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Hi im Faye, your moderately average eleven year old. Who am I kidding, I am definently not average. I just really enjoy writing stories, and um I like Witty . I am a major fan of Smosh, Dan and Phil, and uh One Direction c;

Louis4me
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January 24, 2013 9:24pm UTC

When your friends feel like your not safe walking alone;
so they send the Mc.Donalds worker to go with you.
#IsThisJustMyBestFriends?

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Louis4me
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November 11, 2012 12:30pm UTC

It could get ugly
Before it gets
Beautiful

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Louis4me
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November 10, 2012 1:55pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 14.
Mackenzie just smiled, then she kissed him back. But then she remembered what happened with Noah and pulled away. Jonah took her hand and pulled her back in, a lot like Tyler used to.
That was when it hit her like a ton of bricks, she couldnt do this, not with Jonah or Noah. Something would happen if she got closer than she already was and she would lose them. She just knew it. So she pulled away from Jonah and sat there in the sand.
"Whats wrong?" Jonah asked.
"Nothing."
"Mackenzie obviously its not nothing, tell me." He scooched up to her and smiled. Mackenzie gritted her teeth then spilled out the story. About the plane and Tyler, by the end of it she was fully sobbing. And her head was on Jonahs chest.
He broke the silence by saying " I know stuff has happened to you before, but im here now, and I will never ever leave you." Mackenzie just pouted and said" But we can take it slow right?"
"Right."
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Authors Note:
Oooh! She got two lovers! Whose team are you on? Noah, Or Jonah.?

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Louis4me
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October 27, 2012 5:51pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 12.
The circle's in Mackenzie's eyes began to twist and it adjusted her eyesight to see heat. She smiled, You can run but you cant hide. Quickly she sprinted off , running faster than ever.
"You got him yet?" Jonah's voice rang through the small microchip on her shirt. "No. Chasing . Him." Mackenzie replied, then she saw his body heat, hiding behind a tree."Hurry." Jonah clicked off and Mackenzie sprinted over to the tree.
To her suprise he bolted out at her, sprawling her on the ground. He opened his mouth and Mackenzie pushed him off . She slapped him, and held his shirt while he was on the ground.
He looked into her eyes and she remembered the day they met, he held her gaze. She let go of his shirt and sat on the ground next to him. Mackenzie tucked her legs in and remembered how the plane went down, and how Noah had made her laugh and smile.
A couple tears dropped from her eyes and Noah pulled himself next to her. He stroked her hair and hugged her"Shh.." He whispered. Mackenzie whimpered and looked up at him. She fell asleep in his arms.
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Authors Note:
Awee <3I Hope You like it as much as i do^O^

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Louis4me
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October 27, 2012 5:27pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 11.
Noah barely recognized her. Mackenzie's hair was a bright red, and her teeth were sharp. Her eyes were a weird color and it seemed like they had something rotating inside of them. But she wasnt a vampire, Noah could tell.
"M-Mackenzie!" He shrieked and she scowled,"Dont Mackenzie me, you killed me!" He took little short breaths and scampered up, something about her was . . dangerous. Noah stood up and said"I- im sorry."
Mackenzie laughed"Oh you will be after im finished with you." She smirked and Noah's muscles tensed up, he scowled and she grinned at him"Get Ready to run Vampire boy,"
Noah Bolted off
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Authors Note:
I Hope You like it as much as i do^O^

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Louis4me
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October 27, 2012 12:51pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 10.
~Time Lapse~
Noah had resented himself every single day after that had happened. It had been two months and everyone thought that Mackenzie was missing. Noah sat on top of a birch tree, it was about midnight.
This was one of the pluses about living in the suburbs , forest preserves everywhere.He heard crunching of leaves and expected it was a deer, until he heard grunting and saw hands on the tree branches.
He rised just a bit and then an arm grabbed his foot pulling him down quickly. He fell on the ground and grunted, his ribs ached and he heard someone coming near him, he groaned and opened his eyes.
"Hello Noah."
It was Mackenzie
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Authors Note:
I Hope You like it as much as i do^O^

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Louis4me
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October 24, 2012 7:30pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 9.
As soon as they pulled away Mackenzie saw what was happening to him, his eyes turned red, and his skin grew even paler. "N-N-Noah?"Mackenzie stammered, she took two steps back as he took two steps forwards.
She saw his fangs pop out. She opened her mouth ready to scream then he laughed"You should have seen your face!" Noah laughed , and Mackenzie scowled."Not funny.!" Her wrist brushed past a crate and her cut opened.
"Ouch!" She cringed and pulled up her sleeve to wipe away the blood. Noah looked at her"No.."He told himself"NO!" But he was a vampire so he couldnt help it. He popped out his fangs and in and instant he was biting her neck, before Mackenzie even knew what was happening.
She fell to the floor. Noah looked at her"No.. No .. No!" He cried and fell down to her side. He took deep breaths and tried to get her back to life.
"What have I done?"
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Authors Note:
Awee D; So what I write next you guys will totally not expect, i'll give you in on a little, Mackenzie ends up coming back to life, but she is turned against Noah.

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Louis4me
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October 23, 2012 7:37pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 8.
"Noah!" Mackenzie shrieked and he clasped his hand over her mouth, she remembered how Tyler used to do this when they were playing and she looked at Noah. "They think im crazy!" she said once the hand was removed from her mouth.
"Thats why Ive come to take you out of here, " Noah grabbed Mackenzies hand and pulled her out of the window, he ran and ran pulling her along. When they finally stopped Mackenzie looked around, they were in a backyard with a lot of trees. She sighed and said"Noah . . . Are you a -" He cut her off.
"A vampire and yes." Mackenzie smiled."I knew it!" Noah stared at her"Your not scared?" Mackenzie laughed" Well I was at first but now that you've rescued me, there's no reason for me to be afraid of my rescuer." Noah simply smiled at her, "Your the first girl to say that." He admitted sheepishly and Mackenzie felt a longing for him. It had been a long time since she had been held in someones arms, so she hugged Noah ," For a vampire your warm." She giggled and he put a hand on her cheek, then he
Kissed her.
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Authors Note:
Bum Bum Bumm (; I hope your enjoying and sorry i didnt post this sooner ! Ive been busy with Cheerleading! ^o^

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Louis4me
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October 21, 2012 6:12pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 7.
The next day was a Saturday, and Mackenzies mom suprised her by saying she needed her and Britanny, and Carla to come with her to run a couple errands. Mackenzie had insisted that she didnt have to , but her mother made her.
At first it was all normal, they went to the bank, then grocery shopping, and then to pay the bills.But then they stopped by a Phsychiatrist office, at first Mackenzie didnt ask any questions, she figured her mother needed directions to go somewhere. That wasnt the case.
A man came out of the room and greeted Mackenzie, She just stood there with her mouth wide open, staring at Carla. She had told my mother! Mackenzie thought to herself, but Carla looked just as confused as Mackenzie. The man pulled her into the room and Mackenzie screamed"I'm not CRAZY!Stop !" She yelled kicking and pulling with all her might.
But they put her in the room and began to ask questions,"I know your boyfriend recently passed away,"The man said and Mackenzie glared Ice cold daggers at him. About half way through the session the man walked out to go get a cup of water. And that was when Mackenzie saw Noah appear in the room.
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Authors Note:
I'm gonna stop asking for faves, Because I know i have readers they just dont fave it&& I love writing so i wont stop if i dont get any faves.(; So fave if you would like, but please keep reading. (oh and thanks for all the follows)

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Louis4me
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October 21, 2012 5:34pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 6.
Mackenzie locked the door straight when Carla and her got to her room. She took deep breath's and looked at Carla"Noah. He's a vampire.." Mackenzie muttered and took his number out of her pocket. Carla stood there wide eyed and Mackenzie dialed and the phone rang.
One . . . twice . . . . . then he picked up."Hello.?"The voice said" NOAH YOUR A VAMPIRE!" Mackenzie shrieked. Carla snatched the phone and hung up."What is wrong with you?"Carla shrieked."We saw a dead rabbit, not a vampire!" Mackenzie took a deep breath.
"But before that I saw him! He was eating the rabbit.!"Mackenzie said , and Carla laughed"Be serious Kenzie." Mackenzie stood there"But its true!" She muttered unhappily.
What they didnt know was that Britanny was standing behind the door, she had heard everything Mackenzie said. Britanny ran downstairs and told her mother. Pretty soon they all thought Mackenzie was crazy. . . . .
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Authors Note:
Oooh, What happens next!?!?!.(;!
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Louis4me
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October 21, 2012 12:38pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 5.
It was dark outside , so the girls brought a small little flashlight.Then they walked themselves over to the 24/7 ice cream stand and ordered. Mackenzie was holding the flashlight while Carla was ordering. She was just looking around when she saw Noah. He was .. . . eating something.
Mackenzie began to prance over to him, she flashed the flashlight on him and yelled"Noah!" His face turned to her, and she could see the fangs in his mouth. His lips were red , and his eyes were watery. He hissed at her, and then . . . . dissapeared.
Mackenzie stood there confused at what had happened, Carla ran over and handed her the ice cream. "Whats Tha- EWW!" Carla shrieked as she pointed to something on the ground, Mackenzie looked down. It was a dead Bunny Rabbit, with two big holes in its neck.
Mackenzie realized that was what Noah was 'eating' she took a deep breath. This could only mean one thing, Quickly she turned to Carla and said"Lets go home.. Now!"
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Authors Note:
I didnt get 7 faves on chapter 4 but im getting off soon so i figured i would post chapter 5.(;!
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Louis4me
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October 21, 2012 12:02pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 4.
"Hey Carla." Mackenzie said as Carla walked in through the door."Hey!" Carla said grinning, Mackenzie began to head towards the stairs. Carla behind her. "Okay so how was the trip!?"Carla asked Mackenzie excitedly. Mackenzie broke into tears and hurried into her room.
"Kenzie? Whats wrong?"Carla asked when she walked into the room."The Plane, it crashed! Tyler.. Gone.!" Mackenzie broke into tears again and Carla ran over to comfort her, but she tripped over the blade on the floor. "Kenzie.. What is this?" Carla asked looking at the bloody blade. Mackenzie swallowed"Nothing.." She lied and Carla glared at her.
"You'r like my sister, and I refuse to have you cutting yourself!" Carla said walking over to her, she began to pat her back," It's not that easy Carla! " Mackenzie stammered."You just dont understand!" Mackenzie said . Carla looked at her and sighed."Yes I do, but since I dont feel like fighting with you I'll say I wont." Carla said forcing a smile.
Mackenzie sighed and said"Well, I met someone new today. His name is Noah," Carla giggled. "Ooh, What does he look like?" Mackenzie sighed" He's Pale, and he has black ruffly hair, but were just friends." Carla smiled."Oh i see." Then they began to talk about all kinds of things until they decided to go out and get ice cream.
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Authors Note:
Oooh . Feedback Please?!
7+ Faves for Chapter5!

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Louis4me
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October 21, 2012 11:51am UTC

Honestly..
I cant wait for winter. For layers of clothes, and funny hats. For going iceskating with my friends on those cold days. For winter break. For going sledding and crashing into people when they dont move out of the way. For staying inside wrapped in blankets on those freezing days. For drinking hot chocolate, and making Snow angels. For making the ugliest snowmen ever and For having snowball fights. But the main reason I cant wait for winter is,
Its when I get to act like a kid again
(C)Me(;

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October 21, 2012 11:11am UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 3.
The whole day just made Mackenzie feel horrible, She had went to school and people had ran up to her and hugged her, which made her cry. Then they asked about Tyler which made her cry even more. Plus they got a New Student, A boy who Mackenzie didnt notice until she was walking home.
Mackenzie was walking home alone, then the boy came up to her side and said." My names Noah, I know what happened, and I just thought I would introduce myself." He said and smiled. Mackenzie looked at his Very pale skin, and his dark black hair. "I'm Mackenzie. And thanks." She muttered , even though she really didnt want to talk with anyone right now.
He talked to her all the way home, and Mackenzie found herself relaxing in his company. They reached her house and she smiled at him, He smiled back and said"Ever need anyone to talk to , Just text me." Then he handed her a slip of paper with his number on it and he walked away.
Mackenzie put the paper in her pocket then remembered about Tyler, instantly she broke out into tears and ran inside her house and up into her room. She locked the door and pulled out a blade, She hadnt done this since she was 13. But she pulled the blade across her wrist and all her worries seemed to pour out with the blood.
Mackenzie heard the doorbell ring and dropped the blade on the floor,she quickly grabbed a bandaid out of her drawer and slapped it over the cut. She put on a long sweater and hurried downstairs, remembering that her bestfriend Carla was coming over today to sleep over. The worst thing was, Carla didnt even know what had happened on the Plane.
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Authors Note:
Oooh . Feedback Please?!
7+ Faves for Chapter4!

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Louis4me
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October 20, 2012 11:55pm UTC

I HAVE 49 FOLLOWERS...
I Just need one more (;
NMQ

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October 20, 2012 11:38pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Chapter 2.
Mackenzie sat in her bed, they had finally let her come home from the hospital. Of course her mother had let her stay home from school, and she had treated her like a little princess giving her everything she wanted.
But all Mackenzie really wanted was Tyler, she cried the whole day when they brought her home. Never getting out of her bed. Her little sister Britanny came home , she was 13 and she climbed into the bed with Mackenzie."You Have to get up. You just have to before you starve yourself." Britanny told her and Mackenzie looked down at her, she paused then said,"How was your day?"
Her sister sighed and stroked Mackenzies hair, "Fine, a lot of your friends were texting me and asking if you were okay. And the teachers were letting me sleep, because I told them about how I didnt get any sleep." Mackenzie nodded."Now like I told you before, You have to get up!"Britanny said pulling Mackenzies hand.Mackenzie smiled and said "Im gettin up."
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Authors Note:
So this ones kind of boring, but its only the beggining(; Next chapter she goes back to school!
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Louis4me
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October 20, 2012 10:47pm UTC

If you've ever been called
"ugly"
put this as your quote
and whoever sees it must check out your picture
&
whoever ♥'s it
disagrees

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October 20, 2012 10:45pm UTC

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October 20, 2012 7:00pm UTC

A i r L i f t e d
Intro.
Mackenzie awoke to the sounds of screams and the beeping of the plane."Tyler Babe? Whats happening?"She asked her boyfriend."The plane, its crashing." He said. She gasped and he kissed her head. She looked down at the ground, I knew we shouldve taken AMERICAN AIRLINES instead of AIR LIFTED! She thought to herself.
She couldnt believe this was happening, one second she was coming back from a wonderful trip with her boyfriend. The next the plane she was on was crashing. Mackenzie groaned and put her head down.
"It'll be okay." And with that Tyler took her hand and held it in his. The plane went down and down. Mackenzie squeezed Tylers hand. Then the plane collided into something and Mackenzies head collided with the chair in front of her.
After that .. She blacked out.
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Authors Note:
So guys this is the new story! ! ! ! Feedback please!
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