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hey wittians
my name is kat, and i've always been into writing.
so this account is soley for various writing creations.
stories, poems, etc.
you get the jist :p
so it'd be great to get some followers on this account and my main one; music_is_forever1
and i will 100% follow back :)
but please check out my writings here and give me some advice if you'd like
comments are appreciated!

i'm really sorry for not posting!
life has been getting pretty hectic and i haven't had the time to do much of anything.
so sorry to those who were actually reading my stories.
once things calm down, i will get back to writing.
:D
Triforce
  1. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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    February 10, 2013 5:54pm UTC
    Away from Home
    Chapter 2
    “Rooms 113 and 114,” the older lady with a million wrinkles told us. “Have a nice day.” Though she was trying to be cheerful, her scowl and squinted gray eyes showed that she was really upset about being there. Seth grabbed the two room keys – one for the guys, one for the girls, and motioned us out of the lobby.
    It wasn’t exactly a five-star hotel. As a matter of fact, it was a Best Western motel where you entered your rooms from the outside. We walked down to our rooms, unlocked the door, and walked right inside. Ashlee plopped on the bed straight away. “It’s not so bad,” she said as her eyes closed.
    “Haven’t you slept enough, Sleeping Beauty?” Natalie asked. “Get up…Actually, just make room for me.” Ashlee slid over a couple inches and Natalie plopped right down beside her.“
    Feels like Heaven,” she murmured with a smile on her face.
    I looked out our door to see Seth and Hayden unpacking suitcases from the tag-along. Obviously Natalie and Ashlee weren’t going to help, so I dropped my backpack on the floor of our quaint room and walked over. “Need help?”
    Hayden immediately shoved one of Natalie’s giant suitcases into my stomach. “Of course we need your help, pipsqueak,” he said in a cheerful voice. “Unless you’re a wimp.”I bit my lip to keep myself from saying anything to him, and started dragging Natalie’s suitcase over to our room. Seth ran over and took it from me before I made it halfway. “I’ve got it,” he told me, and he picked it up with ease and carried it across the rest of the parking lot to our room.
    I turned back to Hayden, who blew a bubble with his gum and held out another of Natalie’s suitcases.
    The biting-lip thing didn’t work real well. “You’re a real jerk, you know that?”“
    Yeah, I know.” He smiled. “Now come carry this suitcase.”
    “Why? Are you too weak to do it?”
    “Nah. I’m too lazy to.”I
    rolled my eyes and yanked the suitcase from him. I turned around and started heading back, but Seth saw me with it and ran back over to take it from me. “I can handle it,” I tried to tell him. “Just because I’m a girl doesn’t mean I can’t carry suitcases.”
    “Why don’t you just go to your room and sleep like Ashlee and Natalie?” Seth asked. “Hayden and I got this.”
    “I’m not tired,” I argued.S
    eth didn’t say anything, but he grabbed my wrist and pulled both me and the suitcase along back to our room. I looked behind me to find Hayden laughing like a hyena, and I scowled at him. I stuck my tongue out, too.
    “Unless you’re suggesting we make out, I’d keep that tongue to myself!” Hayden called, and that just made me scowl even more.
    Seth let go of my wrist at the door and shoved Natalie’s suitcase in. “Don’t listen to him.”“
    Did you have to bring him?!”
    Seth sighed. “I…well, just go sleep or something.” He turned around and jogged back to Hayden, who was still laughing.
    ____________________________________
    Why hello!
    So I'm finally back to writing. At least, for the most part.
    Sorry if I get delayed. Somedays I'm just so busy :x
    So here is the next part of 'Away from Home!'
    Comments? Suggestions? Appreciated!
    Thanks loves <3
    -BeyondComprehension

  2. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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    February 9, 2013 3:09pm UTC
    Skin and Bones
    “No! Wait!" you hear them call. You feel as though your heart is about to burst out of you chest. Pure terror. You've never felt anything so horrific before. The trees are low, moss hanging from branches. Darkness blinds your vision, causing you to trip as you sprint away. You have no idea where you're going. All you know is that you're running away.
    "Robin!" the one calls. Dane. There's a chill down you spine. Your toes are going numb. You dare to look back, and there you tumble. Down you fall into the wet grass, but you don't dare stop. You get back up and begin running once again.
    Thistles of bushes scrape your skin. Your throat burns. You're not fit for this. You weren't built for this.
    "Robin, wait! We can explain!" It's Dane! He's right behind you!
    His hand reaches out, grabbing your arm, and you fall together. You struggle to break free, but he's pinned you down. You're underneath him, and he's holding your wrists down. Why is this familiar? His eyes are full of worry, and you finally stop struggling.
    "Please..." he staggers. "Stop. Calm down. You don't have to be afraid of us. You don't have to be afraid of me."
    Something clicks. You stare up at him and slowly begin to close your eyes. You begin to violently cough from the chase. "Water," Dane says nodding. "You need water. Jana!"
    The bratty girl comes to his side with a small pouch. She's breathing hard as well. "Don't give her too much. We're all thirsty here."
    Dane doesn't acknowledge her. He lifts the cap to your lips, and you drink feverishly until he pulls it away. You ask again. "Where am I?"
    'There's a lot to talk about," he mumbles. Finally, he stands and helps you up. Everyone else has caught up, but no one speaks. They all wait for Dane, who sighs. "We don't exactly know where we are. We're in the Woodland, and that's all we know. We've been here for three years now, surviving on our own."
    "That doesn't explain why I'm here," you say harshly. He flinches.
    "No, it doesn't. We're desperate here. We all appeared here together, not knowing anything. We felt scared like you were just now, but we discovered that there was a lot more to the Woodland."
    "Dane," the blonde girl warns. He looks back at her, and she shakes her head. "Not now."
    "Why not? She wants to know where she is."
    "That doesn't mean you throw it all in her face!"
    "Calm down, Annick," he growls.
    "No, she's right," Jana says. She looks at you and scowls. "Let's just settle down for the night. We'll talk about things in a little while. I think we all need a breather."
    "Jana," Dane warns.
    "Shut up, Dane!" she yells, whirling to him. "Can't you see she's scared for her life? Have some sympathey, d*mmit."
    They all begin to walk away solemnly, and Annick comes to take your hand. "I'm sorry you're scared. But you can trust us. I won't let any harm come to you."
    She's so small and vulnerable looking. You don't quite trust any of them yet, but you take her small, intricate hand as she leads you behind the rest of them, into the unknown.
    ____________________________________
    Here's the next part of 'Skin and Bones!'
    Sorry for not writing in so long.
    I've been so caught up in a lot of stuff.
    I hope to get back to writing now that things are
    beginning to calm down.
    So let me know what you think

  3. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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    February 9, 2013 9:33am UTC
    Away from Home
    Chapter 1.3
    I must’ve been tired because I ended up sleeping for about four hours into our drive south. We lived in Cranberry in Pennsylvania, so it would take us at least ten hours before we would reach Waves, North Carolina. Seth wasn’t really thrilled about driving ten hours straight, so we booked a hotel in Rocky Mount.
    I sat up from leaning on Natalie, who was now passed out on top of Ashlee. I stretched and tried to comb my fingers through my hair, but it was no use. My hair was a rat’s nest. “Seth?” I mumbled.
    “Yeah,” he said glumly. He sounded pretty tired.
    “How much farther?” I asked.
    He groaned slightly as he drove with one hand and fumbled with MapQuest papers with the other. “Uh, I think just three hours. Maybe. We had all that Washington DC traffic crap.”
    “Maybe we should’ve gone around it.”
    “Agh, too late now.”I heard Hayden squirm in the front seat. “Huh?”“Go to bed,” Seth ordered him. Hayden obeyed. Thank goodness, I thought.I poked Natalie in the stomach. She didn’t flinch one bit, which surprised me greatly. Natalie was super ticklish, and for her not to budge, that must’ve meant she was out cold.
    I pulled my phone from my pocket and flipped through text messages I missed. Almost all of them were from Mom and Dad, but I did get one from my other friend Bethany. She really wanted to come along, but she was way behind on homework and had missed two many soccer practices already. Her text read, ‘How u guys doing? :D' I smiled and let my fingers run wild across the keys. ‘Fine. Been sleeping the whole time :) Wish you were here.’ After I sent the message, I plopped my phone into a small pocket in my backpack and looked up at Seth who seemed ready to fall asleep himself. “Do you want me to drive?”He blinked multiple times to keep his eyes open. “Huh?”“Do you want me to drive?” I repeated.
    He shook his head. “No, I’m fine. A little tired, but I can manage.”“Seth,” I warned.
    “I’m fine. Go back to bed.”
    I looked down at the sleeping Natalie and Ashlee beside me. “Nah. I’m not that tired. Plus I can’t let you suffer alone.”
    “I’d tell you to wake up Hayden, but all he’d do is annoy me.”
    “I thought he was your best friend.”
    “He is, but even best friends get annoying at times.”I
    laughed softly. “I can’t argue with that.” I heard my phone vibrate inside my backpack, but I ignored it. “Natalie gets annoying all the time.”
    Seth laughed. “Definitely,” he agreed, and then started imitating her with a high, squeaky voice. “Oh my gosh! I have to have that purse! And Meggy! Have you seen my nails? Gorgeous!” We both started laughing.
    “Oh, and I guess I should tell you I promised my dad that you and Hayden weren’t going to be five feet near me,” I said as our laughter faded away.
    “Oh really?” Seth questioned. “Well both me and Hayden aren’t exactly more than five feet away from you.”
    I shrugged. “Well you’re not sitting right next to me, so he'll live."
    “Well, knowing your dad, it’s probably not okay,” he replied. “But don’t worry. I promise I won’t do anything to you or make you do anything stupid.”“
    Thanks.”
    “But I can’t talk for Hayden,” he warned.
    “Yeah, I know. I think it’ll be more verbal though.”
    “True. He’s…got a way with words.”
    We went silent for just a second, and then Seth looked at me through his rear-view mirror and asked, “Mind finding me a Mountain Dew in the cooler back there?”
    “Yeah I’ll get it.”I
    unbuckled my seatbelt and reached over to pop open the cooler lid. I grabbed a Mountain Dew sitting on top, and as I went to close the lid, I suddenly jerked across the seat and landed on top of Ashlee.
    Our car stopped sideways in the middle of the highway. “Son of a…” Seth growled and opened his car door and started screaming down the highway at some speeding black Prius.
    “What the h*ll?” Hayden said as he rubbed his eyes.“
    Yeah, what the heck just happened?” Natalie asked, and then noticed me laying across her and Ashlee’s laps. “And…?”
    “Getting Seth a Mountain Dew,” I said as if that explained everything. Car horns were beeping all over the place. Seth climbed back into the driver’s seat and started driving again.“
    If that son of a b*tch ruined my car I’m going to hunt him down and punch his lights out,” Seth said through his teeth.
    “What happened?” Hayden asked. It’s what we all wanted to know.
    “That idiot just stopped right in front of me,” Seth explained as he drove and looked on the hood of his car. “And when I swerved out of the way, he just drove away.”“
    Idiot,” Ashlee agreed, speaking for the first time on this trip.
    Seth just continued driving, and his angry mood made us all silent. I was about to lay against the window and stare off into space when he said out of nowhere, “Oh shoot! Meghan! Are you okay?” He glanced back at me like three times. “I’m the idiot! I’m so sorry, I…”
    “I’m fine,” I interrupted. I hadn’t even remember to re-buckle myself, so I hurriedly did so and leaned back in my seat. “Absolutely fine…”“
    You’re not hurt or anything?” Hayden sneered, and I wanted to smack him as hard as I could.
    “No,” I snapped. “I’m not. Shut up.”
    “You shut up.”
    “Okay, everyone, shut up!” Ashlee shouted. Maybe it was Ashlee who had a way with words, because we all went dead silent.

  4. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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  5. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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    January 3, 2013 3:06pm UTC
    Skin and Bones
    “This can’t be happening,” a blonde girl says.
    “It got her again?” another girl questions in panic.
    “What’s happening?” you question. “What’s going on? Who are you?” The questions are babbling out of your mouth. You can’t stop. You feel a tremble in your fingertips.
    “Guys, calm down,” the dark, handsome boy replies. He glances at the watch. “We still have time.”
    “No we don’t, Dane!” a girl with dark red locks yells. “We have no time! This is your entire damn fault!”
    Many of them start to scream. Your heart races. Time? Time for what? Who are all these people? Who are they?
    “It’s not my fault, Jana!” Dane yells in return. “If anything it’s yours!”
    "Mine?” Jana huffs. “Mine?! Are you freaking serious?”
    “Guys shut up!” a small, thinner boy with thick glasses jumps in. “She’s freaking out!” They’re talking about you. You must take a step back to refrain from falling.
    “You shut up, Säl! You have no authority!” Jana snaps at him.
    “And neither do you!” Säl barks back.
    Everyone is talking at once. Fear. Absolute horror. This must be a dream. It has to be. There is nothing sane going on here. All the yelling and screaming gets to you. The skip of one heartbeat is all you need for a cue.
    You start running.
    ____________________________________
    Here's the next part of 'Skin and Bones!'
    If you haven't read the prologue, you'll notice that
    this is written in second person POV.
    I wanted a challenge :)
    So here you go!
    Please please please give me feedback
    It would mean the world <3
    Thanks!!
    -BeyondComprehension-

  6. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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    January 2, 2013 1:00pm UTC
    Skin and Bones
    Prologue
    You open your eyes, and there before you, stands 10 strangers.
    Examine your surroundings. It’s dark, but the thick foliage is still visible. You can just smell warm earth around you. The soft, musky wind rolls across your skin, causing a shiver to run up your spine. Look at your clothes. They’re ripped. Tattered. Your feet are bare, and your toes dig into the grass and dirt, taking hold. You feel dizzy. Falling over sounds like a pretty good option, but you look and see these 10 people staring at you earnestly, waiting. But what are they waiting for?
    The tall dark one. His eyes are like shards of glass. An electric blue, you can’t stare at them for more than a second. He’s so dashing. He holds a black hard core jacket in his left hand and a watch in his right. He calls your name; “Robin?”
    Robin. That’s your name.
    He stands, waiting for a response. You have no idea what to say. It’s all too sudden. You’ve appeared in a strange woodland with a group of strangers. You shake your head, and your breath escapes you.
    “Where am I?”
    ____________________________________
    Okay so this is the second story I will be posting on this account.
    It's written in second-person POV, so it's a bit of a challenge.
    But I wanted to try something different :)
    So thoughts? Comments? Advice?
    It'd be appreciated ^o^
    Thank you all!
    -BeyondComprehension-

  7. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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    January 2, 2013 12:57pm UTC
    Away from Home
    Chapter One
    “I’m not so keen on this idea,” Dad said. “You’re sleeping in the same house…with boys. Jeez, Meghan. You’re still in high school!”
    “I’m a senior, Dad, thank you very much,” I replied. “And I’ll take care of myself, okay? Don’t worry. I won’t let them three feet near me.” I smiled my pretty princess smile that he could never say no to and waited. I already had my suitcases and bag packed since Mom already gave me the official yes. Dad had reluctantly agreed, but he was having second thoughts.
    “Make it at least five feet and we’ve got a deal,” Dad said, giving in. “And you’re packed?”“
    Yes, Dad. Everything’s packed,” I assured him. “They’ll be here to pick me up in an hour…maybe less.”
    Dad huffed and muttered something that I missed. Then Mom came bounding down our ugly green hallway with her arms flailing and wrapped them around me, squeezing me tight. Mom was pretty short, and kind of stubby. She had blond hair, unlike me and Dad, and refused to wear any makeup. “Be careful, sweetie. I’ll miss you!” she choked. I was pretty sure she was crying.“
    I’ll miss you too,” I said. “Keep Dad in line.”
    Dad rolled his eyes.
    Mom pulled back and brushed the hair out of my eyes. Her blue eyes did look watery and sad. “I love you,” she said, smiling a bit.
    “Love you too.”
    The phone started ringing, and Mom walked back down the hall yelling, “Shut up, you stupid piece of technology!” I never blamed her when she screamed at the phone. It was the most annoying ring I ever heard in my life. Mom suggested plenty of times that we should get a new phone, but Dad kept insisting that he wasn’t going to throw out a perfectly good phone and waste his money buying a new one.
    “Who all’s going with you?” Dad asked when Mom picked up the phone.
    “Seth Glenn, Ashlee Rosenberger,” I named off. “Natalie Philips, and Hayden Reynolds.”
    “Hayden?” Dad asked. “You mean the boy from middle school who went around and spread rumors about you that weren’t true?”“
    Yeah,” I replied sighing with an unfortunate feeling. “That Hayden. Sadly.”
    Dad itched his head and then leaned up against the wall. “That Hayden,” he confirmed. “Now why in the world…?”
    “He’s Seth’s best friend,” I explained before Dad could finish the question. “Seth really wanted to bring him along, and Ashlee, Natalie, and I had no other choice but to let him.”
    “You could’ve said no,” he said. “It’d be a whole lot better without boys anyway.”
    “Dad, Seth’s a great friend. We couldn’t say no to him.”
    Dad shook his head disapprovingly. “I don’t like it.”
    “I know you don’t.”
    Mom came back down the hall and started picking up my things. “Seth just called. He’s picking you up early and said he’ll be here any minute, so get your stuff.” She handed me my two suitcases and Dad took my backpack and pillow. Mom opened our cherry wood door out to the driveway where we all plopped my things down.
    “Remember…” Dad started.
    “I remember,” I assured him for the millionth time. I turned to him and spread out my arms. “Now will you hug me goodbye?”
    He smiled and pulled me into a nice, big daddy hug. I didn’t understand why some people hated hugging their parents. It was so reassuring and let you know there was someone there for you and showed that you weren’t invisible to them. Sure, they’re embarrassing at times, but they love you for you and will do anything to help you get through life.
    Dad kissed the top of my head. “Stay safe. I love you.”
    “I love you too, Dad.”
    Just then the brand new clean black Jeep came down the street and pulled up halfway into the driveway. Seth honked the horn and stuck his head out the open window. “Coming?” he laughed.
    __________________________________________
    Hey so this is the first part of a story I started a long time ago, but I decided to put it up.
    I know there isn't a synopsis, but I like to figure out storylines as it progresses.
    Advice and comments are appreciated!!
    Thanks <3
    -BeyondComprehension-

  8. BeyondComprehension BeyondComprehension
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    January 1, 2013 5:13pm UTC
    The child was three years old and knew nothing of crossing mountains*
    Or the ridges deep in the bottom of the sea
    She woke in the safety of arms and saw the gleaming eyes
    She jumped out and played with her dolls
    And looked for her mother's approval
    Warmth and laugher coursed through her
    Yet she knew nothing of the coming road
    Excerpt from 'Fire' by Kristen Cashore; the seventh sentence of the seventh page.

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