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1. jumpthenfallx23
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   May 31, 2012 9:36pm UTC
   SPiRiT
   chapter 6
   Aimee's POV


   "Not to put a damper on things… but I think you're dead." I said to Aimee.
   "No! No, I can't be!" She was in denial.
   Why else would everyone be ignoring her? She wasn't that popular but she was definitely not a loser. In fact, I had never really noticed how beautiful she was until that day.
   "I CAN'T BE DEAD. I JUST CAN'T." She was panicking.
   "Aimee try to relax. Freaking out isn't going to change anything." I tried to soothe her. It didn't work.
   "Calm? You want me to be calm? ADAM SOME THING WIERD IS GOING ON, BUT I AM NOT DEAD." She is so stubborn. It was really adorable.
   Sh*t, Adam stop it. You can't fall in love with a dead girl.
   "Do you believe in God?" I asked her curiously.
   "Of course." She said it like everyone attended Church weekly. I guess I shouldn't tell her I'm Atheist.
   "Well maybe you should try talking to God. You know, ask him what the deal is."
   She rolled her eyes at me. "You want me to pray?"
   "Sure." I suggested.
   "Fine." Aimee kneeled onto the ground and closed her eyes.
   She made the sign of the cross and sat silently, looking like she was thinking to herself.
   After a few minutes she stood up and looked at me.
   "Did he answer?" I asked.
   "It doesn't really work that way." She said.
   "So now what do we do?" I asked.
   "We wait. It's the only thing we can do. You don't have to stay, though." She answered.
   "No. I mean, I'd like to stay if you don't mind." I stuttered.
   "I'd love you to stay. I have no else to talk to." She smiled.
   "Really?" My face lit up, why was I so excited? Did I forget all the feelings I had in the morning? How did one girl make me feel wanted when I felt unloved for the past five years of my life. I thought my life was a living hell, so why did she make it feel like heaven on earth?
   She smiled and nodded.
   "Well I'm getting a little hungry. I'll go get some food and come back. What do you want?" I asked her.
   "I'm not hungry." She said.
   "Oh right. That's probably a death thing." I said nonchalantly.
   "I'M NOT DEAD." She tried to hit me, but once a girl, always a girl.
   ~~~~~~~~~~~
   aimee's pov
   "Oh right. That's probably a death thing." Adam said.
   A death thing? How did he already get used to the fact that I'm possibly dead.
   I can't be dead. I just… can't.
   Oh, who am I kidding? What else could it be? Invisible spray?
   I am dead.
   I will never adjust to that statement.
   Adam had left to go get himself food so i sat on the football field in the back of the school and waited for him.
   A few minutes later I heard foot steps and then Adam appeared.
   "Hey!" I couldn't help but smile when he showed up with three happy meals.
   "Hi." He said while shoveling a mouth load of fries.
   "Looks like you got your hands full." I said.
   He just nodded back and sat next to me.
   "Should I try to eat?" I was staring at the food.
   "I would say yes, but there isn't enough food to share." Adam looked dead serious.
   "Are you kidding?" I laughed, "there's enough food for a family of eight!"
   "No. This is all for me." His face wasn't budging so I just accepted the fact I wasn't getting a fry.
   "Okay, then. I'll just starve to death." I joked.
   "Aimee, you're already dead." My smile faded and my heart sunk, because when Adam said that, it finally hit me.
   I really am dead.
   yep aimee's dead
   
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2. jumpthenfallx23
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   May 30, 2012 7:47pm UTC
   SPiRiT
   chapter 5
   Aimee's POV


   "This is so messed up," I told Adam, as we walked out of the school together. "I think it’s a mistake... I'm obviously here..."
   
He looked around and licked his lips. 
"I don't know. I mean the dirt road thing seems a bit crazy; you might've just been hallucinating. Do you feel okay? Are you high?" he looked at me with a confused expression. 

   "NO! And I feel fine!" i shouted, "ugh." 

   "Maybe you should try talking to the school board and let them know it's a big mistake." 

   "That's the problem. I tried talking to my teachers, and my friends... it's like know one could see me or hear me. You're the only one who I've talked to all day. I tried talking to practically everyone but no one even acknowledges me. It the weirdest thing!" I laughed at how silly I sounded. It was ridiculous. Maybe I was just dreaming. 

   "Are you sure about that? Here, wait. " He scanned his eyes around the front lawn of the school. "Try talking to Kaylee; she's over there." 

   I went up to Kaylee, and tapped her on the shoulder. She didn't even flinch. 
"Kaylee?" I questioned. "Kaylee? hello?" I said a bit louder this time. 
I turned back to Adam who was watching from the steps. I shrugged. 
I made my way back to him. 
"This is so weird." I sighed.
   I looked over at Adam who looked engrossed in his thoughts.
"Don't worry, we'll get to the bottom of this."
   
"Okay."
   
"Wait," He said, looking out in the distance.
   
"What?"
   
"Try walking out of the school grounds... see if you go back to the dirt road..."
   
"Fine." I said, as i got up, once again heading toward the end of the pathway leading to the school. 
Just like I expected as I took the last step off the sidewalk, the dirt road appeared.
   
"It was there. The dirt road, Just like before. This is so creepy!" I said as i headed back to Adam who was once again waiting on the steps. I was getting frustrated. I wanted to get to the bottom of this. 
Adam sighed, and looked around. 
"Wait, one last thing, Adam. I don't want to keep you here too long. I bet your parents are worried you're not home."
   
"No, trust me i wasn't even planning on going home." He muttered, looking uncomfortable.
   "Oh, do you have plans with your friends? You should go, I'll catch up with you later." I said.
   "I don't have friends.." He whispered under his breath.
   
"What?" I asked.
   
"Oh, uh, nothing. I mean, so, uh what's your last idea?" He said.

   "Pinch me."
   
"What?" He asked, confused. 

   "Pinch me! Like they do in movies to see if you're dreaming!"
   
"Oh, okay," He said as he moved his finger to my arm to pinch me. "Feel it?"
   
"No..."
   uh oh :o are you guys liking it? leave a comment and let me know!
   
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3. jumpthenfallx23
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   May 28, 2012 1:15pm UTC
   SPiRiT
   chapter 4
   adam's pov
   I took one last look at my house before I walked to school. I wasn't upset about what I was going to do, I was actually relieved. I couldn't stand being here any more. I thought about writing my parents letters, a quick goodbye, but figured they wouldn't care anyway.
   The school day seemed to drag on longer than usual. I just wanted the last bell to ring so I could leave before I have any regrets. Not that there was anything that could change my mind.
   I was wearing a T-shirt because it was getting close to summer. The scars on my arms from years of cutting were exposed. This was the first day I ever let them show in public. As I walked through the grueling halls of high school, no one smiled at me or even questioned the several cuts along my arm. Just another reason why I needed to leave. High School sucked.
   I was in the english hallway, heading towards my last class when I did a double take. I could've swore I saw Aimee Reynolds walk by. Wasn't she dead? There were a bunch of announcements about it earlier and an optional ceremony during lunch. I didn't go because I never really talked to her. I wonder if people would show up to my ceremony, if they even had one.
   Probably not.
   Aimee walked by again. Or at least a girl who looked like her. She looked lost. Almost panicked.
   "Aimee? Is that you?"
   Her head whipped towards my direction.
   "You..you can see me?" She stood staring at me.
   "Yes. But, uhm, not to be rude or anything… aren't you supposed to be dead?"
   "No. Well, yes. Actually, I don't know." She confessed.
   "You don't know if you're dead or not?" I asked her.
   She was standing next to me but people who passed gave me a look like I was talking to the wall.
   "I don't know what happened! I woke up in this strange room then there was this weird path and then BAM the school was right in front of me. I walked in and no one noticed me. It was like I was invisible." She babbled on and on.
   "I know how that feels." I whispered.
   "What?" She said.
   "Nothing."
   Aimee started to walk away and I chased after her.
   "Wait! Where are you going?" I asked.
   "To find out if I'm dead." She stated.
   "Can I come?" I don't know what it was about this whole thing.. it intrigued me. I guess it was pretty cool I could potentially be talking to a dead person.
   every one meet adam! thank you guys for the faves and comments each one means alot! <3
   
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4. jumpthenfallx23
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   May 27, 2012 10:44pm UTC
   SPiRiT
   chapter 3
   I walked down the road for what seemed like hours. As i kept walked, nothing appeared on the horizon beside the ever lasting dirt road. I was beyond confused. I had never seen that sort of terrain near where I lived- especially because I lived in the suburbs. My body still felt light as i walked in an almost hypnotic pattern; left, right, left, right...
   -------
   Just as I was about to take a short break, having no idea where i was going, a building appeared about a quarter of a mile away. I decided to walk towards it to see what it was. I got closer, and realized the building was very familiar. It was my school. Only, it wasn't on the corner of Cedar street, in-between the fire house, and the bakery. It just appeared in this deserted land. The grass formed a rectangle, and the school sat on top. All my classmates were mingling outside of school. The clock on top of the school read 7:15 am which was weird, since the sun looked like it was well up in the sky, at the position it would be at noon. As i stepped onto the grass from the dirt road, the sun suddenly bounced back, closer to the horizon; where it would be if it was 7:15 am. I could hear all the kids chatter; and followed them all inside as the bell rang and they shuffled to get to class. Like a normal day, i made my way to math. I arrived in class late, and as i walked in, not a head turned. Even the teacher didn't notice me coming in late. Ms.Roberts is usually the toughest when it comes to tardiness. My seat was taken, so i sat down in the back.
   "Once you take the square root of 49, you'll have your answer. Any questions?"
   Ms.Roberts voice echoed through the silent room. Math was boring, and I was so confused. I raised my hand to ask a question.
   Ms.Roberts answered about 5 questions. My hand was getting tired from being raised so long. Why wasn't she answering my question?
   "No more questions?" She asked, in her high pitched voice.
   "Uhm, Ms.Roberts?" I asked, waving my hand back and forth to get her attention.
   "Ok, lets continue with the lesson."
   "Whatever," I mumbled. The lady was probably deaf anyway.
   The bell rang, and we all stood up to say the pledge.
   "Now its time for the morning announcements" The voice barked out through the speaker.
   "Today we have a very important meeting for all staff members after school. Please see the flyers posted in front of the main office. As most of you may know, we've lost a student, classmate, and wonderful friend to everyone in Cedar Road High. It is so unfortunate, and we send our deepest sympathies to the family and friends of Aimee Reynolds."
   What the hell…
   Thats me. I'm Aimee Reynolds! AND I AM NOT DEAD.
   "WHAT!" I shouted. My face went pale and i started hyperventilating.
   "Im not dead! Im right here!" I yelled, as loud as I could.
   No one looked back at me.
   "This is a huge mistake."
   the plot will start to pick up i promise! the next chapter is one of my favorites :)!
   
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5. jumpthenfallx23
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   May 26, 2012 11:57am UTC
   SPiRiT
   chapter 2
   I didn't have anything with me. Not even my phone, which was odd, my phone was practically a part of my body. I never went anywhere with out it.
   I was wearing my favorite party dress, a cute necklace I got for Christmas, and an old charm bracelet.
   As I reached for the front door my hands where shaking. I wasn't really sure what to expect, and I don't do to well with surprises.
   Ask anyone who knows me, especially people who went to my thirteenth birthday. My best friend, Kristen, planned a surprise party at her house. She invited me to sleepover and watch a movie so I put on sweatpants with no make-up and walked to her house. When I opened her front door 30 people jumped out from under tables, behind couches and inside closets. "SURPRISE!" They screamed. I didn't even get a chance to say anything before I fell to the floor.
   "Aimee? Aimee! Aimee are you okay?" I was a little woozy. I couldn't tell who was talking to me.
   "Yeah. Just…surprised." I replied.
   Well that's kind of the point, silly." Yep. It was Kristen.
   Ever since then, surprises just weren't my cup of tea. That's why when I grabbed the door knob and began to twist it I tried to prepare for some creepy rapist to pop out at me. Click. It was open. I wanted to close my eyes but I figured that wouldn't be the smartest thing to do.
   The door squeaked as I opened it, as if it were old.
   Phew. There was nothing there. It looked just like my house, even the grocery list posted on the fridge was unchanged. I still couldn't figure out why my room was emptied. Was there a party last night? Was I drunk? Who knows.
   I walked out the door and I was definitely not on my street. All I saw was an everlasting dirt road. I guessed that's where I was headed.
   okay the first few chapters are pretty boring but it gets so good i promise! ah im so excited i just want to post the whole thing. Thanks for reading<3
   
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6. jumpthenfallx23
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   May 26, 2012 12:05am UTC
   SPiRiT
   chapter 1
   I woke up with a strange tingling feeling. I rubbed my eyes a few times until they slowly opened. I couldn't see anything around me until I blinked my eyes a million times. I was laying face up to the ceiling. After a few seconds of extreme confusion- even worse than the kind that comes along after you wake up in the morning-- i began to slowly tilt my head up and look at my surroundings. Where was I? What was I doing on the floor?
   It took me a few minutes to realize it was my own bedroom. The posters of my favorite pop stars, picture of my friends and all my trophies from thousands of track meets were gone. So was my desk, and all of my clothes. I pulled myself to sit up, and my body felt as light as a feather. Did I pass out? I didn't feel sick or nauseous.
   A clock with blinking red numbers read 8:35am on a table beside me. It was obviously morning. Finally, i got myself to stand up. I was hit with an extreme dizziness before i could catch my balance, but i used a stack of boxes beside me to help me stay on my feet. Once again, i scanned my eyes around what I thought was my room. The curtains were closed, keeping out the bright sunlight. The room smelled musty and dirty, as if no one had even laid foot in it for a year. The door was cracked slightly open, with a sliver of light illuminating a corner of the room. Making my way towards the door was the hardest part. Even though it was only a few feet away, I kept tripping over things like I hadn't ever used my feet before. I walked down the hallway of my house, but something was off. All of the my families personal items were gone, even the molding where I marked my height every year had been painted over. For a second I considered that I had just woken up from a coma and my family just left me here. Pft, that sounded so stupid. Then, I was afraid i lost my memory. I still knew my name, my age, my phone number-- it was all still there in my brain. So, if I hadn't changed, what happened to the world around me?
   hey guys! i started writing this story a while ago but lost interest in it. I completely redid all the chapters and im adding more now. hope you enjoy! and dont forget to comment :)
   
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7. jumpthenfallx23
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   May 25, 2012 11:39pm UTC
   Me: *thinking* I hate everyone. I hate you.
   Me:Ew, what are you wearing?
   Me:This teacher is wierd.
   Me: oh shoot what if they can read my mind.
   Me: hello? do you hear me?
   Me: *staring at friend* do you hate her too?
   Friend:
   Me:
   Friend:
   Me:
   Friend:
   Me:
   Friend:
   Me: okay i think its safe.
   
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8. jumpthenfallx23
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   July 23, 2011 12:08am UTC
   ~INVISIBLE~
   Yes, it's over!
   It's been a long bumpy ride but I'd like to thank every single person who read and supported my first story on witty. I love hearing from every one of you and I can't wait to do it all again with my next story!
   
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9. jumpthenfallx23
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   July 23, 2011 12:00am UTC
   ~INVISIBLE~
   part twenty seven
   A few days later we were back in school. We survived that crazy field trip and in a week, we could say we survived another year of high school. Looking back, I really can't believe all the things I went through this year. I experienced some of the happiest and most heart breaking days ever in my life. My dream boy fell just as much in love with me, as I was in love with him. My enemy, who later became one of my best friends, tried to ruin my relationship and make Brandon cheat/break up with me. My friends proved they really are my friends and they always will be.
   At the beginning of this year I felt invisible. I thought no one noticed me, cared about me, wanted me, or was even jealous of me. I thought that when I walked through the halls I would never change some one's life like so many people had changed mine.
   Yes, at one time in my life I felt invisible. But now, with the help of a few good friends, I'm only invisible to those who can't except that this is me, Taylor, and that's all I am: A teenage girl with big dreams who won't stop until she achieves them.
   THE END.
   
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10. jumpthenfallx23
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    July 18, 2011 11:50pm UTC
    ~INVISIBLE~ part twenty six
    I have to admit, I was a little nervous walking up to a kid who thought he could get with me by being mysterious and stupid. I was thinking about what to say but Brandon just spit it out for me. "Hey, you. Yeah you, Owen. I know what you're up to, and I'm just warning you. Stay away from MY girlfriend. You understand?"
    Owen was a little shocked. "Uhm..uh...um...who?"
    "MY GIRLFRIEND. TAYLOR. Dude she is so out of your leauge I don't even know what you were thinking."
    I had to giggle. This whole thing was quite a sceptical. Plus, it was pretty hot seeing Brandon get so jealous and defensive over me. "Okay, Brandon. I think he gets it." I said.
    "Yeah, he better." I dragged Brandon away from the poor kid but he still had hate in his eyes.
    Brandon was acting very protecting and he kept looking around like someone was going to pop out with a gun. "Brandon, he's just a desperate kid. Calm down, nothing's going to happen!" I assured him.
    "You're right. Sorry. I just- I don't know. I don't like other guys talking to you like that. It's disrespectful." He said. "And I don't want to loose you." He said under his breath.
    "Loose me?" I asked.
    "Yes."
    "Why would you think that?"
    "Taylor, you're so beautiful and you have tons of guys drooling all over the place, and out of everyone you chose me. Dumb jock Brandon. I don't want you to realize you can have any other guy and not want me anymore." He sounded so sweet and sincere it made me smile.
    "Brandon, are you serious? I love you. Not any other guy who is drooling over me, which by the way doesn't exist. YOU are the one i chose and the one I'm so lucky to have. I couldn't ask for a more perfect boyfriend."
    "I love you, Taylor."
    "I love you too, Bradon." Yes, then he kissed me. It was perfect. Magical. Undescribable. A few people had stared at us and aww'd. I haven't felt stronger feelings for anyone my entire life than I do for Brandon. And at this moment, it couldn't be more perfect.
    hey yall. sorry this is such a short chapter my summer is so flippin busy im never on the computer! im working on a weebly website for this story but im thinking of ending it soon, its getting pretty long and i would like to start a new story so comment with ideas and thoughts! thank you! <3
    
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11. jumpthenfallx23
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    July 10, 2011 8:32pm UTC
    ~INVISIBLE~
    part twenty five
    "Lizzy! Liz, come here now." I said grabbing her wrist and pulling her aside.
    "Ouch. What's your problem?" She rubbed her wrist like I actually hurt her. Pft.
    "Look at these texts I just got!" I shoved my phone in her face.
    "Woah! Who the hell is that?" She screamed.
    "I don't know! That's kinda why we're having this conversation," I said.
    "Okay tell me the number and I'll check my phone."
    After searching through all of Lizzy's contacts we still have no clue who it could be. "Maybe Amanda or Sarah know." I suggested. We told them what happened and they didn't have the number either.
    "It's probably someone on the field trip." Sarah said.
    "Yeah, but I know most people here. So who could it be?" I responded.
    "Hmm. Let's tell Brandon. Maybe he knows who it is." Amanda said.
    "Good idea." Lizzy agreed.
    "Hey Brandon!" I shouted calling him over.
    "Yep?" He smiled. My heart still skips a beat every time he does.
    "Do you know who this is?" I read him the texts and told him the number.
    "Here it is. Woah. It's that kid Owen. He's on the trip." Brandon looked like he was about to start laughing.
    "Brandon it's not funny! This kid is weird." I said.
    "Does he seriously think you would go make out with him? Ha." Brandon seemed to get a little jealous.
    "Don't worry honey I wouldn't make out with some creep." I smiled and hugged him.
    "Good." He said and kissed me.
    Everyone around us became a little uncomfortable and awkward.
    "So, what are we going to do about this kid?" I asked.
    "Kick him in the balls?" Brandon said.
    That pretty much made everyone die of laughter.
    wow guys im so sorry its been 2 weeks since i wrote! i rewrote this story twice and lost it both times because my computer shut down. i got kinda frustrated. then i got lazy. but i feel so so so bad so im writing another chapter right now:)
    enjoy! and i would appreciate any feedback! thank you guys so much<3
    
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12. jumpthenfallx23
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    June 22, 2011 3:31pm UTC
    ~INVISIBLE~
    part twenty four
    (the last one should be 23)
    "Alright class. Split up into four groups. You have three hours to walk around and fill out this information sheet, that will be graded as a quiz. Meet back here around 2 o'clock so we can head to the next destination... lunch."
    Every one scrambled around looking for their friends and assembling groups. We were allowed to have ten people so, in group we had: Me, Lizzy, Amanda, Nicole, Sarah, her two plastic friends, Brandon, his bud Jake, and the new kid Mark. Well that was easy.
    "Okay guys lets get this quiz done so we can just walk around." Everyone agreed and took out their iPhones and Blackberries to Google the answer. No one said we weren't allowed.
    I read the first question, and laughed. "Where are we?"
    "GUYS I DON'T UNDERSTAND NUMBER ONE." Amanda said, trying to be funny.
    "Cool story Amanda! Tell it again!" Oh snap, she got dissed by Brandon.
    "So are we just writing Washington DC?" Lizzy asked.
    "That is where we are..." Sarah said, and Lizzy tried really hard not to comment back. I could see it in her face. She really doesn't like her.
    The next question made everyone laugh. Oh, those history teachers.
    The answer we were looking for on number one was not Washing DC, but that is an acceptable answer. We want to know, what building are we in? "The White House." We all wrote. The next few questions were basic knowledge on the white house and branches of government.
    "Okay, what now?" Jake asked.
    "Wanna just explore a little?" Nicole asked.
    "Sure let's go!" I said.
    We all walked around until we found a garden. There were a few benches so we sat down to eat the sandwiches we bought. We were all laughing and talking when I got a strange text from an un known number.
    new message from: 771-2984
    hey babe. meet me by the bathrooms so we can have a little fun.
    new message to: 771-2984
    who is this..
    new message from: 771-2984
    your dreams.
    uh oh. creepin in the white hiz-houseeee.thank you everyone for all the feedback and suggestions! its about to get hot in here;)
    
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14. jumpthenfallx23
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    June 19, 2011 1:37am UTC
    ~INVISIBLE~
    part twenty two
    "So now that we might be in here for a while, just out of curiosity, why the hell do you hate me so much?" I asked Sarah. We were sitting on opposite sides of the elevator.
    She laughed to herself, like she saw this coming. "Taylor, look at yourself. You are beautiful. You one of the nicest people I've met, you have great friends and your personality is amazing. I've always wanted that. I have fake, plastic friends and guys only like me for my tight pants and low shirts. It's the only way I can get attention. But, you, you have something else that shines through. That's why Brandon loves you, and not me. I knew he never loved me. Sure, he liked when I flirted with him and went to parties with him, but he never looked at me the way he looks at you. I saw you too on the bus, cuddling and being happy together, that's what I want. Not drunken hookups at stupid parties."
    Sarah started to cry and I just kinda looked at her. I didn't really know what to say.
    "Oh. Wow. Sarah. I-I-I-I'm sorry. You really don't have to be jealous of me. You're the most popular girl in our grade, in our school probably. Everyone wants to be you."
    "Taylor you don't get it! I hate this reputation I have that I would sleep with a guy if he asked me. I would never do something that slutty. Ever. People just have this image of me, because yes, I have made a few terrible mistakes. But I would take them all back if I could. This reputation is destroying me, not making me stronger or a better person. It's keeping me from having real relationships and friendships. It's not what I want."
    "Sarah, you are beautiful too. You can get rid of this reputation. People will respect you more if you think of yourself as a real person. Start acting confident, respect yourself, and everyone will respect you. You have a pretty face! Don't hide it with cover up and eye liner. You have a nice body but you don't need to give it all away and show it off. Flatter it with cute outfits that look good on you. These things you don't like about yourself can all change. I promise."
    "Thank you, Taylor. I really mean it. You're the first person who's ever tried being nice to me, after all I've done to you. After I sabotaged your relationship with Brandon over and over again..."
    "Don't remind me or I'll change my mind." I said, joking.
    "Taylor, I know this is asking a lot, but can you help me? Help me recreate myself. The new Sarah. The sweeter, classier Sarah."
    "Of course, I'd love to. It might take some time, but I'll help you through it." I smiled at her. My views on Sarah completely shifted in a few minutes of being trapped in an elevator.
    "Thank you so much for being here for me. You're my only real friend." Sarah whispered. I scooted to her side of the elevator and gave her a hug. I let her lean on my shoulder and for a second we both just took in what had happened.
    "I am so hungry right now." I said, because my stomach was screaming and growling at me.
    "Ugh. Me too. I could use some Nutella right now."
    "Mmm. I love nutella." I licked my lips just thinking about it.
    We kept talking about normal girl things like shopping and boys. It seemed like we had been friends forever when suddenly the elevator doors opened.
    "GIRLS. YOU ARE IN SO MUCH TROUBLE. Are you okay? Do I need to call your parents?" Mr.Crazy-Pants was the first person we saw when the doors split.
    "We're fine. Actually, we're great." Sarah smiled.
    "Back to your rooms, now. Both of you."
    "Kay!" We skipped past him and ran to our rooms.
    We hugged goodbye and I told her I would text her later.
    I slammed the room door shut and Lizzy ran up to me. "Where were you!? We thought you died or something."
    "Oh, hun. I was pretty close."
    "Huh?"
    "I have to tell you guys something..."
    i love this story. enough said. i wish i knew these people in real life. gah. ok. love yall. <3
    
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16. jumpthenfallx23
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    invisible~part twenty
    Only six more hours until I would be on a coach bus heading to Washington DC. I should be sleeping, but we have to be at the school by 4 and the ride is 5 hours long. I think I'll find time to sleep. I checked by bag to make sure I had three cute outfits, sunglasses, sun block, toiletries, my camera and a bunch of other pointless stuff. I finally fell asleep after an hour of scrolling through witty quotes on my iPod. Five hours later my mom trudged into my room. "TAYLOR. YOU HAVE YOUR TRIP TODAY SWEATY. WAKE UP YOU SLEEPY HEAD." I rolled over and gave her the "five more minutes" thing. "You need time to look good for Brandon." She winked at me."Mom!" I screamed embarrassed."Oh common I know you try to impress him.""No I don't! He's seen me in sweats before. Brandon doesn't care what I wear.""Fine. Well at least brush your teeth. You know, just in case he tries to make out with you.""MOTHER." My cheeks turned bright red."I was a teenager once too." Good one, mom."Yeah but you're old. Things are different now.""I know how to stay hip! I have an iPhone!" She whipped out her iPhone just to brag."Good for you, Mom. Now get out so I can make myself look human."She walked out and I through on comfortable shorts and T-shirt. I put my hair in braids and put on a little mascara. When I got to the school it was still dark. My phone buzzed inside my pocket and it made me jump.
    1 new message from: Brandonhey babe;) good morning! are you sitting with me on the bus?1 new message to: Brandongood morning to you too baby:) and of course!
    I met up with him, Lizzy, Amanda and Nicole and we all headed to thebuses. The seats were in rows of three so I sat in between Brandon and Amanda. Lizzy and Nicole sat across from us with this new kid, Mark.Everyone was half asleep so instead of wasting time on talking, we all took out blankets and collapsed on the person next to us. I leaned my head on Brandon's chest and he stroked my hair. I woke up and it had already been two hours. Brandon was still awake and he smiled when he noticed my eyes were open. "Good morning, again, beautiful."I smiled and replied, "Good morning handsome.""How was your nap?" He asked."Cozy. I feel warm when I'm with you.""You look so peaceful in your sleep, it's quite cute." He kissed my forehead. I giggled and rested my head again.Pretty much everyone on the bus was awake now. Nicole had been talking to that Mark kid for a while and they seemed to be getting along.Lizzy switched seats so she could be next to Steven and they were completely cuddling and giggling. Everyone seemed to be happy on the long bus ride.Until we got lost.
    
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18. jumpthenfallx23
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    ~INVISIBLE~ part eighteen
    Amanda wasn't really sure how to respond. She gave me a confused look and nodded, and mouthed go for it to her. I knew how much they loved eachother. I could see it in their eyes. Nick looked at Amanda like he would do anything for her and she looked at him like she never wanted to lose him. She grabbed the phone and started talking.
    "Hey. Its me." She mumbled into the phone.
    "Amanda?" His voice got happier.
    "Yeah."
    "Amanda. Oh my gosh I'm so sorry. I don't know what to say. I was being stupid. And i was upset.. and. And some one told me you didn't like me anymore. I was afraid you moved on."
    "Nick that could never happen. I will always love you, Nicholas."
    Lizzy Nicole and I looked at eacher. "Mission accomplished." Lizzy pointed out.
    "I will always love you, too, Amanda."
    Amanda sat there smiling into the phone while her and Nick talked for about two hours. I guess a little breakup showed them how much they always wanted to be together.
    ~~~~~~~~~~
    After that issue was taken care of, of course something else happened. The whole entire night Lizzy had been texting her "best friend", Steven. They've known eachother since third grade and I swear they are going to get married some day, but Lizzy always denies it.
    "Guys, we're just friends." We never believed her, though. Lizzy always jokes about them making out behind the school during lunch whenever she goes to the bathroom, but who knows. Maybe they really did.
    "Sooooooo Lizzy. Who are yah talkin' to?" I said winking at her.
    "Steven." She couldn't even say his name with a straight face. Her cheeks turned red and you could see she was fighting back a smile.
    "Are you guys planning your next make out sesh?" Nicole popped in.
    "Really guys? Calm down! WE. ARE. JUST. FRIENDS."
    Nicole and I rolled our eyes while Amanda reached for Lizzy's phone.
    Just as she grabbed a new message from Steven lit up the screen.
    New message from: Steven:)
    liz, we've been friends since third grade and we both trust eachother and your beautiful and i know im kinda average but..
    The message cut off.
    Amanda and I ran into the bathroom and locked the door. Again, the screen lit up with his name on it.
    New message from: Steven:)
    I love you Elizabeth.
    "HOLY CRAP. I KNEW IT." We shouted.
    "Hey Liz, looks like some one has a wittle crushy wushy on you." Amanda threw her the phone.
    "Oh. My. God. What do I say?" Now Lizzy was flipping out.
    "Well that depends." Amanda said.
    "Do you love him back?" Nicole asked.
    "Well...I guess so..." She seemed unsure.
    I grabbed her by the shoulders and made her look me in the eye. "Elizabeth Rose, do you love Steven?"
    She bit her lip and nodded. "Alot."
    "THEN TELL HIM THAT." Nicole screamed excitely.
    New message to: Steven:)
    Steven, I love you too.
    awwww so am i the only one whos totally jealous of all these cute relationships? ITS ADORABLE. okay so same thing as always: comments make my life:)
    
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19. jumpthenfallx23
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    ~INVISIBLE~ part seventeen
    Brandon texted me a few minutes later.
    1 new message from:Brandon
    hey is amanda ok? nick just called me and explained..
    1 new message to: Brandon
    she didnt take it to well... got any tissues?
    Amanda was still upset but she was pretty good at putting on a smile, sitting up straight and just acting okay. We all spent the rest of the night watching the Notebook and reading break up quotes on witty. Amanda kept checking her phone like she was expecting him to text back saying "LOL JK I LOVE YOU MANDA PANDA" but for a while, he didn't. Actually, what he did surprised all of us. We were on top quotes on witty when one in peticular stood out. Lizzy read it outloud, "I broke up with the love of my life because I thought it would be better for the both of us. Now I'm realizing it was only better for you, and I'm more crushed then ever." Amanda blinked back tears when Nicole realized something, "guys look really closely at the bottom of that quote."
    Lizzy squinted and shoved her face into the laptop. "Woah. Does that say.. ? No it couldnt be..." She looked at Nicole.
    "I think it is." She replied.
    "Wait, What's going on!? Guys its just a quote calm yourselves." Amanda said over everyone's voice.
    "Amanda... look again. That's not just a quote hun." Lizzy snapped.
    Amanda and I read the screen again and she started crying. In the smallest font below the quote read:
    I love you Amanda. I'm so sorry. - Nick
    We clicked on the username just to make sure it was him. Sure enough, the most recent picture of Amanda and Nick was the profile picture and the info said, "hey im nick. i have a girlfriend, amanda. i love her alot. if you want to talk to me you might as well ask about her because shes all i think about."
    "AWWWWWW." We all said, except for Amanda. She went to get more tissues.
    "AMANDA. You have to see this." I whispered. She was still upset but she trudged toward the laptop.
    "Yes?" She asked.
    "It's him. Nick wrote that quote. He still loves you, Amanda." Lizzy chimed in.
    "Yeah right guys. There's other Nicks out there." Amanda wasn't budging.Nicole said,"Other Nicks who just broke up with an Amanda?"
    "Yes."
    "No."
    This arguing continued until Lizzy just picked up her phone and called Nick.
    "Hey Nick." She spit into the phone.
    "Hi...Lizzy...." He thought she called to yell at him for breaking up with her best friend, but she wasn't.
    "Do you have a witty?" Random questions from Lizzy were kinda expected.
    "What? No... thats for girls." Amanda gave her an I-told-you-so look.
    "Oh really? Your not nicklovespanda216? Because Panda is your pet name for Amanda and you asked her out on Febuary sixteenth, or 2/16." Lizzy was on a roll and you could tell over the phone Nick was getting nervous.
    "FINE. That's me." He hung up.
    "Told yah so." Lizzy said to Amanda.
    awww he has a witty ;) haha so is anyone still reading? :(
    BIG THANKS TO EVERYONE WHO COMMENTS YOU MAKE MY DAY;D<33
    
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