love is sweeter the second time around
Aaliyah's P.O.V
Chapter #1
"How could this happen to me? How could he be so selfish and inconsiderate?!"
" It's so hot outside!" I said the my friend Alisha as she made the smart
comment back "well, it is the middle of June"
I just smirked at her and we kept walking. We were on our way to go meet some friends then
go to a party. But, before i get into to much detail let me properly introduce
myslef. My names Aaliyah, I'm currently seventeen years old and i attend
Redwood high school. But, why am I talking about school? It's the middle of summer!
My boy friends name is Jareck, which is who we are going to meet, along with my bestfriend
Noah. "Aaliyah, why couldn't we just take your car" Alisha moaned. Forgetting about my
car accident that I had during the school year last year. I replied with a confussed utterly look.
"So how was your day?" She quickly changed the subject. "Good." I replied as i shrugged
my shoulders. Finally we were here, we were at Jareck's house. "Hey, Alisha, hey Aaliyah!" Noah said while giving us both hugs and squeezing us tightly. Noah gave the best hugs ever. Jareck replied with a "Sup, babe" as he kissed me. Noah gave him a sharp look. Noah and Jareck
were the complete opposite type. Noah was more of the sweet, and over protecting type.
While Jareck, well. He was sweet too, but maybe just a little bit.. full of himself?
Alisha tells me that Noah likes me, but he can't! We've
been best friends since we were just little kids!
Chapter two suprise: "Noah, how could you say that to me. Why would
you even think that! Leave, and don't ever talk to me again!"
Feedback?
should i keep going? im just learning how to write
my own stories.