Review 1, February 26th, 2012
Hey guys... Girls... This is my FIRST Story review. Hopefully you'll keep up in the future, and I can actually get this thing started (: Sooo, I have a lot of cute, cute stories, and I'm just thinking about naming them, the Witty author, Story finished or not, what I personally like about the story, my favorite character, comments made by viewers from the actual story, and how many likes in total! (maybe) <.< Lol, that part might take me awhile xD These reviews will just be random, so, sorry for inconvenience. On the weekdays I have an overwhelming schedule, and weekends, I'm usually out, but I'll try my best to get this thing started xD
Story: So Far Away
Author: Stillwaitingforyou
Review: Okie, so I'm sure everyone has heard of Emma, more known to Wittians as, Stillwaitingforyou. The story, So Far Away is romantic, and sweet! Who said you couldn't fall in love in a week?! This story, or what I have read of it, isn't finished. So that just leaves us in suspense! I heard she was taking a couple of days off of writing, and we don't blame you for that Emma! :) Okie, so Clare and Ben are amazingly explained throughout the chapters, but I kind of want to know a little more about Clare's friends? What about Tyler? I mean there are Leah, and Marge... But in the beginning while they were all at Cali, there were more girls right? More description please? Other than that, this story is a keeper, and the author is an amazing girl that I heard will have more stories out in the future! Be sure to check out, Bad Girl Gone Good, and How to Solve a Murder Without Being Murder (:
Faves (About): 1,300 <.< That's pretty good Emma :) Although it deserves more faves! Readers, be sure to fave after its read! Do some comments too? She appreciates ya'lls word of advice, and opinions. I've noticed that she has lost some viewers?! Explaination?!
Codaa024~ "Your an amazing writter, i've been reading your stories a lot&i love them! continue to write! :D"
Maggie526~ "Boring start? Its flipping awesome!!"
Unibugsrock~ "Wow! This just keeps getting better and better! I wonder how this is gonna work out! :)"
Cecaldwell18~ "MOREEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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