purpleblossom96
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1 decade ago
my wish this year is to win this poll! and u can make it happen! Please vote for me; purpleblossom96 at this website! http://poll.pollcode.com/CNe4 Thanks so much! reply
LuvStruckTeen
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1 decade ago
I like it so far, but somehow I think it could be
better. If you don't mind I would like to revise it
a little. Ok here goes:
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I was sitting in the commons with my best friend
Bethany. It was buzzing like crazy because tonight
was Jessie Wichmiller's big birthday blow out.
She has one every year and it is supposedly the
greatest party of the year. But, I wouldn't know.
I have never actually been invited to one of her
parties. It is probably because I am not popular,
nor are my friends. Bathany and I watched as Jessie
walked around handing out her invatations.
"She is looking at you Sarah." Bathany whispered.
I looked over."No she is deffintley looking at someone else."
"No it is you. Look she is waving you over."
I look up. Oh my god, she so has to be looking at
someone else right now.
"Sarah come here." Jessie spoke.
Bethany hit my on the shoulder,"Go. Go."
I got up and walked over to Jessie. Her pin straigh blond
hair was draped over her Hollister white lace tank top, And
her dark blue white polka doted mini skirt is revealing her
long legs.She holds out a gold invitation towards me with a grin
on her face.
"This is for you."Jessie says.
I look down at it
(then the invation pic you have above)
I got an invitation. An actual invitaion to Jessie
Wichmiller's party.Me, a brown haired, socially awkward girl.
"Thank you Jessie. Thanks so much."
I did not know whether to be happy or confused but I
kept a stupid grin on my face the whole time.
As she started to walk away I grabbed her arm.
"Jessie."
Yea?"She asked.
"We've barely ever spoken, and lets face it Im not
the most popular girl, so could I
ask why you're inviting me to your party?"
"I see potential in you Sarah. You see, you're a
pretty girl.But with my help, I can make you
into a beautiful girl." She smiles at me with her
perfect teeth.
This was what I have always dreamed about. To be one
of the pretty girls in highschool. A girl with tons
of friends, and can get any guy she wants. This was my
chance, and I was not going to let it pass.
"Thanks Jessie, see you there." I smiled and walked away.
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Sorry this is like my way of giving feedback haha. ANyways keep writing PLEASE, because I want to find out what the big scandle is going to be at the party haha! :) reply
MxFaithxM
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1 decade ago
OH MY GOD I LOVE THAT BAND <3 reply
angelieslee
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1 decade ago
you're scorpio cuz 10/22 is the last day of libra (:
Ik that cuz my sisters birthday is on 10/22 lool reply
Lexigirl1030
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1 decade ago
Stare to the opposite side of where your nose is. Pull down the bottom lid slide it slightly in the bottom corner close to your nose on your eye & then move your eye toward the contact, if its place it right you should be fine!(: reply
smgpeace4eva
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1 decade ago
i just found out a family friend has breast cancer.......... so i will definitely re-post this reply
whitegirlswag
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1 decade ago
i don't think all the changes are that bad. i like the notifications, & everything. i could do without the 5 minute post a quote thing though. but, oh well. it's life. hahaha. reply
kd00 · 1 decade ago
same here -.- imma die alone with 50 catz....
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Jennaai · 1 decade ago
......I'm disappointed in you.
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JessyAndKennaAreUGHMAYZING · 1 decade ago
us too
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purpleblossom96 · 1 decade ago
my wish this year is to win this poll! and u can make it happen! Please vote for me; purpleblossom96 at this website! http://poll.pollcode.com/CNe4 Thanks so much!
reply
Nerdy0reo · 1 decade ago
bad. >.<
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sugarnspice · 1 decade ago
OMG THAT IS SO SUPER COOL!!
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LuvStruckTeen · 1 decade ago
♥ Anytime
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LuvStruckTeen · 1 decade ago
I like it so far, but somehow I think it could be
better. If you don't mind I would like to revise it
a little. Ok here goes:
-----------------------------------------------------
I was sitting in the commons with my best friend
Bethany. It was buzzing like crazy because tonight
was Jessie Wichmiller's big birthday blow out.
She has one every year and it is supposedly the
greatest party of the year. But, I wouldn't know.
I have never actually been invited to one of her
parties. It is probably because I am not popular,
nor are my friends. Bathany and I watched as Jessie
walked around handing out her invatations.
"She is looking at you Sarah." Bathany whispered.
I looked over."No she is deffintley looking at someone else."
"No it is you. Look she is waving you over."
I look up. Oh my god, she so has to be looking at
someone else right now.
"Sarah come here." Jessie spoke.
Bethany hit my on the shoulder,"Go. Go."
I got up and walked over to Jessie. Her pin straigh blond
hair was draped over her Hollister white lace tank top, And
her dark blue white polka doted mini skirt is revealing her
long legs.She holds out a gold invitation towards me with a grin
on her face.
"This is for you."Jessie says.
I look down at it
(then the invation pic you have above)
I got an invitation. An actual invitaion to Jessie
Wichmiller's party.Me, a brown haired, socially awkward girl.
"Thank you Jessie. Thanks so much."
I did not know whether to be happy or confused but I
kept a stupid grin on my face the whole time.
As she started to walk away I grabbed her arm.
"Jessie."
Yea?"She asked.
"We've barely ever spoken, and lets face it Im not
the most popular girl, so could I
ask why you're inviting me to your party?"
"I see potential in you Sarah. You see, you're a
pretty girl.But with my help, I can make you
into a beautiful girl." She smiles at me with her
perfect teeth.
This was what I have always dreamed about. To be one
of the pretty girls in highschool. A girl with tons
of friends, and can get any guy she wants. This was my
chance, and I was not going to let it pass.
"Thanks Jessie, see you there." I smiled and walked away.
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Sorry this is like my way of giving feedback haha. ANyways keep writing PLEASE, because I want to find out what the big scandle is going to be at the party haha! :)
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idon'tknowhowtodeletemyaccount* · 1 decade ago
sorry i forgot to write this was the intro, oh well =P
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RaeIsAwesome · 1 decade ago
Lol, I saw this commercial on T.V. and it's hilarious! xD
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idon'tknowhowtodeletemyaccount* · 1 decade ago
nmf
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MxFaithxM · 1 decade ago
OH MY GOD I LOVE THAT BAND <3
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angelieslee · 1 decade ago
you're scorpio cuz 10/22 is the last day of libra (:
Ik that cuz my sisters birthday is on 10/22 lool
reply
Lexigirl1030 · 1 decade ago
Stare to the opposite side of where your nose is. Pull down the bottom lid slide it slightly in the bottom corner close to your nose on your eye & then move your eye toward the contact, if its place it right you should be fine!(:
reply
smgpeace4eva · 1 decade ago
i just found out a family friend has breast cancer.......... so i will definitely re-post this
reply
whitegirlswag · 1 decade ago
i don't think all the changes are that bad. i like the notifications, & everything. i could do without the 5 minute post a quote thing though. but, oh well. it's life. hahaha.
reply
jadensmithsbxtch · 1 decade ago
awe :(
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TuckersGirl · 1 decade ago
I meant hates
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TuckersGirl · 1 decade ago
My dad byes lady gaga cuz she's different.I love her and Jamey did NOT deserve to die! the hater
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lk9087 · 1 decade ago
i was so sad he lived right by me i live in clarence and he lived in williamsville ny
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