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1. iloveu4ever51
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   July 30, 2013 3:56pm UTC
   Hidden Chapter Eleven
   ♥ Ellie ♥
   Those horrifying texts were haunting all of us and now my mind was trying to calculate it's way out.Jenelle and her friends might know something and her two diaries did show that she knew something.I called Abbey and Savannah for an emergency meeting because we couldn't just sit here and wait for our lives to end."What are we going to do?"Abbey said.
   "Whoever they are going to be killed if we find them."I leaded on with a confident voice.
   "I think we should finish Alli off.She could be doing this as a revenge and faking to be in coma."Savannah suggested.
   "Don't be foolish.Who fakes being in coma for 14 years?"I said.
   "We need to find this person quick and make a deal to shut them up."I noted.
   "Yeah you can say it but I don't think we can actually do it."Abbey annoyingly added.My frustration level grew as I put my hands around her throat.
   "Or maybe you need to be killed you sl!t !"I screamed.
   Abbey whimpered but still didn't complain,"Please I'll do whatever you want."
   I smiled evilly then added,"You better or you know..."With one gesture I took a knife to her throat as she bobbled her head like a doll."Well now that's all settled Abbey you will "use" Mark and get information from the hospital on how Alli's doing and who's seeing her."
   Savannah chimed in,"What do I do Elli?"
   "You keep an eye on Alyssa."I commanded.
   "Right."Savannah added with a final note and left.For some reason I couldn't trust Savannah so when she left I descreetly I casted a spell to see where Alyssa was.She was tucked into a bed with Zach holding her hand.When the view closed up I saw she had scratchs on her body as blood rolled down her head.In a flick of motion I appeared near the house.With a victorious smile I walked towards the house and rang the bell.
   Zach swung the door as I stepped in."Elli there is actually something wrong.Alyssa has some injuries and it's just that I..?"He made me follow him even though I knew his house even if I was blindfolded.In slow motion I walked towards her and grabbed her hand to make it look like I was checking her pulse.Out of nowhere her recent memories came flooding back to me.I came back to reality knowing Alyssa wanted to commit suicide just like I thought."Zach she's suicidal, she was for a long time.I think I need to take her to the mental asylum.I closed my eyes and conjured my car outside as I lifted Alyssa.I admitted her to the mental hospital knowing I had stopped the girls
   Did you miss me?Hmm I think you should know you can't shut the girls up forever.I know what you did and I'll tell them if you don't tell them.And if the police asks for evidence then....
   ♥ M ♥
   I clicked on the link which made me stare at it.A video of all of us hurting Alli was shot as my face turned pale.Whoever this person was knew and they weren't afraid.Could M be out there right now watching me?I shook my shoulders and stood up taller just to let them know I couldn't be broken.With casual steps I walked in the coffee shop to order some soothing tea to calm my jangled nerves.Two cops sat next to me as I spoke up."Hello Officer Dan and Officer Tom."
   "Hello to you too Elli and how are you doing?"Officer Dan said.
   "Good how's work?"I asked.Now I felt someone's hand on my thighs giving me a delicous feeling.I stared at Dan as he smiled to me."Excuse me Officer's I need to go back to work."
   "Well it was nice seeing you Elli."Officer Dan said as Officer Tom just stared at his coffee.Being around the cops gave me a creep as I wished James was here.That fool thought the S team helped orignzations which was half true since we did offer money to many Suicide Prevention programs but the S team was really about controlling the world.I dressed up quickly and made myself vanish to the FBI awards handed in Italy.When I arrived the sights and smell was always flowing around like crazy but I loved Italy.Most of the times I didn't bring my weapons but this time I brought them since I had a bad feeling.You would think FBI agent's stay hidden don't they?If you decide to leave then they manipulate your mind to forget some things but not all.I was in charge luckily.
   "Welcome agents from all of the world we're here at the 36th annual award cermony."Danielle said.
   Alix from the band Ghost Town also spoke up,"Remember folks after this we can have the FBI agent party of the year."
   "That's right Alix but this time no parties at the graveyard."Danielle joked.
   "Not this time but maybe next time.After all even the dead want to crash a party if they can."Alix joked back as the crowd laughed.
   "We will have Amy Lee and Harmony presenting the Best Female of the Year award."Danielle finished as a huge applause thundered across the stage until Amy walked in.Her black gown skirted around her as she had black leather gloves on.Next to her Harmony wore a green gown as she flashed a smile.In her hand she had a white paper that made us lean towards the edge in anticipation.
   Amy spoke up,"First of all thank you for having us it's a great honor.And now the nominees of Best Female Agent of the Year awards are:Ellie Whiteld,Audrey Hastings,Hannah Morrow and Agnes Ilenne."
   Harmony added,"The Best Female Agent award goes to.....Ellie Whiteld!
   I got up to the stage as everyone roared and cheered.Alli was nothing and I was everything."Thank you everyone for giving me this award.I can't believe I was even nominated for this but I was.I hope to be the best I can be and serve for the better good."Fire broke out and everyone screamed for a weapon to smack a lurking villian but no one could find anything with the thick layer of carbon monoxide.I manage to make it outside as the whole thing blew up in fire and ash.I looked at my phone to see a text message.
   You'll be in jail for what you've done and congrats on getting the Worst Female Agent award.Cheers!
   ♥ M ♥
   A/N: Another ending with thousands of questions.Is M good or bad?What about Alyssa?Will she remember anything?I guess we'll have to wait until the next chapter and until next time thanks for reading.
   
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2. iloveu4ever51
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   July 24, 2013 10:35pm UTC
   Hidden Chapter Ten
   ♥ Alyssa ♥
   A blue fog swirled around as I stumbled my way to freedom.Blood was matted on my forehead as sweat poured on my back.Someone wanted me dead.Where could I go?Whispers floated to me as I crumped to my knees.It felt like poison was filling me as a major headache pounded on me.Time was running out and I couldn't do anything.A screen filled the air as Alli's face popped up."Alyssa listen to me.Fight! Fight back!"Alli screamed."Fight Alyssa you can't lose.You can't-"My breath started fading away as I could feel myself leaving.
   Something inside of me told that they were important but who could help me?Avery did train a lot to become the lead FBI agent.Sadly it caused a huge rift between Jenelle and Avery since they were both wanting to be the lead FBI agent.I dialed Avery's number and it went straight to voicemail. I called Jenelle and after couple of moments she picked it up,"Hey what's up?'
   "Jenelle I've been having weird dreams.I seriously need to meet up with you.Can I have a sleepover at your house?"I asked.
   She sighed and wearily said,"I'm in Paris."
   "Why?"I asked.
   "My mom thinks I've gone crazy but a lot has happened.Need to explain some things to you."Jenelle said." I'm coming over don't tell anyone."She added and hung up.Sometimes I didn't get Jenelle and it seems like something rattled her badly.If something happened to Jenelle then it was bad.A whirlwind appeared as I coughed.Jenelle looking very normal like stepped towards me and I hugged her.
   "How did you do that?"I asked.
   "It's magic and so many things have happened."Jenelle replied.In her arm she had to navy color notebooks as we plopped ourselves on my bed.
   "You start."I said.
   "I was jogging and I found these two diaries in my way.When I opened it I realized it was about a girl name Jenny who had a boyfriend name Hunter."Jenelle said."Jenny was suicidal and in the end it had an entry of her knowing something.I think someone was out to hurt her to like us."
   "Whoa whoa whoa who would try to hurt us?"I asked.
   "Have you been getting texts from a person called M?"Jenelle nervously replied.
   "No but I have been getting creepy dreams."I told her.Jenelle showed her blackberry that had text messages from M.
   "No we can't let this end us.Jenny died but we can't."I said.
   "What about your dreams?"Jenelle said.I quickly told a summary of my dream as her face remained calm but I knew she was analyzing the situation."We need to find out about Alli and Jenny.Maybe something in the past will help us.I'll look for M in Paris and can you help look up info on Alli and Jenny?"
   "Sure but when am I seeing you again?"I asked.
   "I'll leave a message."She said and vanished in a whirlwind.
   "What's up honey?"Dad asked.
   I spoke up,"Dad do you know anyone name Jenny or Alli?"
   Dad's face froze then he released his breath."I don't anyone the name of Jenny or Alli."
   "Oh okay thanks dad."I said and he left in a weird motion.Something about my dad was suspicious so I decided to follow him.
   Mom spoke up,"I didn't do anything okay? That's was 14 years ago.Alli's in coma and you can't do anything about it got it?You're mine and Alyssa was just an accident."
   "How can you say that?"Dad said as I felt tears on my face."Listen to me we can't do anything about this.Elli controls her dreams and we can't do anything.How are you with her?"
   "Just like you aren't.I know you lied about knowing Alli.What are you going to do about that when she figures that out?"Mom shouted back as an eeire silence fell across the hall.I walked away as I tried muffling my tears.Mom's words echoed in my mind and I realized I was just an accident.She never loved me.Even dad doesn't love me.
   I called Jenelle and told her everything.For a moment it was silent then she said,"We need more leads.Maybe it's just a concidence that she that.One thing can't prove anything at all."
   I straightened up and noticed she was right.I needed couple more to prove mom was guilty.Maybe dad did love me but was forced to lie.
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   Without thinking I took a shower and decided to check any hospitals nearby if they have a patient name Allison.Once mom and dad left I grabbed my phone and called the nearest hospital.The voice said,"Hello this is Mayflower Hospital how may I help you?"
   I gulped nervously then in wheezing voice said,"Is there an Allison at your hospital?"
   The nurse replied,"Why yes of course we have a patient name Allison McCall."With a fast reflex I grabbed a car and drove to the Mayflower Hospital.Luckily no one caught me as I tried to calmly walk in.None of the nurses glanced at me as I headed towards the front desk.
   "Hello can I see Allison McCall?"I asked.The nurse nodded then handed a sign in sheet.I opened to the page and saw dad's neat signature every Saturday.I signed in and walked towards her room trying to look confident.When I strolled in I saw a pale women with soft brown hair as she looked completely relaxed.Next to her stood my dad who was clutching her hand like it was the end of his life."Tell me why.Tell me everything.Who was she?What was her story?"I replied in a monotone voice.As he told me the story my sorrow turned to rage.I didn't know how cruel my dad and my mom were but were they like this now?Could they be sending me the dreams and giving threatening text messages to Jenelle?How could he?"You are not my father.How could you lie to me? You are a monster that has replaced my dad.When you find some dignity to do right to the wrong you have done then find me."
   Before I left his eyes were pleading with me as Alli's hand tightened around his hands.I jumped in the car and drove around manically until I crashed the car purposely.Any normal person would hide if they thought it was a kidnapper but I trudged to the voice hoping they think I was an animal and shot me.A figure came and then I saw Zach."What are you doing here Alyssa?Are you okay?"He asked.My world seemed to be tilted as gray clouds swarmed to me.I could feel Zach catching me.
   A/N:Heartbreaking isn't it? Alyssa's whole life changed but is Jace really being M?How did Zach find her there?Are these girls being paranoid or is history repeating itself?Until next time we'll find out the answers to our questions.
   
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3. iloveu4ever51
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   July 22, 2013 4:36pm UTC
   Hidden Chapter Nine
   ♥ Jenelle ♥
   My head felt like it was burning on fire as my eyes creaked.I glanced at my leg to see it was wrapped in a cast as I winced.The nurse looked at me and gave me a friendly smile.Slowly I took a deep breath and took in the horrible smell of antispetics as the nurse laughed."Well you're awake now and how are you feeling?"the nurse asked me.
   "Uh as good as you can feel wearing a cast."I joked as he laughed.
   "Well how old are you anyways?"He said trying to maintain conversation.
   "I'm 14 you?"I replied.
   "I'm 16 and I'm helping the doctor around."He said.
   "Cool I guess this is the weirdest way of getting to know you since I'm in a cast."I said.The door flung open and spoiled the happy mood you can have in a hospital.My mom who looked like she was going to slap the nurse sat next to me.
   "How are you feeling Jenelle?"My mom asked.I wondered if she was actually asking me in concern or was the money rising for me to be able to stay here?
   "I'm good mom I believe it'll take just a couple weeks for me to get better."I added.
   "Couple weeks!?"My mom said shocked then added,"But your tennis match is in 2 weeks and college scouts are coming."
   "Mom I can't do that now.Not with my injury."I said.
   "We'll discuss this later while I get your papers so you can leave."My mom briskly said then walked out like no one can stop her.It was true though since her becoming head FBI agent always put a strain on me.
   .The guy nurse spoke up,"Man that is one tough mom and college scouts are looking for you now?"
   "Well my mom has some contact with the college scouts so I can try to get an early scholarship."I informed.
   He whistled then said,"Well I'm Leon and you my friend need to be free."
   "I guess."I said checking my hair to see if it was perfect.
   "So you want me to drop by later at your house?"He asked.
   "Sure."I scrawled my address on a peice of paper.He smiled as I hobbled towards the restroom to change.
   My mom had met me and stared at the ground while I knew I was making her feel ashamed so I walked past her to act like I wasn't her daughter.Sometimes it felt natural but other times I wish my mother acknowledged me even during the bad times not just when I win a tennis match.We got in the car in silence as mom turned around."I can't you believe you did this.You better fix up your problem or else I'm facing the consquences for you."My mom cruelly said as I blinked back tears.
   "But mom please try to understand me someone's trying to-"I was cut off as she picked off her phone motioning me to shut up.My blackberry phone beeped that said I had one new text message.
   Poor Jenelle mommy's upset.
   But I'm on my way to bet
   That you're going to die
   If you stop lying.
   ♥ M ♥
   I looked around wondering if this was a prank or if it was real.Whoever this person was they couldn't stop me from finding the truth.My mom hung up and turned around to give me a bone chilling look.Did she know?When I heard my mom tapping away on the computer I got up and pressed a button.My room whirled for a minute then switched to all blue and purple.Thousands of books were lying around as I walked towards the center and waved my hands.I waved in a certain manner as a large book that had dust on it floated in front of me.I turned to the page to heal my injury at a faster rate so no one would notice me walking the next day.I spoke up,"Alla Ez Mariz"
   "Jenelle!"Someone shouted my name.
   My room turned to normal as I opened my notebook to look very casual.My desk was piled with tons of homework as I started organizing it."Come in."I said.
   Leon walked in."Whatcha doing?"
   "How did you get here so fast?"I asked.
   "Let me show you."He started making a circle using his finger as a whirlwind formed and moved him to another side of my room.
   My eyes widened as I said,"You have powers too?"
   "Shouldn't be surprising since I know you do too."He said.
   I smiled then said,"Wanna go get some ice cream?"
   "Sure he said."We walked out not caring what my mom said as we headed towards an ice cream shop.As we walked towards the ice cream shop Leon informed me of his powers and how he was training with a guy name Alex.
   I spoke up after he finished his story,"Can I join you?"
   "Sure who's your mentor?"He asked.
   "Uh well I kinda teached myself."I awkwardly added.
   He widened his eyes then said,"What! That's incredible!"
   "I ...uh thanks."I felt myself blush as some familar noise caught my attention.
   "Again the noise came and this time it was louder.I couldn't bear it as someone grabbed my arm.There stood my mom who wore a black pencil skirt,black high heels and a professional navy blazer.Her face had pure anger as her grip went into my skin.Leon who was next to me froze in fear and surprise as I couldn't help it but give a little whine."Let's go Jenelle."My mom said.She commanded and dragged me off.Leon looked helpless as I tried walking normal so no one saw me."You're going to a rehab in Paris,France."She said in a monotone voice.
   "What!"I shouted.
   "Don't use that tone with me Jenelle.I saw your diary and your artbook.What I saw will be a disgrace to me.You can't talk to anyone or tell anyone where you will be.If you come back then we'll have plans of your college but right now I am ashamed you are my daughter."My mom said. Beside everything else were two extra navy color notebooks.In a flash I realized those were Jenny's notebooks and my mom thought Leon was Hunter.My phone beeped again meaning that I had a new text message.
   I told mommy Jenelle.
   You're crazy antics are nothing but lies.
   You think you can get away.
   But don't try to hide.
   Paris has another one of me.
   Watch out since you just might be vanishing.
   ♥ M ♥
   A/N:Sorry for taking so long I always end up wanting to get the chapters perfect so hopefully you like this.History is making a repeat and is Elli(Jenelle's mom) going crazy or is someone or something pushing her?
   
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4. iloveu4ever51
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   July 12, 2013 1:26am UTC
   Hidden Chapter Eight
   ♥ Calista ♥
   The wolves gleaming teeth gave a chill down my spine as I tried backing away.My hands were covered in fresh brown dirt that surpringly felt relaxing.Their fur was matted with sweat as I saw in their golden eyes that I was done for.Time seemed to stop as my defenses weakened when I saw one of the wolves jump on me.Then in a flash I tried fighting back as much as I can but it was useless.My body had cuts all over as my blood seeped through my pale dress.My hair was standing in different strands as I could hear them talk.
   Let's take her to the leader.
   No we must finish her.
   We can't! She has the Irish blood which means she is our ruler.
   Well then.
   Now I started to wonder if I was hallucinating but maybe it's just me.Out of nowhere the wolf came to me and nudged me.I patted it and let it know that I was no new danger.They all bowed to me as I smiled.With amble feet I grabbed my belonging and left as they gave me an acknowledging look.I know,I know it's weird but I think maybe taming the wolves were my thing or something.
   As my vision started going in circles I felt to the ground and gave into the glorious slumber.
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   I couldn't open my eyes but I swear something wet was running down my thighs.I felt like I was on fire but it felt sooo good.My chest opened as my breathing quickened with an uneven pace.It was a thrill and I didn't know how I felt.I heard a guy speak up in the distant.
   "Hey man look at this girls thighs they're juicy."The guy chuckled as I felt someone was picking me up.
   I felt a searing hot touch as I felt someone licking me from the inside.My eyes opened up as I punched the guy.
   He laughed then said,"Oh! That hurts!"
   "Well you know what you shouldn't touch a girl when she's unconcious."I spat out.
   "Hey man your 18 I like your body so I can do whatever I want."The guy said laughingly.
   "I'm 14 you know that right?"I said.
   "Sh!** we had no idea but we're still keeping you darling."He put a tape around me and took me to an old dump of a cabin.If he wanted to kill me then couldn't he have atleast made it pretty?Well then I guess death sure has an ugly face.
   "If you're going to kill me then just do it."I said boringly.
   "Oh no we're gonna use you in ever way."The guy said.
   "What's your name?"I asked.
   "Blake honey."He said dripping the words as he tied me.
   He took his black shirt off and showed off his 6 packs.The golden tan on him accentuated his eyelashes which were amazing.Something inside of me shuddered.Slowly he took his shorts off and took my shirt off too.I struggled under his grip as he rubbed me in all the wrong places.Just then he laughed and walked away.I was left there feeling stupid and useless.Just like mom guys only wanted to use me not love me.
   I started crying not caring my makeup was being ruined as he padded back in.
   "Hey darling what's wrong?"He asked softly in an drawl.
   "Everything."I sputtered as he let me go to put my shirt on.I knew there was no chance of me escaping since everything was locked.His eyes held sorrow as I held his gaze.
   "Tell me slowly and whatever you want."He said genty.
   "I can't! You can't know! You freaking almost tried r*ping me!"I screamed.
   When I was done my face was red as he walked away.My eyes began to be drowsy as he sat next to me brushing my hair away.Slowly and gently I felt a little peice of my heart being filled up with something I can't explain.
   Was it possible to like your kidnapper/r*pist?
   A/N:Another chapter and sorry for making it short.I think this might be a filler chapter since more things are coming up.Night has come now but will Abbey be safe? What about Jenelle and her life being on the line? Alyssa and Avery are out of the danger zone but will their hearts be out of the danger zone too?It's all Hidden and secrets will only be revealed in time.
   
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5. iloveu4ever51
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   July 11, 2013 4:23pm UTC
   Hidden Chapter Seven
   ♥ Avery ♥
   My eyes opened up slowly almost like they had huge rocks on top of them as I took notice of the pure blinding white walls in the hospital.No wonder people became blind then again I'm sure the doctors here are lazy and the nurses are sl***.I lifted myself up slowly to make sure I didn't fall on the floor since that would sure make a great news cover.Imagine it! 14 year old girl screams at doctor then trips.I'm pretty sure everyone would be laughing till they die and I'll be stuck with an annoying a** old person.Don't get me wrong old people can fun but sometimes they just make you want to choke yourself.
   A doctor walked in with a clipboard as he smiled when he saw me.
   "Good morning Avery."He flashed his strikingly white teeth.
   "Do you honestly think anyone gets a good morning waking up to a pure white hospital?"I sassily said.
   "Well you are released today to go with your Aunt Lily."The doctor replied in a lightheart tone which made me hate him even more.
   "Actually can I stay at my friends house Jenelle?"I asked sweetly knowing the doctor was scared of me ever since I practically choked him.
   "Yes of course for however long you want to."He said and before leaving he added,"You're clothes are in the restroom.Change then please come meet me in the office.I'll let them you're invited."
   I leaned in closely to him and said,"I don't get invited and stop this fake nice crap since I know you're a fake phony kinda of doctor."
   The doctors eyes widened as he scurried off like a little rat.When he left I quickly shut the door and dressed in my light pink skinny jeans,black boots and leather jacket with a white tee underneath.I walked out to the office and sat down as I gave the doctor the glare.
   "Listen here I want you to make an appointment next week."The doctor said in a stern voice.
   'Why?"I asked a little bored.
   "In our MRI scan we saw a chemical imbalance so we just need to see if your okay."The doctor replied.
   I left without a word because I wasn't going to give him the satisfaction of him making me freaked out.I'm Avery and I'm awesome.With lightening speed I checked my text messages which were from different people as I called Kevin.
   "Hey how's my favorite b****doing so far?"I said in a casual voice.
   "Forget that what happened to you? You going crazy on the doctor is all over."Kevin eclaimed.
   "I can't tell you over the phone wanna make it a date in 15 minutes at Subway?"I asked.
   "Deal and see you in 15 minutes."Kevin chirped and hung up.
   For some reason I felt a little nervous as I stepped in Subway and sat down.As the minutes ticked by I straightened my hair and my clothes.Just then Kevin walked who smelled like he doused himself in cologne.
   I laughed then said,"Did you put on cologne?"
   "Yeah why wouldn't I?My best friend got out of the hospital so it's something special."He cheerfully said.
   I dryily added,"Yeah well it's not everyday where you have a friend who tries choking a teacher."
   "Very true anyways what did you need to tell me?"Kevin asked.
   I leaned in closely and said,"My mom died so I saw Abbey's mom feeling up the doctor when he told me."
   Kevin's eyes widened then said,"Sh** Avery where are you going to stay?"
   That's what I liked about Kevin.He wasn't the type to say oh I'm sorry he's more like hey are you okay? I'll give you some time but I still care for you.
   "I'm staying at Jenelle's house."I informed as he nodded.
   "And there's more I'm thinking?"Kevin said.
   I smiled since he knew me so well."Yeah there saying I might have a chemical imbalance."
   "What!"Kevin exclaimed then added,"Are you taking a test or something?"
   "Yeah."I said.Sometimes I felt like my strength was withering but Kevin always cheered me up.
   I hugged him goodbye and packed my stuff to go to Jenelle's house.As I arrived at her house her mom looked extremely worried so she motioned me to the side.When she hung up she turned towards me.
   "Jenelle's in the hospital."She said quietly.
   I gasped as she hurried out the door.I followed her and sat down in my car.Somehow Jenelle never got hurt but this was weird.She was super careful and nice to everyone most of the time.I didn't know what to do except the fact that Jenelle was hurt.
   The familar scene of the hospital zoomed by as I darted in her room.Her usual healthy flushed face was paler then the sheets as the heart monitor beeped in uneasy pace.Her eyelashes fluttered vividly as she was fighting something for her life.The same doctor came by and gave me a wary look.
   "She has been in a car accident and we are doing our best ma'am so can you please sit outside?"He said in a polite manner which I knew was fake.
   Knowing Jenelle's mom who always looked like she was going to a country club sat outside quietly.Elli was very quiet which made me wonder if she had slipped into coma or something.
   Couple of burly officers walked in flashing their belts and outfit as I kept my gaurd.They seemed like they were walking to me so I tried to keep my eyes cool as Elli looked panick stricken.
   "Are you Avery?"One of them asked.
   "Yes I am."I said trying to be polite.
   "We need to take you to the station for some questions."Another cop said that had a doughnut in his hand.
   I glanced at Elli and she nodded to me.
   Somehow these cops know something and I intend to find out.
   A/N:Hi guys I'm sorry I take so long but I just want the perfect chapter and I'm trying to see if I can make them longer.I'd love any feedback and thanks to my awesome readers for waiting so long and reading my stories even if they aren't at my best.=]
   
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6. iloveu4ever51
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   July 5, 2013 10:08pm UTC
   Hidden Chapter Six
   ♥ Alyssa ♥
   When dad had left the house I sat eating cookies with silence ringing around me.I nibbled on the cookies as I finished my homework.My frustration level grew as I couldn't get the stupid math problem.I was in Honors Alegbra 1 with Jenelle and sometimes I seriously wonder how I got in the class.I pushed the homework away and decided to go the Abbot Hill Mental Asylum since that's where my older sister worked.Mom usually made it like she was single even though she has two daughters.I don't think anyone knows of me having a sister but she was awesome.April was the perfect student and the perfect sister but sometimes I felt useless next to her.
   I got in my "car" and drove to the asylum.Everytime I did something dangerous I felt amazing.I use to have weight issues when I was younger but I realized I can replace my love of sweets with doing something dangerous.I arrived safely and checked in to see my sister.April was going to get married to her perfect boyfriend and I wondered if anyone even wanted to be friends with me.
   The cold air hit me as I took a deep breath in with the smell of medicine in the air.When I came here the first time I had started coughing but by now I'm use to it.Nurses looked up and smiled at me and the doctors seem to be at a meeting or something.I marched in to my sister's office and saw her staring at a patient's file.
   "What's up sis?"I asked.Normally I acted tough and casual around my sister hoping she didn't see my evny of her easy going life.She had practically lived with grandma in her whole teen years so mom never had hit her ever.I don't know why I couldn't but then again maybe it's just fate.
   "A lot by looking at this patient's file."She said as I ate a grape.The patient had brown hair with blue sparkling eyes that made me wonder how she got here.
   "How did she get here?"I asked.
   "No one knows honestly.From these files I heard she got in here when she was 18 and she has no family.One day she went in shock and a girl name Anna called the hospital when saw the door was open."My sister said.
   Something about the name Anna seemed familar I just couldn't put my finger on it.
   "What's the patient's name?"I asked again.
   "Julie.Julie McCall."My sister said grimly.
   I sat there for awhile and left not wanting to bother my sister when she was in deep concentration.As I walked out a shadow appeared and for a moment I held my breath.April's boyfriend appeared and who's name was Zachary but I called him Zach for short.
   "Hey Zach."I said casually.
   My sister was 19 so she was interning for medical researches but sometimes I didn't even get how she got time to date.Then again it's my sister who's model perfect and never loses her gaurd on anything.
   "What are you doing around here?"Zach asked in a brittish accent.
   "Just seeing my sister now if you excuse me I gotta run."I said quickly feeling a bit jittery.
   "Wait!"He called out.
   I turned around and stared at him."Let me drop you off."
   "But I-"I was cut off.
   "It's dark now we don't want someone kidnapping you don't we?"He said with a grin.
   "Yup."I said weakly as I sat down in his car.
   We talked casually for awhile until he had to go.I peered in his window to say thanks when he got out.His white shirt showed his muscles and the short he wore were showing off his glorious tan.I looked up in his face and into his black midnight eyes that had a mysterious edge.My heart beated faster until he leaned in and whispered.
   "Goodnight love."He said and walked off leaving me breathless.
   ***********************************************
   I was in a graveyard on a typical night.Something inside of me screamed out in fear but I tried calming down.A black fog stretched across the sky as I walked towards a place that had chanting.There stood Julie who had a black dress on as her eyes were full of tears.I couldn't walk any further as howling filled the night and it seemed like ghosts sprung up to dance.It was like a party in the graveyard but it was a party that I knew I wasn't invited to.
   Dark one in the night.
   Stand up and give me a fight.
   I'll give you what you want and sell
   But you have to tell
   A secret that was kept
   But now opened up and set
   Destiny shall reveal what I want the most
   Tell me the truth
   The truth of my past.
   Screams echoed as a girl with blue hair crackled.Another 10 year old was screaming out some lines.
   That you'll stick around
   Stay on my side of town
   Now I'm covered in blood and I'm feeding of your pretty little lies!
   I wondered if this was a dream or what but it seemed like the girls were fading as a dark being appeared.
   "Julie your past will be revealed only on a certain consquence."
   "What is it?"She said.
   "You must go in coma for the rest of your life."
   I watched as Julie walk and nod to their agreement as I screamed.
   Julie had a curse.A curse that I had to break.
   A/N:I can't believe it's already chapter six and readers out there I'm thinking of taking a break after I finish Hidden.I'd love any feedback and the second part of the lines are from the song called You're So Creepy by Ghost Town.I give thanks to my friend TheSkeleton584 for helping me thanks =]
   
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7. iloveu4ever51
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   Hidden Chapter Five
   Whisper by Evanescence
   ♥ Jenelle ♥
   Mom picked me up as I finished my homework in lightening speed.I was in all honors and so far was acing classes.Tennis practices were easy and fun and the I was the president of 5 clubs.You would think that stress of joining all of this would get to me but luckily I can teleport and have mind powers.When mom had left to work I jogged my way to gym feeling relaxed.Somehow jogs help me calm down after a stressful day.Dirt swirled in the distant as the sun dipped a little bit behind the ice covered mountains.I sighed until I tripped over something that was in my way.
   Somehow someone had moved a large boulder in the way which made me spiraling to the floor.I checked to see if I didn't break anything and fortunatly nothing was broke.Under the boulder two leather bound notebooks were kept as I thought of someone leaving burying their notebooks just so they can get out of math.I grabbed the notebooks and saw they were diaries.For some stupid reason I looked around then opened the blue covered diary which had some red dots sprinkled over it.
   April 15th
   I was shocked today to see he asked me to show him my arms.How did he know? How did he know I cut myself?Something inside of my cold dead heart had become alive when he talked to me.My mind says though no one can care for me ever.No one ever.My mother made sure of that and the only thing that keeps me alive is my music.Christine and Mira don't know anything about my pain and it should be left like that forever.
   Jenny
   I flipped the diary to the end to see the last diary entry.
   Oh I can't believe it! Hunter is taking me to the dance and I feel so alive.My heart feels like it's worth something and getting the band will help me find a way to give a ray of light to others.Mira helped me dress up and we laughed like the good times.This time there was no envy or sorrow like before.Hunter made me alive.
   I just know two things.
   I'm alive because of Hunter and I love him.
   My mouth had opened up as I read the entry.Even though it seems like Jenny had a happy ending something made me want to question it.She seemed like a suicidal person so did she ever stop?Is she alive and walking around?Could one of my friends be their kid or so?So many questions ran through my head and all attempts of going to the gym escaped.In a silent agreement I ran to the school library finding the yearbook that were dated all the way to 1956.Dam! That school was old.The librarian gave me an ugly glance then spoke up.
   "Excuse me miss library times are over."
   "Oh, I uh um am sorry."I said then quickly put the yearbooks away.
   It was dark out as crickets chirped and stars twinkled cheerfully.Slowly it was becoming cooler from the extremely hot day that had left everyone sweating.My hair was kept in a perfect pony tail as I started walking.It felt like hours but it was only couple of minutes when I arrived at the cafe.I walked in since the pile of homework I had would make me stay up a bit later then usual.I went inside and ordered my coffee to go as I watched people walk by.
   The waitress brought my coffee to me as I gave her a tip.
   "Wait by any chance do you know a girl name Jenny?"I asked knowing it would be stupid to ask.
   The waitress laughed,"Thousands of Jenny's might live here hon I just ask orders not names."
   She walked away giving me a strange look and I grabbed my coffee.As I walked out out of nowhere a car came straight for me and knocked me over.My ribs felt crushed as it hurt to breath.My body felt paralized and I knew I was slipping to the darkness.
   A lady dressed like a nurse came up and whispered close in my ear.
   "Watch out hon maybe your curiosity will kill you.One the case is over then it's over.Don't try digging up the past or your death is on the spin."
   A/N:Another chapter and another suspenseful ending.What's happening to these girls?Are they the victim or are they getting in between something darker then we all thought?
   
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8. iloveu4ever51
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   Hidden Chapter Four
   Out of Reach by Mattew Perryman Jones
   ♥ Jace ♥
   I drove up to Rosewood Middle School as thousands of memories flew in my mind.As usual the blistering heat burned practically anyone standing outside for long.The trees had grown up taller as I remembered that day when I saw Alli walking in the FBI meeting.Savannah had gotten so jealous when I was looking at her but to tell you the truth Savannah had nothing to be jealous of ever of Alli.After 14 years later my daughter Alyssa had blond hair and green eyes and somehow not looking like Savannah in any way.Alyssa sat down putting her backpack neatly and sighed.
   I spoke up,"Hey honey how did school go?"
   "Good I missed all of my friends but I'm soooo tired!"Alyssa exclaimed making me chuckle.I remembered I felt the same way eveytime I went to school on the first day of school.As I had seen her walk I knew guys glanced at her like she was a princess or something.
   We talked animately about school and my memories of it as she nodded along and sipped on water.The ride didn't take too long as we pulled in the house and Savannah stood there with a golden colored dress on.My mouth had dropped as Alyssa laughed at my reaction.
   "Hey honey cakes."I said and kissed her.
   "Jace! I'm busy right now and I thought Alyssa was staying over at a friends house."Savannah exclaimed.
   I stood back then said,"But she stays over a friends house every day.... I thought it would be nice to have a family together."
   "Family my @/s! I don't want her in my sight!"Savannah shrieked as Alyssa's eyes threatened to unleash a flood.
   "Mom did I make you mad somehow?I'm sorry mom."She whispered.
   Savannah grabbed Alyssa's arm then said,"I wish you were never born you filthy child!"Savannah screamed then threw her on the floor.Alyssa started crying as I hugged her.Lately Savannah and I had these fights and poor Alyssa got hurt.Savannah started taking drugs so I had to move to my other house with Alyssa since she could get hurt or worse.
   Alyssa sobbed then said,"Why daddy? Why does mom have to be so mean?"
   I didn't answer as I cleaned her wound and made her cookies so she can eat something while doing her homework.The quietness of the house echoed around as I felt like I needed to talk to someone.But who could I talk to? Who would understand me? I knew the answer before the questions but I was afraid to actually believe it.
   I told Alyssa that I would come back by 6 and she nodded as I got in my car.For a minute I didn't start it as I heard my heavy breathing in the awkward silence.In slow motion I gunned the engine and drove off to the hospital.As cars whizzed by so did my memories of 14 years ago.That night at the chruch ruined my sleep as I remembered her screams and my words that came back to haunt me.Did I really pick the right choice? Those thoughts beckoned in my mind then I shrugged it off.
   I got in the hospital and checked in to see her as I stepped in her room.Her face was beautiful as usual and her pink lips were closed as I knew her brown hair lavisly kept all these years.With baby steps I sat down next to her and grabbed her hand.
   "I'm sorry.......I'm sorry Alli."I said.
   I almost felt her thumb circling my hand but maybe it was just me wishing she would come back and take Savannah to jail.I don't know why but I kept on imagining Savannah would be more mature but she never did become mature.
   I spoke up again."Alli I don't know why I did it. I've become mature and living with Savannah is hard.I just want to say sorry Alli."
   Now I felt a little stupid as one tear landed on her hand.I looked up and felt my face that had tears.In a quick flash I wiped them away and walked out the room.
   Maybe one day Alli will wake up but I might never change.
   A/N:Hey guys so what do you think of Jace's point? Do you think he's faking it or is he serious? Any ideas on what you think will happen next? Do these chapters seem a little similar?Comment if you listened to the song and tell me if you think it fits Jace.As usual thanks for reading and have a great summer =]
   
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9. iloveu4ever51
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   Hidden Chapter Three
   ♥ Calista ♥
   I glanced at Avery who slept their peacefully as I groaned at the thought of going home.Piles of homework was on my desk and magazines were stacking up to the wall.The whole ride home was silent and I didn't question why my mom was dressed like this.Her phone buzzed as she glanced at it and giggled.I ignored it hoping that Avery was okay.She went physcho on the doctor and who knew how she would deal with her mom dying.I headed upstairs to my room as my mom headed towards her personal barn which meant I couldn't be there.Another door opened as I heard my mom shout that dad was here so I didn't need to worry or anything.
   For an hour or so I cleaned my room and tried doing my homework but my mind was too empty.I couldn't focus on anything so I decided to ask mom on what's for dinner.As I walked towards the barn I heard giggling and maons.For some reason I dared myself to open it as I saw someone else but not my dad.
   They were moaning and groaning with pleasure as my mom's clothes were on the floor.Next to her clothes were a doctor's clothes and the shocking truth came back to me.
   My mom screamed out,"Oh Mark! Harder-"
   I knocked on the door as my face turned to a dark red.The doctor glanced at me and froze.
   "Mom how could you?"I said with anger tinted in my voice.
   "Listen Calista I can explain please-"My mom said but was cut off.
   "Listen up young lady the birds and the bees creates new ba-"The doctor was cut off.
   "Shut up! Mom I can't believe you.I'm not living here anymore!"I screamed.
   My mom taunted back,"Where are you going to go then?"
   I screamed back,"Anywhere but here!"
   Angrily I stormed to my room and packed couple of bags up and grabbed food.In the back of the brown cabinet there were 2 million dollars as I grabbed them and left.My mom didn't deserve this money and my dad didn't deserve my mom either.Before I left I noticed mom didn't come after me as I heard them groaning and moaning again.She was screaming out Mark but not my name.As I walked away on a lonely path tears went down my face on the fact that my mom didn't love me.
   The rain started pouring in as I headed near the graveyard.As I entered in a spooky feeling crept over my heart as chills went down my spine.Howls threatened around me as light but fast footsteps headed towards me.Harsh guttaral sounds were made from something or someone as I inched back towards a gravestone.On it read Lauren Meer Jackson.
   I looked up and saw couple of wolves inching their way to me.I stood there quietly hoping they would run away but they didn't.One of the leader went up and howled in the sky.In the distant birds chirped and over by the houses everything looked peaceful except I bet it wasn't.
   In a flash the wolves jumped on me as I wondered what I would do.
   A/N:Hi guys I was so excited from the second chapter so I decided to make a third chapter.I'd love feedback or any ideas on what you will think will happen.Thanks for reading and have a great summer vacation.=]
   
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10. iloveu4ever51
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    Hidden Chapter Two
    ♥ Avery ♥
    Honestly I have no idea if I should say this or not.As we walked in the woods there was an eeire silence that suffocated all of us.Elli in her black hoodie looked blood thirsty and wanting to take revenge on someone.I glanced nervously at Kevin then hoped that she didn't take her anger on us.Something made me wonder on why Elli had done that and does she do to it everyone?Kevin's nervous glance made me hope that us ditching was not noticed.
    Elli coughed then said in the silence,"What class do you have right now?"
    I spoke up."Defense with Dark Magic."
    "Well your salsa was a very good way of defending of yourself."Elli said as Kevin beamed.
    "It was my idea Elli and thanks."Kevin said as I stared at him then stopped.
    Elli added in,"I'll give you a late pass and don't try ditching again?"
    "We won't"I assured her as Kevin and I walked to our class.I turned around to look at Elli to see her staring at her phone with wide eyes and hurriedly walking away like there was a fire or something.I shrugged it off but something made me want to grab her phone and check to see what someone sent her.
    *************************************************************
    The school bell rang as I ran out the doors to see another car in the place where my mom usually waited for me.The tinted windows rolled down as fashionablly Abbey glanced at me with her big Gucci sunglasses on.Her red lipstick was delicately put on as her cheeks looked naturally red.
    "Get in the car Avery."Abbey said looking very bored and not wanting to be here.
    "Why is my mom okay?"I asked.
    Abbey made a sharp remark,"Get in the car!"
    I scrambled in to sit next to Calista who looked casual like her mom wore sultry colthing everyday.When I sat down I felt the leather seats and the cold air conditioning.One glance at Abbey's clothes made me reeling in sheer wonder.She had a skin tight dress that barely covered her @ss and her bo/bs were practically bursting out to pop.Calista tapped at her phone furiously then put it away.
    "Hey Calista was that your boyfriend Jake?"I asked.
    "Oh yes I'm sleeping over at his house."Abbey replied.
    Abbey tersely added,"Don't be monkeying around Calista."
    "MOM!"Calista said her face turning bright red.
    Instead of driving to Calista's house Abbey took me to the hospital and said to no question anything.Everything was so secretive and quiet as I wondered if anyone gave birth or died.I hoped the mean witch lady who tries selling candy to the kids dies because she was a pain in the @/s.
    We headed towards a room that was completely white as I took a deep breath smelling the antispetic.The clock ticked and it seemed like Abbey was walking slowly.The doctor gave her a flirty smile as she waved at him.Nurse glanced at us a little scared but ready to take on any new patient in a flash.
    Abbey took the covers off to reveal someone dead.
    It was my mother.
    Something inside of me crumpled up as I looked at her forlornly.Calista grabbed my arm to keep me standing up as Abbey's face became strained.Tears threatened to drop any minute as the doctor started rubbing her back.As I glanced at him I noticed his hand dropping to her hips.Anger boiled inside of me and I couldn't control it.How dare he! How could he flirt with Abbey in front of my mother!
    In a minute I jumped on the doctor as I punched the living lights out of him.His breath became whizzy as I squeezed his throat.Nurse tried prying me off until a burly looking police walked in and grabbed me.The nurses wheeled me to another room as they gave me a shot.
    One of the nurses went up to me and said,"Sleep tight because when you wake up your world won't be controlled by you but by me."
    Dots danced in front of me as a gray fog slipped in.Someone laughed in the distance as another voice low and throaty spoke up.
    "Beware Avery because you might have the same fate as your mother."
    A/N:Sorry it took a long time but here it is and hope you like it.
    
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11. iloveu4ever51
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    Hidden Chapter One
    ♥ Avery ♥
    I walked in school with my friends Calista,Jenelle, and Alyssa looking casual walking to our other friend,April as everyone stared at us.Guys drooled and girls became green with jealous as I walked to my friend Kevin.
    "Sup b****"Kevin said which was our way to talk to each other.
    "Not much wh*re."I said as we started walking to our first class.I went to school at Rosewood Middle school but everyone calls it RMS.The catch is that I'm a FBI agent trained by the best FBI agent ever! Her name is Elli and Jenelle's her duaghter.
    Period 1 Defense with Dark Magic Mrs.Lynn
    Period 2 Combating with Tools Mr.Frilenn
    Period 3 Suriving the Wilderness Mrs.Melindstone
    Period 4 Math Miss Gomez
    Period 5 Chemistry Mr.Brewer
    Period 6 Manipulating Orgins and More Mrs.Alezandria
    I sighed again as Kevin noticed.
    Kevin asked,"So you wanna ditch?"
    "Want to? I've been thinking about that the day I was born."I added jokingly.
    "Kay let's hang out and when the bell rings head towards the bathrooms."Kevin replied.
    ********************************************
    We stepped outside and decided to go to our secret hideout which included skateboard ramps and exclusive unlimited amount of money.For awhile the scenery was pleasent until we heard a gunshot in the air.
    Kevin whispered to me,"Is it me or does the gunshot seem near us?"
    "Near us? Dude f*****ing run it was right next to us almost."I said as we ran not knowing where the gunshots were coming from.Group of people came in shooting at us we managed to dodge them.
    Kevin shouted,"Hey remember we have salsa at our hideout?"
    I screamed back,"How's that suppose to help us!?"
    "We can blind them."Kevin added a grin.
    "Oh can I also get the water guns you stored?"I said.
    "Only if you promise to get some nachos since these people are ready to be nachomen."Kevin joked as another bullet whizzed over our heads.Relaxing over summer had got a toll on me when I started panting.Sweat dripped off my face as my muscles protested from running but I had too.
    Out of nowhere trees swayed and their branches tried grabbing us.A river was next to us and in slow motion it knocked us over.We spluttered and coughed up the water trying to get to the hideout.Why did we have to ditch today?Why did school even exist?Usually Kevin and I ditched every other day without anyone noticing me since we faked our excuse slips and hung out at our hideout.Kevin and I met in kindergarten when I tried ripping his hair since he wouldn't give me the crayons.
    "You still owe me crayons buddy."I said to Kevin.
    "That was not my fault! You loved me so much that you had to grab my hair."Kevin replied.
    "Yeah yeah Mr.Prince here wants his own royal horse and a castle."I joked.
    Kevin bursted out laughing as the hideout became more noticeable."Avery we're crazy aren't we?"
    "Yup our lives are at stake but we're joking around about Kindergarten."I added.
    We entered the hideout and started throwing salsa at the people who blinked then faded.One by one they disappeared but the gunshots rang out loud and clear.Another person stepped out the shadows and took their glasses off.They took their black hoodie off and I saw Elli.
    "Omg Elli there was this gunshot and-"I was cut off.
    She smiled then said,"Yup that was me."
    "Whoa back up that was you? Dam now you owe me 10 gallons of salsa"Kevin threw rock hitting a tree as it bounced back.
    "That was your test."Elli said.
    "Yeah getting killed was so on my to-do-list."I snarkily said.
    Elli just smiled then said,"Common we need to teach you other stuff."
    Kevin added in,"Can I get a laser that squirts salsa?"
    Elli's face turned ugly as a dark menacing shdow stood behind her."Kevin for f***sake can't you shut the f**** up about salsa?"
    Kevin's eyes widened as I glanced at him.Elli angrily walked away as a dark creepy feeling clutched my heart.Lately Elli acted weird as in doing weird stuff in her room and not talking to someone.Jenelle once told me that Elli had pushed her into a knife almost but she ran into the metal poles.The whole way back to school was silent.
    A/N:Hey guys here is the first chapter of Hidden hopefully you like it.Thanks for reading and thanks to my awesome readers who patiently wait for me to make the next chapter.
    
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12. iloveu4ever51
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    Hidden Prologue
    ♥ Alli ♥
    I was in a graveyard.The air was damp as fog swirled around me.Somehow I knew it was 1 in the morning and that something was after me.In the sky a crescent of the silvery moon hung in the air as the darkness felt suffocating.It seemed like gravestones limped eerily as I swear I heard screams in the distance.My hair was matted to my forehead that was also covered with sweat.Dirt stains were on my clothes and I knew my time was running out.My boots were caked in mud and snow since it had snowed couple days ago.I don't know how I knew that but I did.A tiger roared as chills went across my back.Goosebumps were all over my arm from fear.Something or someone was here.
    It knew I was here.
    I paused at a grave and read what it said.
    Here lies Lauren Meer Jackson.
    We will meet again.
    The name rang a bell but I couldn't remember where I heard it from.Then again I didn't remember much from my past.Almost like I was dead or a ghost.I looked at my body which seemed pretty solid to me.A blue light appeared as I stumbled a couple inches.A girl formed with brown hair and brown eyes that gazed at me woefully.She wore a dark blue dress that went to her feet and gracefully accentuated her waistline.
    "Who-...who are you?"I asked in the silence that filled around us.
    "I'm your friend Lauren."She said innocently.I blinked and thought if she was my friend then what kind of person was I? Did I go to parties and get drunk or something?Was I on a cheerleading team ?Did I have a boyfriend or something?
    "But I don't have a friend name Lauren ..."I trailed off thinking this girl might have escaped from a mental asylum or something.
    Lauren smiled almost like she knew a secret that I didn't know about myself.She replied,"You'll know in time but Alli I'm not entirely dead."
    "What do you mean?"I asked stupidly.
    "Something darker has become alive.Darker and full of evil then the S team can ever be."Lauren exclaimed.
    "But-"I was cut off.
    "No time know run Alli."Lauren said.
    "No not until you tell me what this dark evil thing is."I stubbornly replied.
    "Run!" She screamed.
    A hissing sound filled the air as Lauren's glow vanished.Dark clouds formed as lightening crackled in front of me.Without a thought I ran farther from the grave.Shadows were forming in front of my eyes as I heard a low dark menacing laughter that chilled me to the bones.Fear iced my bones and my mind to run.In a flash someone or something knocked me out as I heard one last thing before I gave in to the dark mercilessly.
    "Time's up Alli!"
    A/N:Hi guys this is the prologue of Hidden and I hopped you liked it.I know it's short but I have reasons why it's short.I'd love any feedback and thanks for reading this.
    
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    Dangerous Character Theme Songs
    Elli's song: The Devil Within by Digital Daggers
    Aden's song: Dreamer by Ghost Town
    Lauren's song: The Truth Beneath the Rose by Within Temptation
    Savannah's song: Kill Of The Night by Gin Wigmore
    Abbey's song:Last Friday Night by Katy Perry
    Alli's grandma's song: Lost In Paradise by Evanescence
    Honey's song: Hands of Time by Rachel Diggs
    Iesha's song:Memories by Within Temptation
    Jessamine's song: Somewhere by Within Temptation
    Jace's song: Out of Reach by Mattew Perryman Jones
    Alli's song: Bring Me to Life by Evanescence
    A/N:Okay guys I wanted to do this so you can get a clearer image on each of these characters personality and I know I said I would write Mysterious Town but I've decided to write the sequel of Dangerous.You will find out later why these songs fit the character but thanks for reading and if you have any questions then leave a comment I'll answer your questions.
    
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    Dangerous Epilogue
    ♦ Elli's P.O.V ♦
    10 years later
    I sat at the end of the grave in my black hoodie and huge sunglasses that practically covered my face.It was pretty muddy after the huge rain that had hit Rosewood.I smiled to myself as footsteps came around.Two people in a black hoodie arrived as everything of my plan came along.
    "I'm here Elli."Jessamine said.
    "Excellent and this is Avery I assume?"I asked politely.
    "Yes she is and you will protect us?"Jessamine said.
    "Of course I'm not the head FBI agent for no reason right?"I added a smirk.
    Jessamine nodded as Avery walked up to me,"Hello Elli."
    "Hi Avery would you like to be the best FBI agent ever?"I asked.
    The little girl bobbled her head up and down as her blonde hair swished,"Yes Elli I'd love it!"
    I smiled to myself and replied,"Do you swear to be by the S team at all costs?"
    "Yes Elli we do but you have to protect and train us."Jessamine said in a hard steel like voice.
    "No worries."I said and drove as they faded in the distant.A gray fog swirled in as I stepped inside of my house where Savannah's kid and Abbey's kid stood there with my kid.
    "YAY Aunt Elli is back!"They all chorused.
    In these 10 years Savannah and Jace married and had a girl named Alyssa and Abbey had a kid with a foreign person and her daughter was named Calista.Abbey had told me the truth that she had slept with couple of people so her daughter was from her recent husband but that didn't stop her to cheat on him.Surprisingly she hasn't got caught yet but I smiled.My husband was also on the S team and we had spread all over the world now.His name was James and right now he was out the house for business.I had named my child Jenelle.
    Alyssa came up to me and said,"Auntie can you tell us a story?"
    All of them cuddled up to me as I spoke up,"Once upon a time there was this mice called-"
    Calista and Jenelle interrupted me,"But we already heard this story !"
    Everyone started becoming antsy as I smiled to myself again.
    "Okay calm down little angels and I'll tell you a story no one ever speaks of."I said
    "Yay mommy!"Jenelle said then quieted down.
    "Once upon a time in the town called Rosewood they're were four naughty girls who had dirty secrets and one person threatened to tell everyone...."
    THE END.
    A/N:Hi guys first of all thanks for reading this story and I left you guys on a couple of cliffhangers.Did Alli die or is she still in coma?Did anyone find out of the S team and are they being threatened right now...?And another millionare question is that who is threatening Jessamine and Avery so they are forced to be joined on the S team?We may never know.
    I win as usual.Maybe the S team will come back but right now we're on break.All of the questions swirling around your head may be answered or not?Ha!History repeats itself so maybe just maybe you should lock your doors and close your windows since I'm still watching and I know everything.Sleep good tonight since it might be the only one you're getting b****es.-S
    
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    Dangerous Chapter Forty Two
    ♦ Elli's P.O.V ♦
    We had escaped as soon as the cops had entered.I grabbed my wig and ran to the hospital faking to be a nurse.Sirens rang as a doctor rushed in with a patient.In the distant cops spoke in low voices as old people stared at them with one crooked eye.The smell of the antispetics hit my nose strongly as one of the doctors called me over.
    "Nurse Julie get the shot prepared !"Dr.Deloaski commanded.
    "Yes doctor."I timidly walked away to gather the medicine.
    As I walked in the hospital lab I told one of the chemists to prepare the shot.In a second he handed me the shot as I calmly and quietly walked back to the patient.People were shocked as in the distant a baby cried.Another person's shadow stood against the hospital wall as a dirty faced Jessamine walked in with a child carried in her arms who was sleeping.
    "Where is she?"She practically shouted at the doctor.
    "She's in room 209."The doctor said patiently as he rushed to the patient.All of the nurses buzzed around each patient as I served lunch to 5 patients then walked towards Dr.Deloaski.
    I said in a quiet voice,"Sir do you need help?"
    "Yes can you get Allison McCall's medical information and family to call on?"He asked.
    "Yes sir."I said trying to hide the shock in my face.Quickly I walked to the metal cabinet which kept patient records.I saw Alli's grandma's phone number and dialed it.
    After a minute a voicemail spoke up."Hey whoever this is leave a message and don't disturb my phone with 24 f***ing messages.Thanks!"
    I hung up but a minute later she called back,"Hello who is this?"
    "Hi Ms.McCall but this is a call from Rosewood Hospital to inform that your grandaughter Allison McCall is in surgery so would you please come in and fill in some papers?"I calmly said.
    Alli's dumb grandma replied,"I... I'll be there in five minutes."She hung up as I worried.
    What would happen if Allison survived?She could tell the cops everything?To get some backup I called Savannah.
    Unfortunaly her voicemail spoke up,"Hey b*****es this is Savannah and leave me a f****ing message.Uh bye."
    I hung up trying to call everyone but gave up.Briskly I walked back to the doctor with the file and informed him that her grandma was coming.
    "Where is my granddaughter Allison?I f***** demand to know where she is."An old grandma spoke up.The hospital went quiet and suddenly the lights became too bright.
    I went outside and grabbed the angry grandma away.She was tensed up as the doctor walked up to her.
    His face was grim and full of tension as he spoke up,"I'm sorry Ms.McCall but Allison is in coma."
    A/N:Hey guys this is another short,short chapter because well this is it.I'm going to have an epilouge and that's it.Tell me what you think and thanks for reading.
    My game,my rules.I'm everywhere and nowhere.Get it now b****?-S
    
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16. iloveu4ever51
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    June 18, 2013 10:32pm UTC
    Dangerous Chapter Forty One
    ♦ Allison's P.O.V ♦
    I stood there very quietly as I heard Elli say that.
    "Give up Alli.I know your secrets and should I tell them?"Elli said with a taunting edge making me go crazy.
    "Don't you dare Elli."I stood up and looked her in the eye.
    "Oh yeah what are you going to do?"Elli replied back.
    In a split second I jumped on her and screamed."DIEEEEEEEEEE!"
    She looked surprise then threw a punch in my stomach.I doubled over and kicked her near the jaws.In a respone she gave a kick to my ribs and I felt something crack.Yet I still stood up and tried punching her in the eye.She did a backflip trying to kick me but landed flat on her face.Iesha and Honey ran in screaming at me as Elli shot them down in one blow.I gasped since I knew they were both on S's team.
    "They were weak foolish people."She said as I froze.Elli walked over to Iesha and Honey and put them next to Lauren and Aden."Goodnight rest in he// b****"
    "How could you?"I blurted out.
    "How could I what?"Elli said in an angry voice.
    Savannah spoke up in the silence,"Elli we need to go before the cops find out."
    Abbey added,"But should we sing one more song?"
    Jace gave a crooked smile then said,"A special one for Alli of course."
    I wanted to run so badly but they circled me around.
    On chorus they sang,"Oh Alli lay down and rest for the lord shall find.A soul here and there what can you say?"
    Abbey added,"You're going to die Alli why not stop?"
    "We're going to kill you why bother?"Elli taunted smirkingly.
    They chanted on and on as my head wanted to burst.I could feel my power dwindling as they ran around me.Slowly I crumpled to my knees as Elli kicked me in the jaws and everyone started joining in.I stood up for the last time and tried beating Elli.A gun was kept near by as I reached for it.Jace noticed where I was looking and then grabbed the gun.
    He leaned to me and said,"You'd be a fine girlfriend but my heart is by my team."For a final effort I tried punching him in the stomach but failed.
    My vision started clouding as they all cheered and laughed.Clouds swirled and a gentle voice whispered in my ear."Have fun."
    A/N:Hey Guys I think this is the last chapter but I'm not sure.Thank you for everyone reading this story even though it's probably not my best.
    Ha! Today was the best day ever.I finally and I mean finally got my revenge.After 3 years I finished Alli.No more taunts and my team will become stronger.This b**** isn't going down so easily so run out of this town now if your scared because I'm not hiding.-S
    
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17. iloveu4ever51
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    June 18, 2013 12:15am UTC
    Dangerous
    ♦ Elli's P.O.V ♦
    Finally! I get my turn to tell you my story.Well my mom was actually r@ped so I'm not lying or anything but the millionare questione everyone wants to know is that why did I create the S team?
    Well for that you have to realize these girls all had secrets and if they wouldn't tell then I would.I hated Alli ever since I was 9 and when I learned my sister Savannah and my half sister Abbey went to the same school as Alli and her other friends I realized it was the perfect moment.I know,I know you wonder why Abbey got on the S team and blah blah blah.Well she joined me since she hated the group too.Alli and the others were never Abbey's real friends.Krista and Savannah were.You'd be surprise how easily they got along.It was perfect for me and Jace decided to join me for well because he thought his FBI team would be in the lead.
    Yup everyone has dreams and I used Jace's dreams to get what I want.What I wanted ever since I was 9 was revenge.You can think I'm crazy but these girls deserved it.I still remember Alli making fun of me as a kid for being nerdy and ugly looking.Now look at me?I was a beautiful,smart and cunning girl that any guy would fall for.All those years of misery inside and all that pain builded up in my brain.Finally I had created the S team which stood for We Know Your Secrets.
    That's what Alli did and what Lauren did was unmentionable I guess.She was the honest good girl who always prayed to God but what she did at age 6 was kill her uncle.She was innocently playing until she saw her uncle walk in.What she didn't know was that there was a gun laying by and when she accidently clicked it.....Well it hit the uncle and he died.How do I know this?Well when I was younger everyone told their secrets so they can talk to someone but I knew they really just used me.
    I carried a diary and wrote everyone's secret.I knew Iesha's secret when my mom had met her dad and realized Iesha's mom had gotten r@ped.I just happen to be there at the same time....Anyways Honey's secret well happened a long time ago when she was 15.It was 3 years ago and I was 13 so I freaked out a little.Honey use to be my tutor so I always headed over to her house at 5.Well one day I walked in her room to see her naked with a guy.He was literally paused midway when I walked in and dropped my book.They were covered in sweat and I could hear Honey moan.Slowly I backed away until he left and she sat next to me fully clothed.
    "Please don't tell anyone!"She begged.
    "I won't tell anyone but tell me the full story."I said.
    She nodded then said,"I paid him to make love to me....Because... I wanted to feel loved.I feel like no one cares about me anymore since I'm loser Honey.That what everyone knows me about and it's just hard."She looked like she was going to cry.
    I gently asked her,"Did you use protection and how many times have you done this?"
    "I used protection and I've done this 5 times...It just feels so good...."She said and started crying.
    I hugged her and told her to not do that anymore.My 13 year mind didn't recognize the potential in her secret but at age 16 I did now.They were 18 and now it was differnt.I knew all of their secrets.
    My mind felt better killing Lauren and Aden since well they hurted me.All of them all the time.I could still hear their twisted remarks and their cruel voices speaking out against me.The pain grew until I made the team.With each person I knew I was stronger then Allison.To be honest I didn't want to kill Lauren but she got in the way.All those times I....Tears were threatening to break but I stood up.My FBI power was to manipulate things to my well.I could change gravity so I could float or change the path of water to somewhere else.It was a beautiful thing to learn about my power and feel special.
    What do you think?The plan was going great so far my sister Savannah wanted control of the S team but I said no.Abbey was easy to use and forever will be.Sometimes secrets build walls between people.And sometimes some certain people keep quiet but still know the darkness in your heart.
    Yup I'm a b*** but a proud one to know.Lucky for me Alli and the others went to the same school Savannah did.I don't know if I like Savannh but she was my sister after all so yeah.All that time I was ignored but...
    Now it was time! All this time the plan worked and not once did anyone of them betrayed me.Poor Alli as she stood alone.6 people against 1 person.Alli was so not winning.I don't care if she dies or not.I just want my revenge.
    After Honey and Iesha proclaimed that they were with me I spoke up.
    "Give up Alli.I know your secrets should I tell them...."
    A/N:Hey guys I know this is short but Elli really was only cunning when she formed the S team but I'd love any feedback.Soon my next story will start and then we'll see how everything unfolds.
    Yes! I was the mastermind of all them.Nothing else to say except that I run this town b****es.Back off!-S
    
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18. iloveu4ever51
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    June 15, 2013 11:03pm UTC
    Dangerous
    ♦ Honey's P.O.V ♦
    *flashback*
    After the doll warning from S my mind couldn't drift off to sleep.I mean who could when your friends barn was broken into and there was a creepy note left?Yeah I sure am going to get a lot of sleep thanks S.Anyways after those cryptic warnings I plopped down to eat our later dinner.Wherever S was they weren't going to take my food away.Sometimes I wished Alli was a tad bit smarter and somehow now we are getting these texts.I know it was weird to sneak into the morgue and gather the files of the dead man.To be honest wasn't it a little weird that a man was connected to S?I mean come on how bad could S be?
    I'm a cheerleader and normally people treat me like an idiotic person who has no brains but excuse me for being a b**** to you.I don't think I have a tragic story except the fact that I use to cut a long time ago.Even during our cheer practices I always felt second best even next to my friends.In the back of mind it always seemed like everyone was like Alli this and Alli that.I know you would think being a cheerleader would make you popular but reality check nope.Lauren was gone and now S was being all bad.
    People think I'm those girly girls but when I was younger I took karate class since I wanted to be ready if someone tried hurting me.It helped later on when I found out I was a FBI agent.I mean don't you ever think that they just use you?Those fat old ladies claim to be an important agent but always just sit at the chair and then cry if one of the younger agents die.I always thought they were dramatic but this time if an old lady was testing us by being S then I'm seriously going on a karate world war 3.
    My phone buzzed in the quiet room as I checked the screen.One new annoying @ss text message from S.
    Well look here.Tough Honey to the rescue.If you truly care for your friends then I advise you to join the S team so you can protect them or else.....-S
    S was right.I mean haven't you heard of the saying keep your friends close but your enemies closer?Now was my chance to kill S.My mom and my dad were rich FBI agents going all around the world fighting evil but sometimes I wished well they were home.My eyes were full of tears but I shook my head.No more bringing up the past.The only reason I became a cheerleader was to become likeable by guys so I can feel loved but never did.I would sleep with any of them just to feel loved but I was still alone.Obviously none of my friends knew about this but somehow S did.Whoever S was they seriously need to go to a mental asylum because who runs around stalking 5 innocent girls?Yeah I don't know anyone either besides S.My hands trembled as I replyed a text.
    I'm ready to join the S team.
    A minute later S replied.
    Excellent now bring me Alli's phone and remember I'll be watching you.I'm outside the barn.Have fun.....-S
    I nodded to myself and started sneaking up to Alli.Her phone was next to her so thankfully I didn't have to do too much.Quietly I tip toed to the phone until Alli spoke up.
    "No grandma I did no see your wacking stick anywhere.Didn't you hit the mail man since he insulted your karate certifictate or something?"Alli said outloud and I realized she was sleeping.
    Thanking God that Alli was a heavy sleeper I grabbed her phone and jumped out the window.With swift footing I landed on the fresh soil as rain poured on to me.I could hear someone's footsteps as I got closer to a hideout near Alli's barn.Using my cat eye vision I scanned the area to see if any threats were near by but luckily it was empty except for something.Yup let's admit the pretty cheerleader has ugly secrets.Then again everyone has a secret life but only one person knows.And it's S.
    A black hoodie person popped out of nowhere as I backed away slightly.On their hoodie a S was enblazed upon like a shining beacon in the cold dark night.S lifted her hoodie away and I saw it was Elli.
    "Wow big shocker.I always knew you were a smart one."I said which was true.Now you must be surprised how I know Elli but I did.I use to tutor her when I use to be called loser Honey.She use to be my favorite one to tutor since she always always asked smart questions.It was years ago since I've last seen her and now here she was standing.
    "I know Honey big shocker isn't it? I love this game of hide and seek but now you know who I am.Did you get her phone?"Elli asked.
    "Yeah."I tossed the phone to her as she did something to it in the dark and I added,"How did you get to know our secrets?"
    "I have my ways Honey."She smiled mysteriously and I laughed.
    *******************************************
    Now I was here in the mental asylum acting insane.Yup me acting insane was weird for a cheerleader.It was fun if you ask me since everyone got quiet around me.I had control finally ever since I started acting crazy.When I had pretended to sneak out it was funny as he//.Who wouldn't love acting this out?Elli and I had gotten closer and now the finally part of the plan was coming true.When I arrived at the chruch I loved torturing Alli.She was practically hugging me when she said she believed Abbey was on the S team.I know it seems like we don't get along but who cares?
    Savannah,Jace,Abbey and S walked in.Their hoodies were all the same and to see the look on Alli's face was priceless.Killing the snake was the part of the plan and very easy to do.Alli probably is going to regret being an innocent goody goody.
    When S said her lines I smiled.
    I stood up and put on the hoodie I had gotten on that dark cold night.
    "Alli,I'm on the S team."
    A/N:Well what do you guys think?Do you think Honey is falling in a trap?Send me your feedback
    Yup even Honey got on my team.Who said you needed powers to become superman?If you have me then you can control the world but sadly... I run this team b*****.Hope you like to fight since you're going to be doing a lot of that very very soon.-S
    
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19. iloveu4ever51
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    June 13, 2013 12:57am UTC
    Dangerous
    ♦ Iesha's P.O.V ♦
    *flashback*
    Yeah as everyone knew I was the shy quiet girl but that was going to change.I was tired of being considered the weak link of the group since my mom died of r@pe.What people don't understand is that I'm not going to like you if you put me below then you are.Sometimes life is a like medication and you just have to swallow it and deal with it even if it tastes horrible.Recently getting the S notes made me miserable and Alex trying to feel me was scary.Did my mom feel this too?I sat at my bed looking dejectedly wondering if I was going to die too.
    My phone buzzed as I sighed.Will this b**** ever stop?
    Tired of me already?If you're so tired then maybe you might want to join me.Meet me outside at 2 in the morning tell no one or else...-S
    I gasped and my mind started thinking.If I was on the S team then maybe I could just join so the pain would be over.I'm tired of everything.TIRED! Do you know how frustrating it is to not go kill myself?No I don't think you do since I hide it behind a fake smile.Sometimes people think they know you but they don't.No one will ever know you the most not even you.We're puzzling and our complications never end.My mind was already set on seeing S.Time to turn the tables on S.
    ************************************************
    I arrived outside as the cold wind blew everywhere.A owl looked around in the night as I heard cats meowing.The crescent moon hung beautifully in the sky as stars gently twinkled.A lantern was lit outside but no one was out here besides me.A shadow came by and a black hoodie person walked up to me.The person lifted their hoodie to reveal their face.
    Elli was S.
    "Why Elli?"I managed to say.
    "Because I was like you too Iesha.I sympathize you out all of the others.Because my mom was r@ped too."Elli said gently.
    "But... your mom is alive...."I whispered.
    "She is barely but for her I live.I wanted to make you live and not die.I know both of our moms would know that.Please Iesha join me so we could help others."Elli said with wide open eyes.My tears fell as we hugged.She was also crying and I knew that we had to help each other out.
    "Elli,I want to make sure my friends will be protected."I said through tears.
    Elli's voice had gone much harder."I don't know Iesha but I will try."
    I know you may be thinking that I'm betraying my friends but I'm not really.I swear my friends would understand right?They knew I had self esteem problems right?Oh who am I kidding! None of them know I cut my myself every once in awhile and throw myself up sometimes.Of course everyone notices Alli and Alli this.Never me! Why? I tried my best to hide it from them since I feel like they would leave me.My mom had died when I was 4 and ever since then I haven't really cried.I could still see that video sent to me at age 10 of that women getting r@ped.Someone had sent it to me as a joke and I wanted to cry but instead I took a scissor and cut myself.At that time it hurted but after awhile it felt soo good.I could still hear that women screaming and the guy thrusting and....NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    "Elli I'm ready to join the S team.I don't care about them.I don't anymore.I hate them."I said in short fragrements loving the taste of freedom.I'm sorry but I'm not apologizing.
    Elli smiled evilly and then said,"Excellent now the first thing is stay here until...."She whispered the plan as I nodded.
    "These b**** are finally getting what they deserve."I cunningly smiled and said.
    ********************************************
    It was that important night and Alex was touching me.I knew it was fake but Elli was watching so I had to act it good.Somewhere in the back of mind it felt wrong but then again I always hid behind the back of my mind.Not now and never again.After all those scenes I had arrived at the party thankfully Lauren didn't see me.I had gotten a text from S on the next plan and smiled to myself.Everything was falling in peices.At that moment I knew I was winning thanks to S.Earlier I felt alone and felt like someone was missing and there was someone.It was my happiness.I was dead inside and nothing changed.My pain had hardened me and Elli had made me cry for the first time in a long time.Elli understood me.Not like anyone else bothered to try.
    After accidently being trapped with the dumb b**** Alli I knew she was going to die.Along the way we had gotten trapped and tied up.As everyone had popped up I knew it was my time.
    I didn't regret my decision.
    "Alli,I'm on the S team."I had said putting on my black hoodie that had S on it.
    A/N:Hi guys this is a flashback on each persons reasons on why they are on the S team.Don't worry after every two flashbacks I'll make a chapter of the story.Tell me what you think because I would love the feedback.Thanks for reading.
    I got Iesha on my team now.What are you going to do now Alli?Sometimes the game can be out of control but maybe the only thing that can start it is a little match.Iesha was the little match and her past helped me bring her on the S team.We know all and we see all.Take a chill pill because we're winning.-S
    
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20. iloveu4ever51
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    June 11, 2013 11:39pm UTC
    Dangerous Chapter Forty
    ♦ Allison's P.O.V ♦
    When I saw S's face I was shocked.I couldn't believe it was Elli this whole time.Out of all people she was the one to be S.But why?My mind was numbed as I felt like giving up.
    Honey whispered in the silence,"Why you Elli?"
    "Wanna know why?"Elli said.
    Aden screamed,"Die b****"With a flick of Elli's hand Aden was dead.Nothing left of him and I knew my eyes were wide open.
    "Now as I was saying,I did this because I was always being rejected.Like I never was good enough for you! Remember Alli when a nerdy looking girl asked you over to her house but you said no?"Elli glared at me.
    My memory rushed back to that day then back to now."You were that nerdy girl."I said realizing that the past could hurt you badly sometimes.
    "Yeah but you didn't think twice how I felt.I use to ask you every day but you said no.People like you need to be put in their place."Elli spat on the floor.
    "I don't understand though.We were all there and how did you know our secrets?"Iesha asked outloud.
    "Easy.I went to each of your houses and looked everywhere.I also had my spies to spy on you 24/7"Elli replied casually.
    "How could you?"I asked through tears.Jace,Savannah and Abbey were all smirking.
    "How couldn't I? I kept my eyes on you guys and then after that you created trouble for yourself.Maybe Alli if you were a bit nicer this wouldn't be happening."Elli said snarkily.
    "You killed people.You almost put me in jail and you hurted Iesha."I voiced out all of our anger.
    "I just killed them Alli.But you guys had killed my heart."Elli said with coldness in her voice as more of my tears fell.
    The chruch bell rung twice indicating it was 2 in the morning.Suddenly the air became colder as I realized it was my fault.No one would have died if only I had accepted her offer.
    "Honey remember the mental asylum you were in?"Elli turned to Honey.
    "Why are you asking b*****? Maybe you should go to the mental asylum."Honey growled.
    "Easy there girl don't go beast on me.But you always loved games so I decided why not make a maze game of the mental asylum.Plus my family owns the mental asylum."Elli laughed.
    "Of course they would.Your whole family is crazy."Iesha said under her breath.
    Elli spun around and crazily said,"What did you say?"She had her gun pointed towards her.
    "Take us to your lair."I said then added,"Your new lair."
    Elli glanced at me,"Oh well you figured that out.I'm sorry Alli but this game is ending forever."
    "Really?All I'm saying is that you can't do anything without us fighting back."I said defiantly.
    "Tsk,tsk.Guess what?"Elli replied.
    "What?"I asked annoyed.
    "You're all alone."Elli said then added,"Look at your friends.Are they really your friends or..."
    I caught on what she was saying then glanced at them,"Noooo.....it's can't be."
    Honey and Iesha put on their black hoodies on that had S in front of them.Both of them together in unison said,"Alli we're on the S team."
    A/N:Leaving you on a cliffhanger.Hope you guys like it and I'd love love feedback
    Yup I'm S.Did you think I couldn't get more people on my side?Well think again.I am the brains and forever will be.Enjoy the peace you have b**** because it isn't lasting long.Hate me or love me you know I'm winning.-S
    
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