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  1. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    November 29, 2010 8:51pm UTC
    THIS MARKS THE END OF MY LAST STORY.
    & also marks the starting of my new story, which will be started soon. Any original Ideas? Thanks :)

  2. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    November 29, 2010 8:25pm UTC
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  3. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    November 26, 2010 9:44am UTC
    One Last Breath-twelve;
    Eric. Eric. Eric. Eric. Eric. Eric. Eric. Eric. Eric. Eric.
    OOka Okay. Now shut up, self.
    I don't know why Eric won't call me back.
    *Ring*
    Oh.
    "Hello?"
    "What did you want, Vic?"
    "You, Eric."
    He made a sound that signaled his annoyance. I didn't want him to hang up on me. Someone who was with Eric, a guy, shouted "Who is it?" from across the room.
    "I'm coming over," I told him.
    "No, Vic. You don't have to do tha-"
    I hung up, called Mariah, and we went over to Eric's house. When we got there, his friend Kenney immediately noticed Mariah. She immediately noticed him, also.
    "Hey, Eric."
    "Why are you in my house...?"
    "Well..."
    "Spit it out."
    "I decided you were going to take me back."
    "Oh, did you?"
    "I did."
    "No," he said. I wondered when he got so confident.
    I took this as a challenge. I kissed him. He pulled away, and made me feel worthless.
    "NO."
    "Why not?"
    "I DON'T WANT YOU ANYMORE."
    I guess I normally would have been offended by this, but surprisingly I wasn't.
    "Please," I begged.
    Our eyes locked, and I was going to win this staring contest. Don't look away. Don't look away. Don''t look away.
    "Wow. You are so annoying."
    "I'm really not. I just want you back."
    "Who said I'd take you back?"
    Another challenge? Yes. We kissed again, but this time he didn't pull away. I caught him. After about twenty seconds, I pulled away. Eric didn't like that idea, though, so he kissed me again. A smile creeped up on his face.
    "Okay,"
    "Alright,"
    The night was going good for me, as well as Mariah.
    "Kenney asked me to go to Destiny's party with him," she said.
    "Damn, get me an invite?"
    "Done. You need a date."
    "Got one," I winked.

  4. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    November 25, 2010 10:45am UTC
    Hey, Readers :)
    I just wanted to ask you guys if I should continue my story. I'd also like to ask if you guys have any suggestions for me. Is the font too small? Is it annoying to look at? Are the parts too short?
    In the next part, I'm going to try a new font, because, while looking over them, it strained my eyes.
    *Please comment, telling me if I should continue.*

  5. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    November 25, 2010 12:13am UTC
    One Last Breath-eleven;
    Eric: u r going out with pat?
    Me: Yeah :)
    Eric: oh, so u dont like me anymore?
    Me: eric, dont go there. u know i'll always love u. u want me to move on.
    Eric: no, i dont want u to move on. i want to be with you.
    Me: ??? u cant cheat on ryleigh...
    Eric: ik thats why i broke up with her.
    Me: then what do i do about pat?
    Eric: he doesnt have to know
    Me: i cant cheat
    Eric: then break up w/ him.
    Me: no eric, thatll hurt him...and i know what that feels like.
    Eric: well text me when u figure it out or come over .
    I sighed to myself. I had so much to figure out.
    Pat: im moving :( i got a scholarship to wyoming. 4 soccer.
    Me: what?! :( plz tell me you're lying.
    Pat: i cant. i wish i could.
    Me: oh. then congrats. im really happy for you.
    Pat: im sorry. i can tell ur upset. im so sorry.
    Me: im not upset. after all, i've gotten used to heartbreak.
    Pat: i didnt mean this. i'll be over in a second.
    I had gotten that text about a second after he had arrived, which meant I didn't have enough time to hide my tears.
    "Hey, baby," he said, calming.
    "Oh, hi," I replied.
    "I'm so sorry. Really, I am. You know what? I'm not even going to take it. If it means being here with you, I'll do whatever it takes."
    "No, you have to go. Why would I want to be remembered as the girl who ruined your opportunities?"
    "Come on, don't be this way."
    "How can I not? We've been together for one day and you've basically already left me. I can't take much more of this."
    "Fine. If you want it that way...then goodbye, Vic."
    "Bye," I said with teary eyes.
    He approached me with one last kiss, and left. He was gone.

  6. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    November 24, 2010 11:40pm UTC
    One Last Breath-ten;
    I felt like I had been gaining some weight. I hadn't taken my morning runs in a while. I put on my running shorts and an old T-shirt and just ran. I ran until it hurt. My stomach hurt and my legs were sore. I ran at least three miles. When I got back home, I took a long shower. Something needed to be done to get my mind off of Eric. I dried my hair, laced up my cleats, and went to the soccer field. Surprisingly, when I saw Pat there, I wasn't excited. I ran up to him, and he just stared at me.
    "What's wrong?"
    I was completely shocked that he could tell that something was upsetting me.
    "Eric. He won't take me back. It's like he doesn't even care," my voice was wobbly, again, because even thinking about him made my heart break.
    "What an idiot. How could he not want you?"
    He hugged me, like a friend would, and let go quickly.
    "Thanks. I hope he breaks up with that Ryleigh girl."
    "I hope he doesn't."
    "Why?"
    "Then I couldn't have you."
    I smiled. I was so drowned in my own emotions. There's the hot, caring guy, who shared my passion of soccer, and the cute, caring guy, who wanted the best for me. My decisions usually weren't the best, and I guessed that this one wouldn't be either. I was going to have fun with this.
    "Who said I can't have you both?"
    He smiled, hoping I wasn't serious. He didn't want anyone cheating on him, either. For the rest of the time, we didn't do anything but stare in each other's eyes and smile like idiots.
    "It's getting late. Want to sleep over?"
    "I'm pretty sure my parents would kill me if they found out I was sleeping over at a guy's house."
    "Oh. Well, there was something I wanted to ask you."
    "Ask away," I rushed him.
    "Okay, well, I want you to go out with me. I know you and Eric still have a thing, but I just really like you and I can't help but smile when I'm arou-"
    "Yes," I cut him off.
    "What?"
    "Yes, I'll go out with you."
    He smiled and kissed my forehead. The next think I new, I was at home, and I was happy.

  7. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    November 24, 2010 11:12pm UTC
    One Last Breath-nine;
    "If you really were sorry, you'd take me back. Please, please, pleaaaaaase."
    "I just can't."
    I flipped my arms around and showed him my wrists.
    "Eric. Look. My scars are healing. It was only because of you. I need you. I really do," I pleaded.
    "Vici, you don't need me," he said.
    I disagreed with that more than I've ever disagreed with anything. My heart couldn't take this. It felt like heartbreak was all I've ever known. I kissed him. After about eight seconds, he pulled away, and turned around and walked away. The most random thought came to me at that second, "either that boy has been working out, or that six pack was a birthday present."
    "Eric," I called after him, "Wait!"
    He didn't stop walking, so I ran after him. I caught up to him, and put my arms around his neck, to hug him.
    "Don't leave me," I whispered. To my surprise, he turned around. Our eyes locked. His voice was also in a whisper when he said, "How come you didn't want me so much before?"
    "I don't know. I just didn't realize how much I . . . love you. You know?"
    He nodded, and just stared at me without saying anything. I just stared back, hoping he'd say something. Anything.
    "I'm already dating Ryleigh, Vici, I'm sorry. So sorry," he told me, sounding sincere.
    "Break up with her," I said with a wobbly voice.
    "No, that'll hurt her," he said, without realizing how much that one sentence hurt me.
    "What about me? Did you ever think about how much you hurt me? Why did you stop loving me?"
    "Who said I stopped?"
    "I love you. A lot. Please take me back," I begged.
    He didn't do anything but walk away from me, like I was nothing. That's exactly how I felt.

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    November 24, 2010 10:34pm UTC
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  9. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    November 24, 2010 3:59pm UTC
    One Last Breath-seven;
    The walk to the stream was extremely calming. It wasn't until, of course, I saw Eric. He was holding hands with some girl that moved here from North Carolina. She was pretty, even though I hate to admit it. Her blond hair framed her tan face and big, bright, blue eyes perfectly. She even had a southern accent. I needed to hear what they were saying. I made myself unseen by standing behind a large tree.
    "Eric, I love you," the girl said.
    My heart hurt, so I braced myself for the next words.
    "You can't even imagine how much more I love you."
    Then, they kissed, and my heart dropped. I wouldn't be surprised if it shattered into ten thousand pieces. Heartbreak is something I've never known.
    I kept telling myself that I would find someone better, and that he wasn't worth my tears. All of these clichés made my stomach hurt. "SHUT UP. JUST SHUT THE HELL UP," I kept telling myself. I took my ringing phone out of my pocket to realize that I have a new message from Eric. Of course.
    Eric: im sorry...
    Me: please take me back
    Eric: no vic i cant
    Me: please eric
    Eric: i've never felt this bad before......i just cant. u + pat.
    Me: theres nothing going on between us, i promise. i didnt do anything..
    Eric: sorry.
    I knew Eric really did feel bad. I just needed to make him feel worse. Maybe he'd take me back. Maybe...
    I went to bed, because the next day I was going to be attending the party of the year.
    Emily Baker was having her anual summer party. This was going to be good.

  10. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    November 24, 2010 3:39pm UTC
    One Last Breath-six;
    The following morning, I made my way to the dock, regretting each step I took. With every inch closer to him, my love increased. I knew what was about to happen, but I couldn't take it. Finally, I made my way to the end of the dock. He was there, also. His eyes looked sad and full of regret for what he was about to do.
    "Hi, Eric," I said with a smile.
    "Vici. Hi," he replied.
    "Why did you want to meet me here?"
    "Well... There was something we need to talk about."
    We both sat down, facing each other. We were closer than I felt was comfortable. I looked at him, my eyes telling him to continue.
    "I don't think this is working out, Vic."
    "Huh? You don't think what is working out?"
    He then said the words I was dreading, "Us."
    I immediately started tearing. "What? Why?"
    "It's just obvious that you and Pat have a thing. And I don't want to get in the way of your feelings, babe. I mean, Vic. I'm so sorry."
    "No, Eric, no. There's nothing going on, please don't do this."
    "I'm sorry, Vic. Really, I am."
    "Eric, come on, please. I don't like him, I like you."
    His eyes remained sad as he stood up, and left me there crying.
    Me: i need u. @ the dock.
    Mariah: coming
    Mariah got here and immediately knew what happened. "You broke up with Eric?" She asked.
    I shook my head.
    "He broke up with you?" She asked again.
    I nodded. She gasped and hugged me, like a best friend would. Like a sister would.
    "Why?"
    "I don't know."
    "But didn't you want to break up with him anyway?"
    "Yeah, but I didn't after he started not loving me."
    "Oh, Vic. Love sucks. Boys suck. You've got me, though."
    "I know."
    Pat: hey im sorry about Eric.
    Me: thanks. i still love him a lot. :(
    Pat: i know. im talking to him now. he says he feels terrible but it was the right thing to do.
    Me: i didnt do anything
    Pat: I know. im sorry.
    Me: thank you :(
    I felt hopeless, so I took my walk down to the stream with the mini waterfall.

  11. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    November 24, 2010 3:38pm UTC
    One Last Breath-five;
    I looked at Patrick and rolled my eyes. I really wanted to prove to him that I wasn't interested in Eric anymore. I stood up after I laced up my cleats. I started walking toward the field, feeling awkward. They were both looking at me, and I grew more nervous. Being the smooth person that I am, I tripped over my own cleats. Eric rushed over in a panic, while Patrick stayed behind, laughing. I was perfectly fine, just embarrassed.
    "Eric, chill, I'm fine," I told him.
    "Oh. Well. Okay, sorry," he replied. I tried not to laugh at his awkwardness.
    "No, it's fine. Maybe I shouldn't be so..."
    "Clumsy," Patrick suggested.
    I rolled my eyes at that, and laughed. "Yeah. That," I replied.
    It was then that I noticed Eric looking at me. He could tell that I was crushing on Pat. He looked truly hurt, and my heart started to ache.
    "Eric, what's the matter, bro?" Pat asked him, looking concerned.
    I smiled on the inside. He cared about his friend's feelings.
    "Nothin', man. I'm gonna head home. I'll see ya tomorrow," he replied.
    He walked away, without looking back. When he was out of sight, I sat on the grass of the fresh cut field. So did Patrick.
    "What did I do?" I asked him.
    "I have no idea. I've never seen him so hurt before."
    We were interrupted by the buzzing of his phone.
    Eric: idk what 2 do about her, man.
    Pat: what do you mean??
    Eric: i think im gonna break up with her.
    Pat looked up at me, smiled sympathetically, and shook his head. He showed me the phone. I was a bit relieved, but even more sad. I was now realizing that I really did love him. What I didn't do, though, was cry. My tears stayed back. They would not dare to come out. My phone rang, and I tried not to look at it. My hands made their way to it, and handed it to Pat. He read the name, and nodded.
    "Hello?"
    "Hi."
    "What's goin' on?"
    "Nothing, but I need you to meet me tomorrow at the dock."
    "Uhm, alright. I'll see you then. Love you, Eric."
    "Oh. Uh. Bye, Vic."
    That was possibly the shortest conversation we've ever had.

  12. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    October 24, 2010 5:36pm UTC
    One Last Breath-four;
    "Hey, Patrick."
    "What's up?" He replied.
    "Nothing...just coming for more practice. What about you?"
    "Yeah. Me too."
    I just stared at him. He obviously needed to work on his conversations.
    I could sense Eric's jealousness. So, I looked at him and smiled. He smiled shyly back and took my hand. He led me to the field, and pulled me on his lap.
    "How are you?"
    "I'm fine, Eric. Honestly."
    He never believed me when I told him I was "fine". That made me realize how much he didn't trust me.
    "Mmmkay."
    "Eric, just shut up."
    He laughed. He stroked my hair and hugged me. I saw Patrick staring awkwardly at us.

  13. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    October 24, 2010 5:18pm UTC
    Should I continue my story ? ? ? It seems like no one reads it anyway.
    Comment please and thank you :)

  14. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    October 17, 2010 8:56pm UTC
    One Last Breath-three;
    I was now crying. I had no idea how I was going to tell Mariah that I didn't like Eric anymore. So I was just going to say it.
    "I don't like him anymore. I don't."
    "WHAT? WHY?"
    "I...don't know. He texted me yesterday saying that he loved me."
    "So? That's great."
    "But I don't love him back."
    "Give it a day."
    "'Kay. Just don't hate me if it doesn't work out."
    "Never."
    I decided to try to get my mind off of him. I grabbed my cleats and went to the fields, my favorite place. That's where I saw him. Both of them.
    "Vic," Eric said.
    "Hiiiii," I replied.
    "Hiya," he said.
    I tried to look cool. But, the truth was, I couldn't. I smiled.

  15. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    October 8, 2010 8:28pm UTC
    One Last Breath-two;
    I waved at Eric, as he came up to hug me. Eric was the nerdy type. He was cute, though. We've been going out for a few weeks. I checked out his friends, and they were all cute. Only one of them stood out to me, though. The one with the cleats. Everyone who knows me knows that I have a thing for soccer. Not just a thing, but a passion. He was the only boy that I knew that played soccer. It sounds shocking, I know. But in this town, it's all about lacrosse and field hockey.
    Eric put his hands on my shoulders. I looked at him in the eyes, since we were about the same height. His forehead was on mine. We kissed for the first time, and I enjoyed it. I could tell by the sparkle in Eric's contact lenses that he enjoyed it too.
    "Love you, Vic," Eric said in a whisper.
    I turned my head, because the truth was, I didn't love him back. I liked him. And there is a difference. In the corner of my eye I saw him. The one with the cleats. Patrick. He was talking to Mariah, so I decided to go over there.
    "Hiya," I said, trying to be cute.
    "Hey," Mariah said.
    "Hi," Patrick said, eyeing me.
    "I'm Victoria, or Vici."
    "I'm Patrick...or Pat."
    "I'm Mariah....or Mariah."
    We laughed, even though it wasn't really that funny.
    "So, you play soccer?" I said, trying to keep the conversation going.
    "Yeah, not many people here do, I guess."
    "She does," Mariah said pointing to me.
    "I do," I smiled.
    "Really? Maybe we can play sometimes?"
    "Definately."
    "Alright, good."
    "Yeah, great."
    He smiled, then waved, then walked away. This was going to be fun.
    The next morning, I woke up at around 8:00 A.M. I went on a two mile jog to start my day. After I got home, I took a 20 minute shower, and went to Mariah's. I figured we were close enough, so I just walked in. She was on her couch watching her TV. I waved once she looked at me.
    "Hey."
    "Hey Vic," she replied.
    "I've got to tell you something."
    I walked over to her and sat with her.

  16. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    October 5, 2010 9:51pm UTC
    One Last Breath-one;
    I took every single one of my razors and threw them out. I made sure there was nothing that I could use to satisfy my need for pain. I knew that my best friend, Mariah, and my boyfriend, Eric, hated when I cut myself. I hated myself for it too. I tried my best to clean up the scars that would forever be on my skin, attached to me, like a tattoo. Mariah was waiting for me downstairs, so I quickly pulled my sleeves down over my scars and hurried downstairs.
    "Hey, Vici."
    "Mariah, what's up?"
    "Nothing, but Eric's waiting for us, so we should probably get outside."
    "Mmmmkay."
    I was wearing my usual: super skinny jeans, tee-shirt (long or short sleeves), and Converse. Yellow converse. Mariah had on a flowy aquamarine top, with jeans and ballet flats. She looked amazing, as usual. We walked around to the back of my house, and I noticed Eric, with many of his friends.

  17. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    October 5, 2010 9:27pm UTC
    One Last Breath-Introduction;
    My name is Victoria Caldaz. People call me Vici. I don't like to sound conceited, but I like to describe myself as upper-class, only because I hate calling myself "rich". I'm much different than the other girls in this town. Instead of dark, black hair, mine is a light brown with natural blonde highlights, shaped into a pixi cut. Yes, natural. A word that doesn't seem to exist anymore. My eyes are weird. They're usually green, like leaves. They change to a celery green depending on my mood. Anyway, I live in what the younger kids call "the rich people section" of town, next to my best friend, Mariah. She's beautiful and elegant. It confuses me, though, how the guys like me. Yes, me. Victoria Caldaz. Things changed when the new kid, Patrick, moves into town.

  18. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    October 4, 2010 5:30pm UTC
    Hey, readers. As you know, my last story, TWO SIDED LOVE, has ended. (:
    YAAAAAAAAAAAY ! ! ! ! !
    Now I'd like to right another one, using my own screen name:
    One Last Breath .
    Please get back to me.
    Should I write another one ? ? ?

  19. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
    posted a quote
    October 4, 2010 5:01pm UTC
    Two Sided Love
    part 34- THE FINAL CHAPTER
    "What about us?"
    I knew what was coming, and I most definitely liked it. He was going to ask me out. He opened his mouth, and closed it again.
    "You're a really great best friend."
    Oh. My stomach dropped. Was that all?
    "...annnnnnnd?"
    "And...I wanted to know if you'd like to go out with me."
    I literally screamed on the top of my lungs.
    "WOOOOHHH!"
    "So should I take that as a yes?"
    "You most definitely should take that as a yes."
    "Good, because I've been wanting to do this for a long time."
    "Do wha-"
    He kissed me before I could finish my sentence. I think I've ever been kissed like that. Ever. Not even Jake could top that off.
    Shitt, Jake.
    Speaking of, I got a text from him.
    Jake: im sorry.
    Me: me too. we'll always be friends.
    Jake: good. maybe that was how it shouldve been from the start.
    I didn't answer back because I agreed. It's good to know that I have him as a friend. My life was almost perfect. I just had to fix things with Maci and Jen.
    I three-way called them after I got home.
    "Hello?"
    "Hello?"
    "Hey, Maci, Jen.."
    "What's up?"
    "Nothing. But I have to talk to you guys. Think you can come up here for a few weeks?"
    "Sure. Come outside."
    Confused, I walked outside and looked around. I turned toward the pool when I heard a splash. Jen and Maci were here, in my pool.
    My toothy smile stretched so far, my cheeks started to hurt. Life was going my way.
    I noticed Jen's glasses were gone.
    "Contacts?"
    "You know!"
    "Beautiful, Jen."
    We all hugged, like in a movie. We all sat by the pool, side by side by side by side. Sunglasses, bikinis, and best friends. I think my new life was going to be perfect.

  20. OneLastBreath OneLastBreath
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    October 3, 2010 4:47pm UTC
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