FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
I would, but fot one thing. I'm not religious, and I even if it were, I do not think because God wants it this way, that we should do it, we should do it simply because it is the right thing to do.
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FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
We need to talk, soon. reply
iridescentstorm
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1 decade ago
You're not alone in this cruel world :) lol reply
FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
Incredibly inspiring, but I'm afraid I can't bring up the courage to actually believe it applies to me. reply
FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
that one line isn't that great indeed
you should try to think up an alternative, great poem for the rest ABAB rhyme. reply
FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
beautiful, warms my heart, really. reply
FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
a slightly more traditional poem. I like it. reply
FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
This poem is totally not crap. I think I like this one most of all the ones you've written so far! reply
FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
You start saying it's ending when you're about halfway, kinda funny.
and you repeat yourself too often.
try shortening a little.
When I write poems, I constantly erase and rewrite.
It doesn't have to be perfect from the beginning reply
FrankConnor
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1 decade ago
My brother's my greatest support when I'm down. He's always there for me. reply
FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
Beautiful, really beautiful
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Wubbs · 1 decade ago
UR F**KING INSANE!!!
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FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
I would, but fot one thing. I'm not religious, and I even if it were, I do not think because God wants it this way, that we should do it, we should do it simply because it is the right thing to do.
I
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FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
We need to talk, soon.
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iridescentstorm · 1 decade ago
You're not alone in this cruel world :) lol
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FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
Incredibly inspiring, but I'm afraid I can't bring up the courage to actually believe it applies to me.
reply
FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
that one line isn't that great indeed
you should try to think up an alternative, great poem for the rest ABAB rhyme.
reply
FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
beautiful, warms my heart, really.
reply
FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
a slightly more traditional poem. I like it.
reply
FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
This poem is totally not crap. I think I like this one most of all the ones you've written so far!
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FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
You start saying it's ending when you're about halfway, kinda funny.
and you repeat yourself too often.
try shortening a little.
When I write poems, I constantly erase and rewrite.
It doesn't have to be perfect from the beginning
reply
FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
My brother's my greatest support when I'm down. He's always there for me.
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booImMewMew2 · 1 decade ago
Nice XD
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FranFewster98 · 1 decade ago
My sister told me what this means :) She knows french, haha :) <3
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booImMewMew2 · 1 decade ago
ugh it changed the first part grrrrrr
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