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  1. StoryPlace StoryPlace
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    December 15, 2012 1:24pm UTC
    The Games
    Rose's story.
    Chapter Five
    I wrapped the covers around me, covering myself, since I had no idea who would be coming into my room at this time of night.
    "Hey. I didn't wake you up, did I?" Seth's face was as white as snow and he looked as if he'd just seen a ghost.
    "No. I just got in to bed. Is something wrong, Seth?" I murmured.
    "I just needed to see that you were alright. I had a strange feeling before I went to bed..."
    I patted a spot near me on the giant bed.
    Seth sat down at my feet. "How's your hand?" He grabbed my hand gently and turned it over to make sure I hadn't bled through the bandage.
    "Hurts a bit, but I've had worse."
    "Rose." Seth looked me deeply in the eyes.
    I just stared back. He was still holding my hand.
    "I'm scared..."
    "I know. It's normal to be scared, I mean, there are gonna be so many people out there wanting to kill us--"
    "No," Seth began. "I'm scared of seeing what we're going to see. I'm scared that I will have to kill people. But, I'm mostly scared of losing you."
    Seth slowly let go of my hand and got up from my bed. He headed for the door, but stopped, turned around and nodded goodnight to me.
    "Goodnight," I barely whispered.
    "Wake up, honey. Wake up. You'll be late for school, dear." My mom brushed back hair from my face.
    "Mmmphhdrumm..." I muttered. "Five more minutes."
    "Nope, you need to get up baby. Your daddy's going to take you to school, so hurry up."
    I opened my eyes, expecting to see my mother. But, it was no one. "Just a dream..." I mumbled.
    Then my door slowly opened. In came Cinna and my father.
    "Goodmorning my lovely Rose." Cinna smiled.
    "Hiya Rosey." My dad came over and kissed my forehead. "Why are you crying?"
    "I'm not crying," I muttered. I honestly didn't realize I was crying, but then I felt a tear roll down my face. I quickly wiped my eyes and tried to change the subject. "How are you this morning, Cinna."
    "Great. I think I may have found a way to get all of us out of here..."
    "Really?" I grinned.
    "Yes. There is another train route that leads out of Panem. Into a whole different place. They never use it. But, if we get out of here quick enough, it'll give us enough time to make new identities and find a new home." Cinna explained.
    "But...the world is taken over..."
    "There's one place that is still independent. It's called Canada." Cinna smiled.
    "But...Dad, Jake..." I frowned.
    "We'll work on that after we save you and Seth."
    "What if we get just to the border, dress up as Capitol people, and go on a 'tour' of the districts? Then we can get Jake! And..." I shook with excitement and hope.
    Cinna shook his head. "Too risy hun."
    Later that day, we all took a nap since this was the last bit of sleep we would get before trying to escape.
    I had another dream. This one was more realistic. And frightening.
    "Rose...Rose...Rose..." My name was being echoed throughout the arena.
    I turned around, and there was Seth. "Seth what the hell are you doing, they're gonna find us. You need to get back in the bushes." I hissed.
    "Rose..."
    "Go, Seth!"
    "Rooossssee..." It turned into a hiss, and the scenery started to melt into something else.
    This time I was in a hospital. The sign said this: National Canadian Hospital "The Best Hospital In The World!"
    I heard my name again. "Rose..." It was my father. Well, I think it was. His voice sounded strained and tired.
    I started running towards my name. "Rose...Rooose..."
    Then I found him. My father was lying in a hospital bed, getting a blood transfusion, barely concious. He seemed to be on the line between life, and death. Then in an instant, Seth was behind me. Along with Jake.
    "Oh, Jake!" I jumped into his arms. "I've missed you!" I started to cry and ask about my father but then he interupted me.
    "No you didn't." Jake shook my arms off of him and Seth took my hand.
    It was then I noticed a small silver ring on my left ring finger...
    The scene morphed once again to the arena. I was getting brutally beaten by some guy. Then I blacked out...and woke up in a morgue...
    "Rose! Hey, hey." It was Seth. He smoothed back hair from my sweaty face. "What's wrong?"
    My eyes were wide and I felt like a crazy person. "I don't know," I lied. "Maybe just had a bad dream."

  2. StoryPlace StoryPlace
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    October 27, 2012 11:49pm UTC
    The Games
    Rose's story.
    Chapter Four
    "Peeta." Cinna smiled grimly.
    "Cinna...I...I thought..."
    "I survived." Cinna kept his smile on. "Did you miss me?"
    My father replied with a huge hug and tears streaming down his face.
    "They took her, Cinna. She's gone. I fought so hard to have her, and they just took her away from us. How, Cinna? How could this happen?" My father looked ten times older than usual.
    "I'm sorry Peeta. Katniss did not deserve that. She was such a strong woman. I loved her like she was my own family." Cinna's eyes looked out to the distance, reminiscing the days of the Rebellion, and Peace. Remembering the wedding dress he made for my mother. Not the one that burst into flames, but am extremely beautiful, pure, white dress.
    I wiped a tear from eye. "I'm going to go get a glass of water."
    My father nodded, Cinna kissed my forehead, and Effie just gazed off into another world.
    A few minutes later, I found the refreshments car. I went straight to the water and gulped down a whole glass and started to fill up another when a deep voice from behind startled me and made me drop my glass, making the floor look like it was covered in diamonds.
    "Sorry. I didn't think I'd startle you." Seth grabbed a broom and dust-pan and started to sweep up the shards of glass.
    "Doesn't matter." I mumbled.
    "Yes it does." He stopped sweeping and looked up at me. "You could've cut your hand on the glass or something. I wouldn't want to hurt you." His eyes darted back down to the glass, and he started to sweep again.
    "Oh," I started picking up some big pieces of glass not thinking it would cut me. "Thanks."
    Then, I gripped one piece too hard and cut my palm. "Ow, damn it." I grabbed a towel and wrapped my hand.
    "That's what I was afraid of. Let's go fix your hand up." Seth grabbed my injured hand and kept the towel on it, and led me to the bathroom. They kept all of the first-aid kits in there. It's not like it matters. I'll be cut up and diseased in no time in the arena.
    When we got into the kit, he got some alcohol and gauze to clean and wrap up my hand.
    "They're trying to get us out of here." Seth kept his eyes focused on my hand. He started to put alcohol on it.
    "Ow," I jerked back slightly, but he held my hand firmly. "It's not gonna work. Security's too tight here now. Especially after the Rebellion."
    "Oh."
    I looked into the mirror. I looked horrid. My hair was a mess because I didn't comb it after my shower. I looked like I went through hell, even though we're nowhere close to hell yet.
    "Done. Take a pain pill and you should be good. It was a bit deep, but they'll fix it when we get cleaned up and stuff." Seth let go of my hand and put everything away. He have me a quick smile and darted out of the room.
    An hour later, I felt like going to bed. I went into my dad's room to talk with him. He was sitting on the bed, staring at a picture. I quietly sat down beside him, and peeked at the picture. It was my mother and him, right after they were crowned victors. My beautitful mother, and handsome father.
    "She loved you a lot, Rose." My dad looked over at me. "I wish she was here. I can't help you. The only way I won was because of her. If it wasn't for your mother, I wouldn't have survived."
    "I miss her."
    "I know."
    I climbed into my bed. It was soft and warm. And then my door slowly opened.
    Hope you enjoyed:)
    & again, I'm sorry it was short again. I'll try to make the next one a long one:)
    Maybe I'll even work on it tomorrow. :)

  3. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    June 19, 2012 11:54am UTC
    The Games
    Rose's story.
    Chapter Three
    I felt a shudder roll through my body as I stood on this cold, unforgiving stage. The same stage that my mother stood on so many years ago.
    "...Jakob Abernathy." My eyes immediately began to tear up.
    Well, I guess I forgot to mention who Jake really was. Jakob Abernathy was Haymitch's long lost nephew. After the Rebellion, Haymitch found out that he had a nephew with no more family left, so he took him in. Then, one fateful day, Haymitch had a bad dream about his past in the Games. He overdosed on some medication, morphling, and alcohol. He commited suicide. So now Jake lives with us.
    I searched the crowd for Jake. Once I found him, I saw his expression. Scared. Nervous. Sad. But then I heard commotion...
    "YOU CAN'T DO THAT! NO! DON'T!" Another guy, probably seventeen or so, darted out of the crowd. He had brown hair and green eyes. I kind of recognized him...
    He was always with Jake when Jake and I weren't together. He'd come over to our house, bring some fresh produce from his family's garden. Oh! It was Jake's best friend, Seth.
    "Sir you need to go back to your spot." I heard a Peacemaker bark at Seth.
    "Fine, fine. LET HIM GO! I guess I'm gonna volunteer." Seth shook his head, probably wondering what in the world he just did.
    "Well, alrighty then." Effie mused. She helped Seth up onto the stage. "And what is your name, young man?"
    "Seth Scott." His eyes focused on me.
    "Well here you go, ladies and gentlemen I give you Rose Mellark and Seth Scott, your new Hunger Games Tributes!" Effie tried to be herself, but I knew deep down, she felt bad for us. And she should.
    Once on the train, I took a long, hot shower and put on some of the clothes that they supplied for us. I just grabbed the first thing I saw; a dress that was knee-length and red and had a familiar name on it; Cinna. My mom told me about Cinna, how great he was, how he helped her through a lot. I wished I could have met him. I put my mockingjay pin that my dad gave to me on the dress. My dad said it would protect me, like it protected Mom. I sure hope so...
    "Rose, dear?" Effie's muffled voice came from the door.
    "Come in." I muttered.
    "Hello Rose. Can we talk?" Effie took a seat beside me on the couch in my room. "Now, this is probably the only time I can tell you without someone spying on me. You're mother was a great girl. I remember her, oh she was lovely. She had a little bit of a temper, but it was fine. Anyway, what I wanted to tell you is that I really do not think this is something to congradualte on. And neither does Cinna."
    "Cinna? My mom told me he was killed. Right in front of her. Right before she went into the Quarter Quell. He's dead, Effie." I was puzzled.
    "I'm right here, Rose Mellark."
    "Cinna?!" I grinned. I ran over to him and hugged him. "Oh my gosh I heard so much about you. My mom just adored you!"
    "As I adored her." Cinna chuckled. "We're getting you out of this. And Seth. You're not going to go through what your mother had to go through. I've got an idea too."
    "What's going on?" Our new mentor came into the room.
    "Hi dad." I said.
    Oooh, so Rose's dad is the new mentor since Haymitch is gone. Hmmm...
    (Sorry the chapter's kinda shorter. I'll write a loooong chapter four for you all:D)

  4. StoryPlace StoryPlace
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    June 17, 2012 12:44pm UTC
    The Games
    Rose's story.
    Chapter Two
    "Rosey. You're paler than paper and shaking like that earthquake we had last summer. Calm down. It's your first Reaping. They're not going to pick you dear." My dad smoothed my hair back from my face and kissed my forehead. He's survived The Games. If he did, then I can now. If they pick me, I'll be ready. I'll fight just as my mother and father did. I will survive to see the day where this ruthless, disgusting government comes crashing down. Permenantly.
    "I know. I know." I barely whispered as I filed in with the other girls, my dad squeezing my hand one last time before I went to enter my name into the "drawing."
    "Name?" The snobby Peacemaker guy barked.
    "Rose Mellark. Sixteen years old." I muttered.
    "Move along."
    "Welcome, welcome. Once again we are here for another exciting Reaping for The Hunger Games!" Effie Trinket's overly cheery voice rang through the silenced crowd. "Aren't you all as excited as me?!" More silence. "Well then, Ladies first."
    Peeta's POV (Rose's father)
    It was like a rerun to when it was Prim's first Reaping. Although, Katniss, Prim, and I were all younger. My stomach turned and threatened to make me throw everything I had for breakfast up and out of my body. My only daughter, with my eyes, Katniss' hair and beautiful voice, was going to be Reaped. I knew she would. She would be picked because of who her parents were. Pete was lucky because since he's the oldest of the two, they kind of overlooked him. Plus, he'd be a good asset to the Capitol I guess. I'll never let him in that place. Ever.
    "Alrighty, here we go!" Effie's voice was frightening. It made me remember hearing my name being called. Or when Prim's name was called, then her sister volunteered because she loved her sister so much.
    "And the girl tribute is..."
    Rose's POV
    "...Hannah Hawthorne." My eyes were about to pop out of my head. Hannah was my Uncle Gale's only child, that he and his wife desperately tried to have. It took a couple years, but it happened. She was their miracle. She was the same age as me. Went to the same classes, ate lunch together. We were best friends. I know she wouldn't make it, even though her father (according my mom) was amazing at hunting. Her mom refused to let Uncle Gale teach her anything because it's "too dangerous." He taught me instead. He told me it would be useful, and my mother obviously helped. I knew what I had to do.
    I ran up to the stage, ripped the secure arms of the Peacemakers off of her, screaming the words my mother once did for Aunt Prim. "I volunteer. LET HER GO!" I grabbed Hannah into my arms. "You're like a sister, I love you. Take care of daddy, and Pete, and Uncle Gale. Please. I love you." I whispered into her ear.
    "You can't do this." She looked me in the eyes. "Your dad already lost his wife. He can't lose you too."
    "He won't." I smiled as a tear rolled down my cheek.
    "Alrighty then. Like mother, like daughter I guess? Congratulations, Rose Mellark. You are District Twelve's new Tribute!" Effie put a hand on my shoulder as Hannah was led back to Uncle Gale. Uncle Gale looked at me with sad eyes, shaking his head. He mouthed something to me. "Be careful. Don't get hurt. Remember what I taught you." I nodded my head in reponse.
    "Next, the gentlemen!" Effie walked over to the other stupid glass bowl as I stood all alone on the stage, feeling just like my mom did.
    I glanced over at Effie. Her face was shocked. "A-and the male Tribute is..."
    Who do you think it is? :) Leave a comment and fave if you liked it! (Sorry for the short chapter too.)

  5. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    June 16, 2012 6:18pm UTC
    (m y f r i e n d w e a r i n g a d r e s s t o s c h o o l )
    Me: You look cute today!
    Friend: Thanks.
    I just didn't feel like wearing pants today.
    true story;)

  6. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    June 14, 2012 11:12pm UTC
    New Story
    New Story
    New Story
    !!!!!!
    The Games
    My continuation of The Hunger Games trilogy. :)
    nmf

  7. StoryPlace StoryPlace
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    June 14, 2012 11:05pm UTC
    The Games
    Rose's story.
    Chapter One
    I didn't know where I was going, or what I was going to do, but I needed to get out. They were going to kill me if I didn't follow my instincts, and my instincts were telling me to get the hell out of the locker rooms. It was three against me. The odds were definitely not in my favor, unlike Effie Trinket's famous words (by the way, will she ever die?!).
    Some sick, pshycotic man decided to take power and start a tyranny in England. Yes, England. Then, it spread (very surprising, I know) to the United States, where I live. Eventually it spread to the whole world (This crazy man only likes to make Americans fight the Games because of our ancestors who declared independence from Great Britain so many years ago). But, yes, we all have districts, and we all get "reaped" every year, and we all watch or participate in the Games each year. I was fine, until this year. Instead of the age range being 12-18, this pshycotic man thought it was unfair to have 12 year-olds fighting 18 year-olds. So, now, it's 16-21. I just turned 16. Oh, what a generous man. (I love sarcasm).
    Back on track, though. So I wasn't the most popular girl in our school. This was obvious. I was never admired by the girls in my school, they hated me. I don't know why. Every time I would hang out with my best friend, Jake, I'd get really nasty looks. C'mon, he's just my friend. Anyway, Jake and I were hanging out in the locker rooms, where no one ever goes because we don't have sports at school anymore, and we were just "cuddling" as the girls called it. What I say it was, though, was a girl that was tired, and crying her eyes out because tomorrow would be her first reaping, and a boy best friend that's been entered in reapings for two years now, comforting her.
    "You come back here you--"
    I turned around and stopped. "What? What am I? Because I have a best friend named Jake, and you don't? Awww. Boo. Hoo. Hoo." I whipped back around and bolted outside to where Jake was standing, laughing at me.
    "What?" I said breathlessly.
    "You, Rosey, look hilarious when you're running from pshyco girls wanting to rip your throat out."
    I narrowed my eyes. "Don't call me Rosey. And for your information, I was running so they could come and find you." I grinned my evil grin.
    Jake's eyes looked like they were gonna pop out of his head. "Let's, uh, go...home. Now." Next thing I knew he hopped onto his horse, and swung me onto the horse as well, and he bolted as the girls stood back, scowling and muttering inappropriate words at us.
    Later that night, Jake and my brother Pete were playing cards and chatting just like they do every night. I, however, was being the mother of the house and ironing my dress for the Reaping and washing Pete's and Jake's clothes.
    "Rose, honey, why don't you get to bed? You need rest." My older brother Pete took the iron carefully from my hands and brushed some hair from my face. "Go to bed hun." He kissed my forehead and started ironing his pants for tomorrow.
    I slowly walked down the narrow hallway, my eyelids refusing to stay open. My mother's picture caught my eye. Her smile was tired, and she was holding a baby with blonde hair and pale skin, newly wrapped in a hospital blanket. I remember vaguely, my mother telling me about how she refused to ever have children. Then, she led the whole Resistance and overthrew the tyranny of Mr. Phsyco man. It didn't work. When I was thirteen, Pete sixteen, strange men with white suits and helmets stormed into our house, screaming for my mother to get out of her hiding spot, or they'd kill all of us. My father tried to stop my mom, but my mom was a determined woman, and came out to save her precious family. Right there, in front of me, Pete, and Dad, my mother was murdered. Brutally beaten, then shot with an arrow. Not just any arrow, a flaming arrow with a mockingjay on the bow.
    "Rosey dear." Jake was behind me. "Bed."
    I tried to turn around and slap him, but he grabbed me around the waist jokingly and dragged me to my room. He kissed my cheek and flopped onto his bed on the other side of the room. Pete didn't like it, but her knew better than to think Jake and I were romantic at all. Jake's like a second brother to me.
    "Rise and shine Rosey Posey." It was my father's strained voice. "I got ya some of those cheese rolls you love."
    I opened my eyes and smiled up at my blonde-haired, blue-eyed father. His beautiful blue eyes were sad, and they've always been sad since the love of his life was killed. "Thanks Daddy." I kissed his cheek and hopped up. "Now shoo, I gotta get dressed." My dad's eyes seemed dark, hiding something. He knew something.
    A few hours later, I realized that today was the day. My first Reaping.
    I hope you liked it! More chapters to come. Oh, and don't like it at first? It should get muuuuch better. Fave and comment please!:)

  8. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    December 2, 2011 5:43pm UTC
    Do you ever worry
    about being judged for stupid things?
    Who you like?
    What you wear?
    Who you date?
    Who your best friend is?
    If you wear makeup or not?
    If you look alright?
    If you're too skinny, too big?
    If you're too tall or too short?
    What you do, how you act?
    Are you judging yourself?
    Because I know I am...

  9. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    November 12, 2011 7:33pm UTC
    Liking more than one guy,
    and thinking to yourself
    " I a m s u c h a w h o r e ! "

  10. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    September 28, 2011 4:08pm UTC
    I'm back!!!:)
    more stories to come:)

  11. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    September 28, 2011 4:08pm UTC
    My Second Identity
    Chapter One
    "James, I gotta go. I'll talk to you later. Oh, and, uh, bring the biology project tonight! We could multi-task." Hailey spoke into the phone and wrote down some ideas for her art project.
    "Yeah, sure." James replied. "What time?"
    "Seven...iiiiish..." She thought. "Yeah, around seven if you can. Pretty please!"
    Hailey pressed the red button and headed out the door and down the street to the local cafe for a coffee and some quick dinner.
    It was getting cooler, and getting dark, but she really didn't mind. This town was safe for her. Everyone knew everyone.
    "So, dear, we meet again."
    Hailey turned around and screamed.
    (Isabella)
    "Mom, why are we going so far away on a school night? I have three big tests tomorrow. I need to study and get some rest. Please, mom?"
    "Just be quiet," my mom spoke in a shaky voice. "You'll see in awhile."
    We were already a thousand miles from school, and I was getting very worried and nervous.
    RING, RING!
    "Hello?...No, she's...yeah, uh, maybe two more hours...I'm doing the best I can!...I'm sorry....Mhmm...Okay...Goodbye." My mom threw her phone on the floor of our small Jeep.
    Where the hell is she taking me? I thought.
    **sorry for such a short chapter!!!**

  12. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    August 5, 2011 2:20pm UTC
    Goodbye Witty .

  13. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    August 5, 2011 2:13pm UTC
    Maybe I
    should quit writing
    I'm running out of ideas
    &
    No one really seems to like them anymore...
    --what do you think?--
    B1air

  14. StoryPlace StoryPlace
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    July 31, 2011 8:46pm UTC
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  15. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    July 29, 2011 4:33pm UTC
    New Story
    New Story
    New Story
    !!!!!!
    Different.
    check it out!!! [coming soon]
    nmf

  16. StoryPlace StoryPlace
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    July 29, 2011 4:20pm UTC
    The Meaning of Life
    a sequel to Don't Let Go
    Sorry about the weird spacing. I dunno what happened!
    Rachael's POV
    My hand was bloody and bruised but I didn't care. I kept hitting the walls, knowing that my hand would probably break with a few more punches. Then I saw the little snapshot of my 7 week ultra-sound taped to the wall. I sank to the floor and cried so hard...
    "Um, is there anyone home?" A voice called out.
    I wiped my face on my sleeve and got up.
    I walked to the voice to find a tall guy with straight black hair and glasses.
    "Uh...hi. I, uh, the door was open and...yeah. Well, I'm Mike. I just moved in next door and heard some commotion over here. Are you okay?"
    "I'm fine." I sniffled.
    "Alright then."
    Mike started to leave, but I was afraid to be alone right now.
    Using my other, not-bloody hand, I welcomed him in and offered him a water or something.
    "No thank you." Mike smiled and took a seat.
    Forgetting my injured hand, I went to grab a glass for myself with the bad hand. "OW!" I screamed.
    Mike rushed into the kitchen and stared at my hand.
    "Um, I think you should go get that checked out." Mike suggested.
    I glared at him. I couldn't set foot in a hospital ever again. "No. Maybe it's time you leave." I slowly made my way to the table with a pen and paper.
    Mike walked outside, but didn't completely leave.
    I started to write.
    Dear Justin,
    I'm really sorry about my actions lately. I want you back. You're the only one that understands me. I know I've messed up and been kinda very rude lately. Please consider coming back. We can try to make this work. I've just been so depressed about Miracle lately. But, just because Miracle didn't make it, that doesn't mean we can't try to have another child, right? I just don't want to through away the love we had, and hopefully still have.
    I do love you. I always have.
    I just want you to know that you messed up, to though
    Nevermind that last sentence.
    If I'm not here when you read this, just call my cell.
    Love,
    Rach♡
    "Maybe it's time I go to the hospital." I said to myself.
    And I was on my way to St. Marie's hospital for the first time since Miracle's only birthday.
    Justin's POV
    When I read Rachael's note, at first I was mad, but then I thought, What would Miracle want?
    Miracle would want Rach and I together.
    So I called Rach.
    "Hello? Ow!"
    "Rach?"
    "Yeah. Hey Justin. Sorry...ow!...I'm at the hospital. Broken hand." Rachael kept yelling "ow".
    "Um, broken hand?"
    "Yeah...walk into our bedroom..." Rachael trailed off. "I'm really sorry about that. I got mad."
    "No problem." I'd fix it. It wasn't too bad. "Rach?"
    "Mhm? Fuuuuuh! OW!"
    "Re-Marry me?"
    "Yes."
    The End

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  19. StoryPlace StoryPlace
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    July 19, 2011 11:26pm UTC
    The Meaning of Life
    a sequel to Don't Let Go
    "Wait, what the hell?" I muttered.
    And then I woke up, once again. Rach and I were sitting in her hospital room. I've been asleep for about twelve hours. So has she, and it's only been a few days, not a week. What the hell was I doing? Dreaming that Drake was back? Umm, hello, he's dead. I'm such an idiot. I'm so glad he's gone.
    "Justin..." Rach trailed off.
    "Yeah?" I yawned.
    "I wanna go home..."
    "Um, dear, you just had some surgery...I think you need to stay here for awhile. You're on bedrest..."
    She started to cry and tried to get up. I rushed over to her and gently held her down as I pressed the "Call Nurse" button.
    "Yes, sweetie?" The nurse said cheerfully through the speaker as Rach kept on struggling against me, punching my chest and stomach.
    "Rachael needs her medication, please." I struggled.
    "Oh my...I'm coming!"
    Fifteen minutes later, Rach was calm again and she stared at me with glassy eyes.
    "I'm sorry." She barely spoke.
    "Don't be sorry, please." I moaned.
    "Fine, I'm not."
    The whole thing with losing our baby really took a toll on our relationship. It really hurt to see us like this.
    "Mr. Daniels? Hi I'm Dr. Michaels, Rachael's Gynecologist. I need to talk with you, if you don't mind." A somewhat young woman appeared in the doorway.
    I nodded.
    We walked out into the hall, and down to the lounge area.
    "Now, sir, our nurses made a terrible mistake. They mixed up the children. You know how Miracle officially died a few hours after birth? Well, it was the wrong baby. This is very rare. Your child is perfectly healthy and she's ready to go home."
    My jaw dropped like an idiot. "Really? Please don't joke with me..."
    "Wanna see her?"
    I nodded my head.
    We walked to the nursery.
    "There she is," Dr. Michaels pointed to a baby girl with dark hair and a pink blanket.
    "But when she was born, she didn't cry." I stuttered.
    "They got her stabilized. She's a very lucky girl, and she is a miracle. Would you like to take her to your wife?" The doctor smiled.
    "Screw you! You lied to us! I hate you! You better not be tricking us--"
    I interrupted Rachael's screams. "Rach, please, she explained everything to me."
    The doctor told Rach everything, and with every word, Rach's face softened.
    I handed Miracle to Rach.
    "Say hello to our little girl." I grinned.

  20. StoryPlace StoryPlace
    posted a quote
    July 19, 2011 9:11pm UTC
    The Meaning of Life
    a sequel to Don't Let Go
    It's been one week since the scare. One week of Miracle's should-have-been life. The doctors lied to me. They lied to Rachael. They told me I should be ready for Rachael to not make it through, but for some reason, she didn't let go of the amazing life God gave her. She was heart broken when the doctors told her that Miracle wasn't able to breathe. The cord wrapped around Miracle's neck and asphyxiated her. She wasn't stillborn, but close to it. She didn't cry when she was born. Oh, God...
    Rachael got a bit restless in her hospital bed.
    "Rach?" I whispered.
    She looked at me with puffy red eyes.
    "Do you need anything?"
    She nodded her head, slowly.
    "What?"
    "My babies."
    That broke my heart into a million little pieces...again. I couldn't stand to see my wife in so much pain. So much hurt. She lost a baby once, why did she have to lose another? It just didn't make sense.
    "Honey, I know, I know, I do too. I'm so sorry sweetheart." I almost started crying myself.
    Rachael pressed the nurse button.
    "Yes, dear?" The speaker crackled.
    "Can I have my medicine yet?" Rachael almost cried.
    "Yes, hun, I'll be there in a minute." The speaker crackled and then shut off.
    I decided to take a walk while Rachael slept from the medication they gave her. As I was walking, though, I saw something that I rather not have.
    "Alright baby, I'll see you later...what? Don't call you baby? How come?...Yeah, I know you're married...screw it, I'm coming anyway."
    "Drake?" I muttered.
    "What..."
    "That wasn't my wife, was it?" I snapped.
    "So what if it was? What you gonna do 'bout it?" Drake has been drinking.
    I just walked away...
    "Hey..." Rachel whispered.
    "Yes, love?"
    "I love you. But, I don't think it's gonna work out. Goodbye, Justin."
    "No, Rach, please. What did I do.?!"
    "Rachael loves me now. Get over yourself. You may be the hottie, but I'm her first, if you know what I mean...ha ha ha!" Drake laughed.
    "No...no...no...no..." I mumbled.
    Then I woke up to see Drake talking to Rachael.

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