oh my gosh!
   He rang the doorbell and i saw my mothers eyes look through the peephole.
   Maybe she will pull me in and lock him outside. I
   saw the man smile, his canine teeth were really large,
   like...
   wait, what!?
   this is a really short chapter, i'll make the next one longer, i hope. this is complete fiction and i thought of it in school because i got really bored. so, happy reading. xox (:
   
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4. madkinzstories
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   May 22, 2012 4:14pm UTC
   Hey wittians. I'll be writing a short horror story. it will have diffrent chapters i just dont know how many. thanks and happy readingxox.
   - Madeline
   
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5. madkinzstories
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   May 19, 2012 3:13pm UTC
   Beautiful
   chapter 2
   Genevive's POV
   The next morning, i got up for school. it wasn't going to be good.
   I put on a white flowered tank top with a white cover up.
   i also put on dark jean capris and sparis. I brushed my curly brown hair.
   there was no need to even try to straighten it, because it didnt work.
   i put on some brown eyeliner and mascara. also some light pink lipstick.
   I'm ready to go, so i run downstairs and grab an apple.
   "Bye mom!" I yell, and run out the door. At school, everyone was giving me glances,
   they all knew. A girl named Makenzie came up to me.
   she was everything anyone wanted to be. Blonde hair,
   blue eyes, popular-because-shes-a-cheerleader.
   I mean im a cheerleader but im not that popular. "I heard about you and Caleb."
   She raises an eyebrow.
   "So?" I ask. "Thats to bad. Mabye he finally realized you are ugly."
   She laughs, like that is supposed to offend me, seriously.
   I walk away and bump into a guy i had never seen before.
   "Sorry." I sigh, and start to walk away.
   "Wait." He calls. i turn around.
   "Are you the girl Caleb broke up with?"
   I roll my eyes . "Yes." and i walk away.
   He just stands there, i can tell.
   i walk into my first period. i have all my classes with caleb.
   He looks tired, he has bags under his eyes, and he looks paler than usual.
   I try not to look at him, but its really hard not to.
   After school, i had cheerleading.
   i really wasn't in the mood. The cheeleaders were split into to kind of groups,
   there was the girls who were really nice to eachother,
   like me and my friends. then there were the poupulars.
   that is Makenzie and all her stuck up friends who want to be excactly like her.
   "Hey, Gen!" Kayla calls out to me, she's a cheerleader too.
   A bunch of my friends come running up to me as im walking to the locker room.
   "What happend to you and Caleb?" One of my friends, Madison, asked.
   I just shrugged. i already didnt want to be here.
   i put my hair up and my bow in.
   Madison hugged me and we walked out onto the mats.
   "Well hey there, single." Makenzie smirked.
   "Speak for yourself, Makenzie." I spat, i really hated her.
   A couple minutes later everyone was in their stunt groups.
   I was a flyer, so i was in the air.
   I jumped into Madison and Kayla's arms, with my other friend Lyndsey as my back.
   I was so high in the air.
   All i could see was Caleb's face that night, and i fell.
   "Gen, what happened?" Lyndsey grabbed my arm and helped me up.
   i excused myself from practice and went home.
   Caleb's POV
   Why is this happening to me?
   I'm only 16, i dont need this. Iv'e almost lost everyone.
   My mom died of cancer when i was to. You could say i've lost my dad,
   he spaces out and is always in his room.
   I lost Gen, that was a stupid mistake.
   But there is something wrong with me. I'm dying.
   
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