askkashleeyy
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1 decade ago
its very goodd!! i love where your going with itt. only negative i would give you is so make the beggining a little easier to follow because remember only you know where the rest of the storie is going!! reply
xtruexlovex
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1 decade ago
it's sooo good (: i loove it! reply
cookie_monster_love
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1 decade ago
Can you comment on my profile? witty won't let me follow anyone for some reason. :[ reply
_today_tomorrow_tonight_forever_
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1 decade ago
Oh my godd!! This is soo good.*: You haave to continue writing like now.!! reply
blondie444
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1 decade ago
ahhh this looks so good, can u comment on my page and tell me when u write the nxt chapter its so goooddd <33 reply
PinkHearts99
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1 decade ago
ooo can yu comment on my page and tell me when the next chapter comes out please
cocokaielle33
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1 decade ago
great!! the dream was a real twister!! reply
xXyoudontknowmeXx
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1 decade ago
haha way to steel the goodness me thing :P haha <3 reply
kiss_me12
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1 decade ago
WOOHOO TOP QUOTES! love you girl <3 reply
cocokaielle33
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1 decade ago
I lliked it! At first I thought the going fast might be wierd but you made it so that the story's a LOT better!! I hope he gets his asx kicked! reply
idkomg123
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1 decade ago
you definatly recovered from the going to fast
great job! keep going! reply
idkomg123
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1 decade ago
that was fast haha good though reply
lemxoxo45
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1 decade ago
i didnt think i liked this cause it was going too fast but its getting better. you should keep going ! reply
cocokaielle33
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1 decade ago
i kinda agree with them they are going fast. reply
askkashleeyy · 1 decade ago
its very goodd!! i love where your going with itt. only negative i would give you is so make the beggining a little easier to follow because remember only you know where the rest of the storie is going!!
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xtruexlovex · 1 decade ago
it's sooo good (: i loove it!
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cookie_monster_love · 1 decade ago
Can you comment on my profile? witty won't let me follow anyone for some reason. :[
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_today_tomorrow_tonight_forever_ · 1 decade ago
Oh my godd!! This is soo good.*: You haave to continue writing like now.!!
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blondie444 · 1 decade ago
ahhh this looks so good, can u comment on my page and tell me when u write the nxt chapter its so goooddd <33
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PinkHearts99 · 1 decade ago
ooo can yu comment on my page and tell me when the next chapter comes out please
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supastar11 · 1 decade ago
What happened?
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cocokaielle33 · 1 decade ago
great!! the dream was a real twister!!
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xXyoudontknowmeXx · 1 decade ago
haha way to steel the goodness me thing :P haha <3
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kiss_me12 · 1 decade ago
WOOHOO TOP QUOTES! love you girl <3
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cocokaielle33 · 1 decade ago
I lliked it! At first I thought the going fast might be wierd but you made it so that the story's a LOT better!! I hope he gets his asx kicked!
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idkomg123 · 1 decade ago
you definatly recovered from the going to fast
great job! keep going!
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idkomg123 · 1 decade ago
that was fast haha good though
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lemxoxo45 · 1 decade ago
i didnt think i liked this cause it was going too fast but its getting better. you should keep going !
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cocokaielle33 · 1 decade ago
i kinda agree with them they are going fast.
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_today_tomorrow_tonight_forever_ · 1 decade ago
Yeah, I love it alot, but I think that it happened way to fast . .
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_today_tomorrow_tonight_forever_ · 1 decade ago
This one's wicked good so faar! Keep writing!
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lemxoxo45 · 1 decade ago
i think you pushing it way too fast. they just met eachother today and theyre already going out?
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_bexmyxescape · 1 decade ago
i love this (: a lott. its really good., you should keep going!
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cocokaielle33 · 1 decade ago
i've been trying to read witty stories but they all suck!!! except for this one!! its great!
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