emilxo
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1 decade ago
on quote 4710111
This is a really good start! Try and add a little bit more detail. And instead of saying " I rolled out of bed at 6:15" Maybe say something like "It was 6:15 when my alarm started to go off, I rolled out of bed .. " and ect. You're off to a REALLY great start though! Keep it up! ( :
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emilxo
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1 decade ago
on quote 4752113
The second chapter is out! Let me know what you think. ( :
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/4751664
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emilxo
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1 decade ago
on quote 4753355
The second chapter is out! Let me know what you think. ( :
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/4751664
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emilxo
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1 decade ago
on quote 4730327
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/4733393
-First story, let me know what you think? ( :
Should i continue it ?
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emilxo · 1 decade ago on quote 5379627
if you still have recess, you're too young to have a boyfriend .
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