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  1. xoxojustbrookexoxo xoxojustbrookexoxo
    posted a quote
    November 25, 2011 12:42pm UTC
    for the first time
    chapter 19
    Kameron’s POV:
    Shatered glass lay all over the floor, a bag of weed sat open on the coffee table, and empty beer bottles and other types of alcohol containers were scattered throughout the room.
    The smell was the worst though. It was a combination of all the alcohol, sweat, and urine. I stood there looking around in disbelief, my mouth gaping open, unable to find any words.
    Andrew took one look at me and sighed. "AVERY!" he called out.
    I heard the soft pitter patter of tiny feet and soon Avery emerged cautiously from the hallway.
    "Daddy?" she whimpered.
    "Hey baby." he said quietly.
    "Daddy, grandpa came home early."
    "I know sweetie." He sighed.
    "And Auntie Chey fight him. He hit her daddy. He hit her right across the face with the back of his hand." Avery whispered. I saw Andrew stiffen before quickly scooping her up in his arms.
    "So she left. But she forgot me daddy. I was being so quiet, like you told me to, and she forgot about me." Avery sobbed into his shoulder.
    "Did grandpa bother you?"
    She shook her head, "No daddy. After Chey left, I hid. I hid real good and stayed quiet so he wouldn't find me."
    Andrew pulled her close to him and although she could not see, I noticed a small tear esape his eye.
    "I'm so sorry Avery. I'm so sorry I wasn't here to protect you. I promise you, you will never have to deal with that again."
    "It's okay daddy. I still love you, and grandpa, and Auntie Chey."
    He squeezed her tight for a moment before realising her.
    "Kameron?" He said turning to me. I noticed I was still standing in the doorway and hurridly moved to stand next to him.
    "Yes?"
    "Will you take Avery out to the car? I'll take you home in just a moment." He whispered. I nodded and held out for Avery to take. "Come on babygirl, daddy will join us in just a few minutes."
    Aver wipped away her tears and placed her small little hand in my own.
    I guided her out the front door, but not before looking back at Andrew.
    In his hand was a framed picture of his vibrant, smiling family.
    But the glass?
    Was shattered and cracked, blocking nearly each and every smile.
    -
    Authors Note: Feedback would be lovely! I'm having writers block and I don't really know where to go from here :/ Hope you all had a wonderful and fatting Thanksgiving!<3
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  2. sparkly_rain_bows321 sparkly_rain_bows321
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    November 23, 2011 2:35pm UTC
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  3. JustDropItLikeItsHot JustDropItLikeItsHot
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    November 23, 2011 11:09am UTC
    I look at you,
    and I'm home.
    -Finding Nemo

  4. stillwaitingforyou stillwaitingforyou
    posted a quote
    November 22, 2011 4:42pm UTC
    Can’t Control Love
    Chapter One/Melody’s POV:
    It was after I had taken my last exam sophomore year. My friends Clara and Steph wanted to go out to lunch afterwards. But something deep down was telling me I shouldn’t go. Instead I decided to take the long way home, through the park. I heard a guy singing, and a guitar being played. He was good, really good. I started to walk towards the music playing. It wasn’t a familiar song, it sounded like an original. But it wasn’t bad or weird or anything, I would actually consider buying it on iTunes if it was on there. I saw a guy about my age, sixteen or so, playing the music I was hearing. I hid behind a tree and listened to it. It was really good. He had medium-short dark brown hair and the most gorgeous eyes I had ever seen. He looked familiar, but he couldn’t have gone to school with me since I went to an all-girls school. After he stopped playing I started to clap. I had no idea what had gotten over me. I was usually so shy around people I didn’t know. I started to walk towards him. “You’re really good.” I told him truthfully. “Thanks.” he said while shining his bright white teeth at me. “No, I mean you’re really good. Like good enough to be famous.” I told him. “Nah, not really.” he blushed from the compliments. “Seriously, you’re amazing. Better than Justin Bieber.” I joked. He laughed. “My name’s Melody.” I told him. “I’m Chase.” he shook my hand. “Where do you go to school?” he asked. “Balton Acadmeny for Girls.” I told him not sounding too happy about it. “That’s cool, I guess.” I shook my head, “Not really.” I laughed. “How about you? Where do you go to school?” “Williamson High.” he told me. “No school of the arts?” I acted shocked. “Didn’t get in.” he shrugged. “That’s insane. You’re amazing.” I told him truthfully. “I’m glad you think so.” he said while zipping up his guitar. “Like you could seriously become famous. Don’t let anybody else tell you otherwise. You’re super talented. That song you were singing, what was it called?” He ran his fingers through his hair, “It doesn’t have a name yet. None of my songs do.” I started to play with my strawberry blonde hair, “Well, maybe I could help. I think the one you were singing should be called, Something More.” He nodded his head, “I like it, a lot. You’re really good that.” I blushed. “I’ve got to get going, but listen tomorrow night I’m playing at a bar in downtown LA. You should come.” he said while writing down the place of the bar on a piece of paper. “I’ll defiantly come.” I told him. “See you there, Melody.” he said while walking away.
    That’s how Chase and I became friends. I know what you’re thinking, just friends? We were just friends and that’s it. I went to quite a few of his gigs and then we hung out for practically the whole summer. That summer we became best friends. I helped him with his music a lot. I kept telling him one day he was going to be discovered but he never believed me. For some reason, he was so modest and didn’t think he was good. When in reality he was amazing and mad talented. Junior year started and I started to see somebody named Luke. We dated all through Junior year. Luke was cool with Chase and I being friends and Chase liked Luke. Chase and I still continued to be best friends. My friends Clara and Steph didn’t mind me spending so much time with Chase either. From the day I met Chase I just felt as if my whole life had improved. But then, that summer after Junior year changed everything.
    Sorry, I know it's a bit slow, but it's just the beginning. I promise you that you will love this story!! Also, CHAPTER TWO WILL BE OUT LATER TODAY!(probably in three-five hours. So please check back!)
    Did you like it?! Please fav if you want more and comment with feedback!! I really hope you all like itJ


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  6. Baby_Brown_Eyes_2014 Baby_Brown_Eyes_2014
    posted a quote
    November 22, 2011 7:35pm UTC
    30 ways to make a girl smile 1 . Tell her she is beautiful , not hot or fine . 2 . Hold her hand at any moment you can . 3 . Kiss her on the forehead . 4 . Leave her voice messages to wake up to . 5 . When she is upset , hold her tight and don't let her go . 6 . Recognize the small things; they usually mean the most . 7 . Call her sweetie , not baby . 8 . Sing to her no matter how horrible your voice is . 9 . Pick her over all the other girls you hang with . 10 . Write her notes . 11 . Introduce her to family & friends as your girlfriend . 12 . Play with her hair & if it smells good tell her . 13 . Pick her up , tickle her , & play wrestle with her . 14 . Pick her up & act like you're going to drop her & she will scream & yell let her down even though she loves it . 15 . Tell her funny jokes , tell her stupid jokes , okay just tell her jokes . 16 . Throw pebbles at her window in the middle of the night becasue you miss her .17 . Let her fall asleap in your arms . 18 . Carve your names into a tree . 19 . If she's mad , kiss her . 20 . Give her piggyback rides . 21 . Bring her flowers just because. 22 . Treat her the same around your friends as you do when you're alone . 23 . Let her take as many pictures as she wants . 24 . Slow dance with her even if there isnt any music playing . 25 . Kiss her in the rain . 26 . Take long walks on the beach at night with her . 27 . Wait outside her house in the pouring rain to surprise her when she gets home . 28 . When she's ill stay by her bedside . 29 . Play fight with her & let her win . 30 . & most importantly if you love her , tell her .

  7. KenKen94 KenKen94
    posted a quote
    November 22, 2011 6:06pm UTC
    Sweetie, don't feel like a fool.
    When he said he loved you,
    you were just so caught up in his eyes,
    you didn't see the fingers
    [[crossed behind his back.]]
    nmq/nmf

  8. xoprettylittlesmileox xoprettylittlesmileox
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    November 22, 2011 2:02pm UTC
    When a girl pours her heart out to you,
    the       last        thing        you        should       say       to       her       is       "oh okay."

  9. ThatsSoMeee ThatsSoMeee
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    November 22, 2011 2:46pm UTC
    Admit it
    When a guy gives you a compliment
    You automatically think he is into you.
    © ThatsSoMeee

  10. lollipopx3 lollipopx3
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    November 20, 2011 5:11pm UTC
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  11. xxgraciebxx xxgraciebxx
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    November 16, 2011 5:56pm UTC
    fave for lil wayne, comment for eminem. im gonna marry lil wayne,js(:

  12. lollipopx3 lollipopx3
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    November 15, 2011 5:22pm UTC
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  13. ifonlyiwas ifonlyiwas
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    July 31, 2011 5:52pm UTC
    Why people
    don't open curtains during the night
    6% scared of the dark
    94% scared someone is pressed up against the window watching you

  14. Seaglass Seaglass
    posted a quote
    November 13, 2011 8:49pm UTC
    Beautiful Summer #54
    I walked slowly back home, i thought a couple times about calling mom for a ride but i figured she would just tell Aj to come, awkward. I felt the first rain drop splash down on my head. Seriously?
    Barefoot walking home in the pouring rain miles away from my house, you've got to be kidding me.
    I had been walking awhile and over two miles, my feet were stinging and the rain just kept getting harder. But a car slowed down next to me, the window rolled down. He was older but looked alot younger than he probably was, about 55 i was guessing.
    "Hello miss, I'm heading into town if youd like a ride" He offered
    "Umm, no i think i can walk" I stuttered for a second
    "Listen Im not just going to let you walk out here in the pouring rain, and barefooted. Hop in" He said smiling
    "Oh,uhh. Okay" I was scarred but i really couldnt walk any farther
    He reached over and opened up the passenger side of the truck.
    I guess he could tell i had been crying because after a minute or so we had been driving he turned his head and looked at me
    "Everything alright?" He said knowing something was wrong
    "Uh, yeah. its fine. Thanks for this ride" I managed to smile
    "Come on kid, ive made mistakes in my life too. Whats wrong?" He said
    "Uh. Well I basically just walked out on my boyfriend before he was leaving for Iraq" I mumbled
    "Get him back. Go after him. Say your sorry and go back to him. I made the mistake of leaving people i loved behind too. I never went back and everyday i regret that." He said clearly, i could sense he was hurt. And thats when the picture taped to the dashboard caught my eyes. We where pulling up to the driveway when it all hit me.
    I turned to him with tears in my eyes, "Daddy?"

  15. Seaglass Seaglass
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    November 13, 2011 8:17pm UTC
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  16. TheBrokenSmile TheBrokenSmile
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  17. dave franco* dave franco*
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    November 12, 2011 6:59pm UTC
    After a love movie
    5% Cry
    10% Relate it to their life
    85% Realize how miserably single they are
    favorite if you're the 85%

  18. silentorchestra silentorchestra
    posted a quote
    November 12, 2011 5:45pm UTC
    Flirtationship;
    It`s more than a friendship, but less than a relationship.
    Fav if you've had yourself a flirtationship.


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  20. xoxojustbrookexoxo xoxojustbrookexoxo
    posted a quote
    November 13, 2011 2:12pm UTC
    for the first time
    chapter 15
    Kameron’s POV:
    Andrew's car idled in front of my house as he waited for me to leave but I couldn’t bring myself to look away from him. He glanced at me sideways and half smiled. “You know, as much as I love having you ogle at me, I really got to get home and put Avery to bed. My sister’s been mad at me for putting you first on my list of priorities.”
    I shook my head, trying to break my gaze, but I just couldn’t. He leaned over the center console and kissed me so tenderly that I sighed.
    “Goodnight Kameron, sleep well.”
    I smiled and stepped out of the car. I slammed my door shut and Andrew waited until I open my front door before honking once then driving off. I smiled dreamily as I walked to my room and my brother noticed.
    “Gosh why are you so star struck?” he asked loudly.
    Kendall looked at me for a moment before turning back to the T.V. “She’s in love.” She simply stated. And for once, I wasn’t going to argue with her.
    * * *
    The next day I had another SAT Prep class. My dad offered to drive me since my car was in the shop getting detailed. As we drove through the neighborhood, we passed Andrew's house and saw him out in the driveway shooting hoops.
    I smiled at him and when he saw me, he grinned from ear to ear and waved. I giggled and waved back before he dissapered from veiw.
    "Who was that?" My dad asked.
    "Just a guy from school." I said breezily.
    "That didn't look like just a guy." He said smirking.
    "I don't know what you're talking about." I said, feiging innocence.
    "Was that the young man who had you out so late last night?" He asked.
    I sighed, "Yeah, it is. His name is Andrew."
    "I know his name." My dad simply stated.
    "How did y - stupid Jake..." I muttered.
    My dad laughed, "Actually, it was Connor. He was over yesterday and I thought he was there with you, so I asked him if you two were back together."
    "Oh God dad..." I groaned.
    "Anyway, he told me no, that you were seeing some guy named Andrew now. And that I should be on the look out because this guy is a total jerk."
    "He said that?" I asked intrigued. My dad nodded. "Well, don't listen to him. Andrew is the perfect gentleman." I smiled.
    "Sure he is. And I expect to meet this 'perfect gentleman' before he takes my little princess out again." He said sternly.
    "Dad..." I groaned.
    He smiled and leaned over to kiss the top of my head. I glnaced outside to see we were at the college.
    "I just want to make sure he knows not to mess with my little girl." He said.
    "Fine." I said as I climbed out of the car.
    He smiled, "Have fun in class. Call me when you need to be picked up."
    I nodded then headed onto campus, my head swarming with thoughts.
    What is Connor up to?
    -
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