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    My name is Alice. Nice to meet you
  1. AliceXo AliceXo
    posted a quote
    July 24, 2011 9:31pm UTC
    Alice and the Shadow Marked Land
    (A Twisted Version of Alice in Wonderland)
    Chapter 6-
    I stared at them with wide eyes. My mom, the one who left me all alone, was...queen of the Shadow Marked Land?
    My legs suddenly gave out and I fell onto my knees. "My mom is...the queen? The one I'm going to kill..." I whispered numbly. "Such an interesting plot, don't you say Miss. Alice?" Jake asked politely.
    "Interesting plot?! Is this all a story to you?!" I shouted at him. "It always has been, I think that we are in a sort of endless story book written by someone for there own entertainment."
    "Jake has a weird way of thinking, just ignore him" Jeremy mumbled to me. "So what exactly is this training in order to help me defeat my mother?" I got up from my knees and dust off my black skirt.
    "We first need to awaken your red blood of coarse!" Cam flashed me a large smile, like he knew something is going to happen. "And we do that by...?" I felt uneasy by all of this.
    "Miss. Alice, you need to be near death of course" Nathan chuckled. "Eh?" the words barely processed in my head. I need to be near death?! As in almost killed?!
    "If your thinking we're going to kill you, we're not, that would ruin the whole point of our duty to protect and serve the princess" Cam pointed out.
    "All right let's begin shall we?" Jake looked over at me and smiled. "Good luck princess" with that said, he set down his cup of tea and chains went shooting out from the ground.
    "When your near death, red blood will consume your body for a moment and will come take over your body, this will tell us if you are strong or weak, how much we need to train you" Nathan said.
    The chain Jake held was a large worm with about 10 eyes and a giant large sharp mouth. "This is the weakest Dark trump card in the land, it should be easy to defeat. Ready milady?" he said evilly. "N-no" I shudder. "Too bad" he snapped his fingers and the chains let go freeing the chained monster.
    It tumble for a few second before looking around, Cam used his ability to make everyone float mid air but me.
    The monster and I looked at each other for a few seconds before it went charging at me full speed. I wanted to scream but it was caught in my throat. Am I going to die here? For the past 18 years all I wanted was to be left alone died, but now I have a reason...
    I needed answers from my mom, the queen of this crazy word.
    That's why, that's why, I would not die!
    I took took a deep breath and let it out. I needed to be near death, and this is near death all ready, what do I do next...?
    'Command the trump creature to stop and return back to its place'
    I widened my eyes, who was talking to me? And what does it mean, back to it's place? "Who are you?" I whispered.
    'Do it now' it only said.
    "I, Princess Alice, the next ruler of this land command you to stop and go back to where you came!" I said as loudly as I can handle. Immediately it stopped moving and started to disintegrated to the ground.
    Then there was a gigantic explosion. I covered my ears and waited for the impacted but it never came. I opened my eyes to see everything around me ruined and crumpled and I was dead center of all of this explosion.
    "Truly a master piece" I turned to see the knight staring at me in shock and amazement.
    "You are not what we expected Miss. Alice."

  2. AliceXo AliceXo
    posted a quote
    July 20, 2011 8:07pm UTC
    Alice and the Shadow Marked Land
    Chapter 5-
    I looked over at Jake was standing before us. "Are you going to...set down that cup of tea?" Jeremy said pointing at the tea in his hands. "Fine if I must" he let go the tea and it started to float in mid air.
    "In the name of the Clover Knight, I yield you forward" Chains shot out of the ground and wrapped around him. I gasp in surprise as he laughed, "I have the power to control the chains in this world which binds the trump Dark creatures here. Which means if I want, I can make every single trump do as I say with a snap of my fingers" he said with a murderous smile.
    "I, part of night, the Diamond Knight summon Lucifer’s child" Nathan said holding out his hands. "Funny how I am given a position I am completely opposite of huh?" He mumbled as a shadow appeared before him.
    "Show your true form" his hand formed to a fist, almost as if he's pulling on a invisible chain to the shadow. It gave a toxic yell before jumping out of the shadow. There standing was a large black dog growling at us.
    "Hideous power isn't it?" He flashed me a wide smile full of evil. "What do you do Jeremy?" I asked turning over to him. He wore a unreadable expression.
    "Something that is more powerful than any of us I can imagine. After all, the spade is the most powerful one out of all the trump. But he has yet used it" Cam responded. "Why not?" I asked them.
    "Because if I unleash it, I don't know if I can stop myself" Jeremy whispered. "He is the wicked one indeed" Jake took his cup of tea and took another sip. "You've seen it?" I turned over to them.
    "Of course, I've been with him for over a thousand year, he's unleashed his power only once in his existence, he took one of Nathan's eye and-"
    "Enough!"
    Everyone stopped talking and I looked over to see Jeremy hand clutch. His hair fell over his eyes.
    "Very well then, Alice is there anything else you'll like to know?" Jack asked. "Huh? Oh, you said you've protected the past princess before they become queen, so who exactly am I going to fight?"
    "You don't know princess?" Nathan said taking a piece of my hair and kissing it.
    "It's your one and only mother."

  3. AliceXo AliceXo
    posted a quote
    July 19, 2011 6:41pm UTC
    Alice in The Shadow Marked Land
    Chapter 4-
    "Before we do, care for a cup of tea?" Jake said grabbing a mid air pot and cups. "No thank you" I murmured. "Suit yourself, I want some" Cam said grabbing a cup.
    "All right, you, Alice, are the next queen to rule this world. And we are your knights to help you out from other Dark trumps, creature who live in this world, who might want to kill you for two reasons, one, to become the next King or Queen and second reason, you have red blood in you."
    Red blood, that's what the bunny doll told me also. "What is Red blood?" I asked. Jake lowered his eyelids and smiled widely, "A truly rare and unique blood that only runs inside the next queen to the throne. Any Dark trump who devours your body would become the most powerful trump in this land. A very dark and sickening power, princess Alice."
    I took in the information and I looked at the ground, "But I don't want to become queen. I just want to go home..." I whispered.
    "Afraid not princess, if you do not defeat the queen in time, then she will kill you" Jake said calmly as he sipped his tea. I widened my eyes, "What?!"
    "If you do not kill her she will kill you and become queen for another 18 years till the next one with red blood comes" Jeremy said. "That is why the Shadow Marked land created us, to guard the next princess and help her defeat the queen" Cam said.
    "Wait, the Shadow Marked Land...created you?" I said in disbelief. "Of course" Cam spread his hands wide, "It created everything here! The trumps, the land, the queen, us even."
    "So did the Shadow Marked land plan me to have red blood? Does that mean I'm created here?" I said. "You? I do not know, I know the queens before you was born here because we served them. This is the first time I've heard of a queen who was born on Earth and brought here. You have so much things to learn, unlike the other queens you do not know how to summon us or even fight a weak trump. It's about time my job got more interesting" Jake said grabbing a mid air chair and settling down with a table, "Have a seat princess."
    I got up and sit next to him as he poured a cup of tea. "Jeremy, mind fetching me and the princess some sweets?" Jeremy sighs and went to the back of the church. "So I have to train for survival and to fight a queen and win or else I'm dead meat?" I asked.
    "Mhm" Cam took a chair and settled it next to me also. "This is just bizarre" I finally said. Jake and Cam made a humorless chuckle, "I suppose but you are in the Shadow Marked land, everything here is, as you put it, bizarre, but you better get use to it."
    "Oh I forgot to mention something!" Cam said getting out of the seat as Jeremy came and settled down some candy and cake. As on cue, my stomach growled. Now that I think about it, I haven't ate breakfast or lunch yet. Jeremy sat where Cam sat before and watched as I took a piece of cake.
    Cam whistled and I looked over to see him standing where the priest made offering to God was. He laughed loudly before pointing over at us and lifted the table and us into the air. I started to panic but then paused when I saw Jake and Jeremy. Jake was still eating his cake while Jeremy looked bored.
    "Each knight has a special ability in order to protect the princess and help train her until she goes and defeat the queen" Jake smile as he set down his tea. "As you can see Cam can make things float on mid air."
    "And you guys?" I asked looking at each of them.
    It suprised me when none answer but instead Nathan took off his cap and walked toward me. He had dark red hair and eyes and half of his face was covered his his hair with a wicked smile on his face that reminded me of the ragged bunny.
    "Perhaps we should show you Alice of the Shadow."
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  4. AliceXo AliceXo
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    July 17, 2011 2:28pm UTC
    Alice and The Shadow Marked Land
    (A twisted Version of Alice in Wonderland)
    Chapter 3-
    Something soft met my foot when I can finally touch the ground. I blinked and looked around in suprise. This was not what I expected at all, flying objects dangling in the air. Houses, water itself even weird colored trees.
    "Where...are we?" I asked Jeremy. "The Shadow Marked Land, where else?" he said raising his eyebrow. He kept walking and I had to run in order to keep up with him.
    "My isn't this little Alice of the Shadows?"
    I looked around but couldn't find where the voice was coming from. "What was that?" I asked. "The Cheshire Cat, it's best if you ignore that thing" Jeremy replied. "Cheshire Cat?" What is this? Alice in Wonderland?
    "You got that right m'lady, welcome to the Shadow Marked Land. This is like Alice in Wonderland, accept in this world, it's more sick" the Cheshire cat said. Was he reading my mind?
    "How is this a sick version of Wonderland?" I asked trying to find out where the voice was coming from.
    "Because in the world, the Darks Trump cards compete in order to be the strongest trump in the Shadow Marked Land" Jeremy answered for the Cheshire cat. "Aren't you a smart knight , Mr. Spade! Everything here is based upon a deck of cards, Alice. Spade, hearts, diamond, and clover" the Cheshire cat said.
    "Aren't you going to be late for tea with the Queen if you don't hurry?" Jeremy shot. "I don't care if I am late or not, I just have to see the next ruler!" Cheshire cat said. I tilted my head to the side.
    "Don't tell me you didn't tell her! Alice, m'dear, you are the next queen of The Shadow Marked Land!" The Cheshire Cat said happily.
    "I am?!" I said looking at Jeremy. He sighs loudly, "Go away Cheshire cat." "Very well, very well I'm looking forward to see you face to face Alice of the Shadow. Until then I'll give you a little 'word of the wise' careful of who you trust, one is going to betray you like Judas" with that said, he went away.
    " We're here" my body collided with his back when he stopped walking all of a sudden. I looked over him to see a old church in front of us. "The other knights are here" he said opening the church for me.
    There standing there was three other handsome guys. There was a guy with blonde hair looking bored while another guy who had white hair and red hair was holding a sword right in front of his face. And then on the far end of the church was a guy hidden in the shadow, I couldn't see his face since he was covering it was a cape.
    "Spade, glad you're here with the princess alive" the guy with blond hair said pushing the sword aside to stand up. "This is the future queen? She looks like a 18 year old!" the white hair guy said examining me.
    "I am 18" I shot. "Allow me to introduce myself, I am Clover Knight, Jake" the blonde said bending down and kissed my hand, "It's a pleasure to serve you milady."
    The white hair guy rolled his red eyes and pushed Jake on the floor, "I am the Heart knight, Cam, nice to meet you."
    I blinked, looking over at the guy in the corner, "And I take it, the guy in the corner is the Diamond Knight?"
    Jeremy nodded, "Yeah, his name is Nathan, very quiet and he tends to keep things to himself."
    "All right, now that I got all your names," I said taking a seat in the church's pew.
    "Start explaining just what the hell is going on."
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  5. AliceXo AliceXo
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    July 16, 2011 3:34pm UTC
    Alice and The Shadow Marked Land
    (A twisted version of Alice in Wonderland)
    Chapter 2-
    "Ruler...of the shadow marked land?" My voice cracked a bit, panic starting to over take my body as I stared at my ragged bunny doll who was now alive. The large creepy smile it has worn ever since I came into the room never left its face as it titled its head to the side.
    "Oh? Don't tell me no one told you! That would ruin the fun of slowly killing you and get some answers! But as long as I have your red blood at the end, I will be the strongest Dark in the shadow Marked land! I'll get my answers from someone else then!" It started to laugh loudly.
    This is crazy.
    Before I can grab the handle door, two large white doll hands shot out of the ragged bunny, one held my mouth while the other held my hands. "Why did you try to run? I only wanted to talk!" It said walking closer to me.
    "You're heart is beating fast like a drum! You're scared aren't you little Alice?" The hands tightened around me. "I really have to thank you, if you haven't kept me for so long, I wouldn't have found you in time after your 18th birthday where you'll finally have red blood flowing in you!" It laughed out loud like a crazy person.
    It came close to me and licked my neck pulse. "Oh joy! I get to have red blood and rule all of the Shadow lands! Now, good bye Alice of the Shadow Marked Land!" I closed my eyes, ready to get crushed by the hands.
    Maybe it was for the best, maybe I am the cursed child and deserved to die, it's not like anyone would be missing me any ways.
    But it never came, in fact it did the exact opposite. The hands withdrew and I gasp for air. I looked over to see a sword in the ragged bunny's arms.
    "What?" It turned to the direction where the sword came from. Even I looked over to see who was the one who saved my life.
    A tall handsome guy wasn't what I expected at a time and place like this. He was leaning near my bed with a serious expression on his face. The first thing that caught my eyes was his hair, midnight black hair that was tied in a long braided hair. Then his eye, one was black while the other was red. It might seem strange but it suited him.
    "Why did you stop me?! I was going to kill her for her red blood!" The ragged bunny doll stomp its feet like a child. I continued to stare at the guy before me. "A Dark trump card? Here? You're a unexpected guest aren't you? It's a good thing I got here in time, I will not allow you to kill Princess Alice."
    I widened my eyes, princess? Me?!
    "Why you little-!" before it can unleash the large hands the guy pulled out a pocket watch. "Aren't you late for tea?" he said calmly showing the doll the time. It didn't say anything for a few seconds.
    "Oh dear! If I don't hurry back milady is going to be mad!" Almost like it forgot about the fight and about killing me, it jumped out the window. "Are you okay?" the guy bent down next to me.
    "Who are you? And what the hell was that?!" I demanded. "Allow me to introduce myself, I am the Spade Knight, Jeremy born only to protect and serve you like the other three knights of the Shadow Marked Land."
    "Shadow...Marked land?" I said in confusion. He took my hand and smiled gently, "I'll explain wants we get to our destination now hold on to my hand and don't let go" he said and almost like magic, I was taken away.
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  6. AliceXo AliceXo
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    July 15, 2011 3:55pm UTC
    Alice and the Shadow Marked Land
    (A Twisted version of Alice in Wonderland)
    Chapter 1-
    "Happy birthday Alice" Was what met my eyes as soon as I entered the classroom the next day. I don’t know either I should be happy or sad that they actually remember my birthday. It’s been 12 years since I have been put into an orphan.
    None would adopt me.
    I mean there was a time when a lot of parents wanted me but they would send me back to the orphan after one week. They said I was a cursed child. The first day I was adopted, someone in their family died, soon one would be sick and die, and then before it can get worse they send me back to the orphan.
    Every single family.
    Everyone in the orphan ignored me because they heard rumors about me. About how I’m cursed and anyone who befriend I would die. I ignored the orphan children eyes on me, there snicker, there gossip and sat at my seat.
    I had brown hair that reached up to my lower back and blue eyes that I inherited from my father. Someone hit my table, snapping me from my thought. "Look the little cursed child is finally turning 18." I glared at the guy in front of my seat. He had golden hair and deep blue eyes, his smile was wicked, he seemed pleased that he got my attention.
    "Charlotte Tang, what do you want?" I said resting my head on my hand. He crossed his arms, "Nothing just that the newbie’s wanted to know why you are the only one not adopted yet."
    I lowered my eyelid, "And you can’t tell them?" "That would ruin the fun cursed one. By the way, is it true that your mom left you because she regret havin-"Before he can finish I punched him in the face as hard as I can.
    I know he was taunting me but no one, and I mean no one makes fun of my past and get away with it. I got up; ignoring the looks of the other children gave me. "I don’t have time for these childish things; tell Miss. René I’ll be in my room is she wants to lecture me."
    As I knelt next to Charlotte, he coward away from me. I laughed, humorless, "You’re pathetic, if you want to taunt me, at least know how to defend yourself." I opened the room’s door and went to my room.
    This is my life as Alice, no last name. I didn't want one because it was his last name, the one who left me all alone.
    As I opened my room door, I widened my eyes. Everything was in place, my bed in the corner of the room with a open window,a computer table on the other corner, everything but one thing.
    Staring back at me was the ragged doll bunny, the only thing my mom left me. Except...it was alive, actually standing, staring back at me with a twisted large smile that gave me the creeps.
    "Alice is back, ruler of the shadow marked land! Alice is back!" its voice was filled with venom. Its voice was like a child who was drove to insanity, curious yet deadly.
    "What the hell?" I whispered as it laughed. My first thing that came to mind was that the orphan was playing a trick on me but I knew they couldn't be this smart to invent something as creepy as this.
    My second thought was that I was dreaming. But I knew it can't be, I wasn't dreaming. Right in front of me was a moving creepy doll, who looked like it wants to attack me at any given time.
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  7. AliceXo AliceXo
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    July 14, 2011 8:37pm UTC
    Alice and the Shadow Marked Land
    (A Twisted version of Alice in Wonderland)
    Prologue-
    "Sit down Alice, I have something very important to tell you" Father patted a seat next to him. I tilted my head to the side in confusion, strange father never wanted to talk to me. I held the ragged bunny doll momma made in my hands and climbed onto the seat.
    "What is it, father?" I asked politely. It's better this way, to treat each other like strangers and not like a family. He always wanted it like that. "Mom as you know has died in a terrible car accident a year ago and-"
    "She didn't die from a accident. If she did, why was there no blood on momma's car? Why was her body not found?" I questioned. He stared at me, his eyes flashed amusement and shock.
    He shook his head and got up from his seat. "You'll get it later on Alice" he patted my head, "Well as I said before, it would be best if I put you up for adoption... I...I can't take care of you any more Alice."
    I stared at him for a moment, adoption? I took a deep breath, trying to hold back the tears. "If that is what you want Father, I'll get packed."
    He nodded, "I'm sorry Alice." He got up and walked out the room. I sat there in the dark, I tighten my grip on the doll.
    I know why you didn't want me Father.
    It's not because you couldn't take care of me is it?
    It's because after Momma left us, it's to much to even look at me.
    It's because I look just like her...
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